This is my academic writing assignment. Kindly correct my article and send it to dzakijabbarmahdi@gmail.com thank you.

1. Nama: Dzaki Jabbar Mahdi
StudentNumber: 16211144004
Course:Academic Writing
Protecting children from Sexual abuse
Sexual abuse is an area of human behaviour which, when discovered, quite
understandably often evokes extreme reactions, due in the most part to ignorance, fear, and
guilt. It dramatically effects a child's learning ability in the classroom. Sexual abuse of children is
not an occasional deviant act, but instead a devastating commonplace fact of everyday life. Our
society tends to disbelieve and blame the young victims and underplay the horror of sexual
molestation. Sexual abuse destroys children’s innocence. It causes the victim to demonstrate
poor decision making resulting in unnecessary behavioural issues in the classroom and inhibits
the imperative socializationskills neededfor positiveinteraction with fellow classmates andadult
influences.
Child Pornography and child sexual abuse are two of the most disturbing issues in the
world today. Those are truly dangerous for people especially children. This my paper aims to
show the ongoing discussion on whether consumers of child pornography pose a risk for hands
on child sex abuse offences. It provides an overview of existing research studies and their
approaches concerning the linkages between child pornography and child sex abuse. I will be
including arguments for and against this relationship by some authors, statistics reports and
surveys to reach a good conclusion. I also talk about how the legal system attempts to control
child pornography through actual legislation and a graded selection policy in this paper.

2. Childhood is idealised as a garden, protected by walls and hedgerows, where great nature
evolves them perfectly. It is often envied and respected. However, the children are often
neglected, abused and exploited in reality. The reported cases suggests that most child
molestation was sexual abuse. Some children would be the victims of some kind of abuse if the
parents do not care about their activity. This is also a big problem for my country. In the context
of sexualexploitation of children such as sexexploiters could be defined as those who take unfair
advantage of some imbalance of power between themselves and a person under the age of 18
in order to sexually use them for either advantage or personal pleasure.
Understanding causes of child abuse is important to address the problem in order to
prevent it. Therefore, we need to care with our children if we were a father or mother in the
future. We do not waste time to protect our children from kidnapper or some accidents on the
way and we do not be afraid if you have not ideas to explain to your children. You could start to
teach them cleaning up a bathroom and garden. Those are good because we could also learn
from little thing that we do not know.