Understanding Point of View
Point of view 
In a narrative, the point of view refers to who is 
telling the story.
First-person point of view 
When a story is told in first-person point of view, 
the narrator is a participant in the story.
First-person point of view 
When a story is told in first-person point of view, 
the narrator is a participant in the story. 
I looked down from the rocky 
ledge. I could see everything 
around me from this location! I 
hoped that I wouldn’t lose my 
balance.
First-person point of view 
First-person stories use first-person pronouns like 
I, me, and my. 
I looked down from the rocky 
ledge. I could see everything 
around me from this location! I 
hoped that I wouldn’t lose my 
balance.
Third-person point of view 
When a story is told in third-person point of view, 
the narrator is not in the story.
Third person point of view 
Travis looked down from 
the rocky ledge. He could 
see everything around 
him from this location! 
He hoped that he 
wouldn’t lose his balance. 
When a story is told in third-person point of view, 
the narrator is outside of the story.
Third-person point of view 
Travis looked down from 
the rocky ledge. He could 
see everything around 
him from this location! 
He hoped that he 
wouldn’t lose his balance. 
Stories told in third person use third-person 
pronouns like he, she, his, hers, and so on.
First or third person? 
I didn’t feel ready to try the entire 
Appalachian Trail, but I thought that a 
two-week trip would be fun for me.
First or third person? 
I didn’t feel ready to try the entire 
Appalachian Trail, but I thought that a 
two-week trip would be fun for me.
This is written in first-person 
point of view 
I didn’t feel ready to try the entire 
Appalachian Trail, but I thought that a 
two-week trip would be fun for me.
What would you change to make it third 
person? 
____ didn’t feel ready to try the entire 
Appalachian Trail, but _____ thought that 
a two-week trip would be fun for _____.
What about second person? 
Second-person point of view pulls the 
reader into the story with the pronouns 
you and your.
Second-person point of view 
You feel a sense of excitement as you 
look at the kayak. This will be the day 
you have been looking forward to!
Second-person point of view 
You feel a sense of excitement as you 
look at the kayak. This will be the day 
you have been looking forward to!
Second-person point of view 
Why do you think authors don’t use 
this point of view very often?
Which point of view? 
Victor looked at the moth. He couldn’t 
believe that such a strange creature had 
landed right outside his door.
Which point of view? 
Victor looked at the moth. He couldn’t 
believe that such a strange creature had 
landed right outside his door.
This is third person 
Victor looked at the moth. He couldn’t 
believe that such a strange creature had 
landed right outside his door.
Why do we care? 
Understanding the point of view of a 
story helps us to pay attention to how it 
is written. When we know the point of 
view, we can learn more about the 
characters and the plot.
What point of view? 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
Look carefully! 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
This shows first-person point of view 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
Why might it be confusing? 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
Who is the narrator? 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
Finding the narrator 
Unless the narrator introduces 
himself or herself, we have to look at 
dialogue to figure out the narrator of a 
story written from first-person point of 
view.
Who is the narrator? 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
Who is the narrator? 
Sylvia looked around. “Where are 
we?” she asked. 
“Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” 
“Marco, there’s no trail over there,” 
Sylvia said. 
My heart sank. She was right.
First-person narrators 
Knowing that the story is from 
Marco’s point of view will help us to 
understand his thoughts and feelings. 
We won’t learn as much about Sylvia in 
this story, though, because we are 
seeing everything through Marco’s 
eyes.
Which point of view? 
The wizard looked around. “Where is 
my apprentice?” he barked. 
Eleza gulped. Already she was in 
trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. 
“I need more sunflower petals for this 
spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, 
don’t just stand there! Go!”
Which point of view? 
The wizard looked around. “Where is 
my apprentice?” he barked. 
Eleza gulped. Already she was in 
trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. 
“I need more sunflower petals for this 
spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, 
don’t just stand there! Go!”
Don’t be fooled! 
The wizard looked around. “Where is 
my apprentice?” he barked. 
Eleza gulped. Already she was in 
trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. 
“I need more sunflower petals for this 
spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, 
don’t just stand there! Go!”
Don’t be fooled! 
Don’t look at dialogue to find the 
point of view of a story. In dialogue, 
characters use first-person pronouns all 
the time. Look for the narration around 
the dialogue to figure out the point of 
view.
