Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
Getting your 
punctuation Right ! , 
; 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
A comma signals a pause. (It tells the reader to slow down 
briefly, but then keep going until the thought is completed.) 
Example: 
Because I like writing , I like this class. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
Semicolons and periods signal a full stop. Idea is 
complete. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
Examples: 
I love writing . I love this class. 
I love writing ; I love this class. 
STOP!
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 What is a run-on sentence? 
A run-on is a sentence error caused by running one 
sentence into another, without putting any punctuation in 
between. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
Example: 
We all like grammar we all love this class.
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 What is a comma splice ? 
A comma splice is a sentence error caused by putting 
just a poor, weak comma between two complete 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
sentences. 
Example: 
We all like grammar , we all love this class. 
,
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 
1. Separate them with a period, creating two complete 
sentences. 
STOP 
We like writing . We love this class. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 Use a period to correct the following run-ons and 
comma splice: 
o These punctuation rules aren’t hard I know how to avoid run-ons. 
o These punctuation rules aren’t hard. I know how to avoid 
run-ons. 
o My new supervisor has been making all sorts of changes, 
she is really causing problems. 
o My new supervisor has been making all sorts of changes. 
ELCA 216S h e i s r e a l l y 2 cndaseumseinstger ,p 2r0o1b4 l e m s . Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 
2. Link them with a semicolon; this creates two complete 
sentences just as a period does, but the second sentence 
doesn’t start with a capital letter. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
Example: 
We like writing ; we love this 
class. 
STOP! 
No caps!
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 
3. Join the two sentences with a comma and one of the 
FANBOYS. (FOR, AND, NOR, BUT, OR, YET, SO) 
Example: 
We all like writing , and we all love this class. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 Now you try! Use one of the FANBOYS to correct this 
run-on sentence: 
o I want a raise I want more vacation days. 
o I want a raise, and I want more vacation days. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 
4. Join the two separate sentences into one, with a 
subordinating conjunction or relative pronoun. 
We all like writing , we all love this class. 
comma splice 
Because we all like grammar, we all love this class. 
All students who like grammar love this class. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
dependent clause 
dependent clause
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
 Now Test yourself! Which one is correct? 
1. I’m really good with punctuation, because I have been 
practicing so much. 
1. I’m really good with punctuation; because, I have been 
practicing so much. 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
Avoiding Run-on Sentences , Comma splice, 
Comparison Essays 
and Fragments 
Thank you 
ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 
2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi

Run ons and comma splice

  • 1.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments Getting your punctuation Right ! , ; ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 2.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 3.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments A comma signals a pause. (It tells the reader to slow down briefly, but then keep going until the thought is completed.) Example: Because I like writing , I like this class. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 4.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments Semicolons and periods signal a full stop. Idea is complete. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi Examples: I love writing . I love this class. I love writing ; I love this class. STOP!
  • 5.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  What is a run-on sentence? A run-on is a sentence error caused by running one sentence into another, without putting any punctuation in between. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi Example: We all like grammar we all love this class.
  • 6.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  What is a comma splice ? A comma splice is a sentence error caused by putting just a poor, weak comma between two complete ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi sentences. Example: We all like grammar , we all love this class. ,
  • 7.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 1. Separate them with a period, creating two complete sentences. STOP We like writing . We love this class. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 8.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  Use a period to correct the following run-ons and comma splice: o These punctuation rules aren’t hard I know how to avoid run-ons. o These punctuation rules aren’t hard. I know how to avoid run-ons. o My new supervisor has been making all sorts of changes, she is really causing problems. o My new supervisor has been making all sorts of changes. ELCA 216S h e i s r e a l l y 2 cndaseumseinstger ,p 2r0o1b4 l e m s . Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 9.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 2. Link them with a semicolon; this creates two complete sentences just as a period does, but the second sentence doesn’t start with a capital letter. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi Example: We like writing ; we love this class. STOP! No caps!
  • 10.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 3. Join the two sentences with a comma and one of the FANBOYS. (FOR, AND, NOR, BUT, OR, YET, SO) Example: We all like writing , and we all love this class. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 11.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  Now you try! Use one of the FANBOYS to correct this run-on sentence: o I want a raise I want more vacation days. o I want a raise, and I want more vacation days. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 12.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  How can I correct comma splices and run-ons? 4. Join the two separate sentences into one, with a subordinating conjunction or relative pronoun. We all like writing , we all love this class. comma splice Because we all like grammar, we all love this class. All students who like grammar love this class. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi dependent clause dependent clause
  • 13.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments  Now Test yourself! Which one is correct? 1. I’m really good with punctuation, because I have been practicing so much. 1. I’m really good with punctuation; because, I have been practicing so much. ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi
  • 14.
    Avoiding Run-on Sentences, Comma splice, Comparison Essays and Fragments Thank you ELCA 216 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi 2nd semester, 2014 Mrs. Manal Alahmadi