Look at the pronouns 
The wizard looked around. “Where is 
my apprentice?” he barked. 
Eleza gulped. Already she was in 
trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. 
“I need more sunflower petals for this 
spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, 
don’t just stand there! Go!”
Third-person point of view 
The wizard looked around. “Where is 
my apprentice?” he barked. 
Eleza gulped. Already she was in 
trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. 
“I need more sunflower petals for this 
spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, 
don’t just stand there! Go!”
Third-person limited 
In third-person limited point of view, 
the narrator reveals the thoughts and 
feelings of one character only.
Third-person limited 
Eleza scuttled to the sunflower patch. 
She thought that becoming a wizard’s 
apprentice would be fun and exciting. 
Instead she was here in the garden, 
picking sunflower petals with the 
grasshoppers. 
“Hurry!” the wizard called from 
inside.
Whose thoughts are shared? 
Eleza scuttled to the sunflower patch. 
She thought that becoming a wizard’s 
apprentice would be fun and exciting. 
Instead she was here in the garden, 
picking sunflower petals with the 
grasshoppers. 
“Hurry!” the wizard called from 
inside.
Why this point of view? 
Why might an author choose to write 
a story with third-person limited point 
of view?
Third-person omniscient 
When a story is written from third-person 
omniscient point of view, the 
narrator reveals the thoughts and 
feelings of all of the characters.
Third-person omniscient 
Reggie stared at the water. He 
thought the waves looked huge! “I 
don’t think I want to swim,” he said. 
Quit being such a baby, Quentin 
thought, but of course he didn’t say 
this aloud. “Stay on the shore then,” 
he said. “I’m jumping in!” 
Their mother sighed, wishing that 
her boys could get along.
Notice all the thinking! 
Reggie stared at the water. He 
thought the waves looked huge! “I 
don’t think I want to swim,” he said. 
Quit being such a baby, Quentin 
thought, but of course he didn’t say 
this aloud. “Stay on the shore then,” 
he said. “I’m jumping in!” 
Their mother sighed, wishing that 
her boys could get along.
Third-person omniscient 
What might be a problem with this 
point of view?
Review 
A story that is told from the point 
of view of a character in the story is 
told from ___________ point of view.
Review 
A story that is told from the point 
of view of a character in the story is 
told from point of view.
Review 
A story that puts the reader in the 
story by using the pronouns “you” 
and “yours” is told from 
point of view.
Review 
A story that puts the reader in the 
story by using the pronouns “you” 
and “yours” is told from 
point of view.
Review 
I looked around me in delight. 
Flowers, flowers, everywhere! I would 
definitely be able to take a picture of a 
butterfly here. With this picture, I could 
win the school photo contest. 
Can you identify the point of view?
Review 
I looked around me in delight. 
Flowers, flowers, everywhere! I would 
definitely be able to take a picture of a 
butterfly here. With this picture, I could 
win the school photo contest. 
First person
Review 
Lara looked glumly around the pond. 
It wasn’t a fun beach or an exciting 
theme park. She wondered if the entire 
vacation would be this boring. 
“Isn’t the pond gorgeous?” Mom 
asked. 
Lara frowned. She didn’t think so. 
Can you identify the point of view?
Review 
Lara looked glumly around the pond. 
It wasn’t a fun beach or an exciting 
theme park. She wondered if the entire 
vacation would be this boring. 
“Isn’t the pond gorgeous?” Mom 
asked. 
Lara frowned. She didn’t think so. 
Third person limited
Review 
You stare at the distant horizon. 
There—off in the distance—could it 
be real? You can’t believe your eyes. 
You are looking at a real UFO! 
Can you identify the point of view?
Review 
You stare at the distant horizon. 
There—off in the distance—could it 
be real? You can’t believe your eyes. 
You are looking at a real UFO! 
Second person
Putting it all together 
What have you learned about point 
of view? Write three sentences to 
share your new learning.
Emily Kissner 2014

Point of View

  • 1.
  • 2.
    Point of view In a narrative, the point of view refers to who is telling the story.
  • 3.
    First-person point ofview When a story is told in first-person point of view, the narrator is a participant in the story.
  • 4.
    First-person point ofview When a story is told in first-person point of view, the narrator is a participant in the story. I looked down from the rocky ledge. I could see everything around me from this location! I hoped that I wouldn’t lose my balance.
  • 5.
    First-person point ofview First-person stories use first-person pronouns like I, me, and my. I looked down from the rocky ledge. I could see everything around me from this location! I hoped that I wouldn’t lose my balance.
  • 6.
    Third-person point ofview When a story is told in third-person point of view, the narrator is not in the story.
  • 7.
    Third person pointof view Travis looked down from the rocky ledge. He could see everything around him from this location! He hoped that he wouldn’t lose his balance. When a story is told in third-person point of view, the narrator is outside of the story.
  • 8.
    Third-person point ofview Travis looked down from the rocky ledge. He could see everything around him from this location! He hoped that he wouldn’t lose his balance. Stories told in third person use third-person pronouns like he, she, his, hers, and so on.
  • 9.
    First or thirdperson? I didn’t feel ready to try the entire Appalachian Trail, but I thought that a two-week trip would be fun for me.
  • 10.
    First or thirdperson? I didn’t feel ready to try the entire Appalachian Trail, but I thought that a two-week trip would be fun for me.
  • 11.
    This is writtenin first-person point of view I didn’t feel ready to try the entire Appalachian Trail, but I thought that a two-week trip would be fun for me.
  • 12.
    What would youchange to make it third person? ____ didn’t feel ready to try the entire Appalachian Trail, but _____ thought that a two-week trip would be fun for _____.
  • 13.
    What about secondperson? Second-person point of view pulls the reader into the story with the pronouns you and your.
  • 14.
    Second-person point ofview You feel a sense of excitement as you look at the kayak. This will be the day you have been looking forward to!
  • 15.
    Second-person point ofview You feel a sense of excitement as you look at the kayak. This will be the day you have been looking forward to!
  • 16.
    Second-person point ofview Why do you think authors don’t use this point of view very often?
  • 17.
    Which point ofview? Victor looked at the moth. He couldn’t believe that such a strange creature had landed right outside his door.
  • 18.
    Which point ofview? Victor looked at the moth. He couldn’t believe that such a strange creature had landed right outside his door.
  • 19.
    This is thirdperson Victor looked at the moth. He couldn’t believe that such a strange creature had landed right outside his door.
  • 20.
    Why do wecare? Understanding the point of view of a story helps us to pay attention to how it is written. When we know the point of view, we can learn more about the characters and the plot.
  • 21.
    What point ofview? Sylvia looked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 22.
    Look carefully! Sylvialooked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 23.
    This shows first-personpoint of view Sylvia looked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 24.
    Why might itbe confusing? Sylvia looked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 25.
    Who is thenarrator? Sylvia looked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 26.
    Finding the narrator Unless the narrator introduces himself or herself, we have to look at dialogue to figure out the narrator of a story written from first-person point of view.
  • 27.
    Who is thenarrator? Sylvia looked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 28.
    Who is thenarrator? Sylvia looked around. “Where are we?” she asked. “Just off the trail,” I replied. “See?” “Marco, there’s no trail over there,” Sylvia said. My heart sank. She was right.
  • 29.
    First-person narrators Knowingthat the story is from Marco’s point of view will help us to understand his thoughts and feelings. We won’t learn as much about Sylvia in this story, though, because we are seeing everything through Marco’s eyes.
  • 30.
    Which point ofview? The wizard looked around. “Where is my apprentice?” he barked. Eleza gulped. Already she was in trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. “I need more sunflower petals for this spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, don’t just stand there! Go!”
  • 31.
    Which point ofview? The wizard looked around. “Where is my apprentice?” he barked. Eleza gulped. Already she was in trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. “I need more sunflower petals for this spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, don’t just stand there! Go!”
  • 32.
    Don’t be fooled! The wizard looked around. “Where is my apprentice?” he barked. Eleza gulped. Already she was in trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. “I need more sunflower petals for this spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, don’t just stand there! Go!”
  • 33.
    Don’t be fooled! Don’t look at dialogue to find the point of view of a story. In dialogue, characters use first-person pronouns all the time. Look for the narration around the dialogue to figure out the point of view.
  • 34.
    Look at thepronouns The wizard looked around. “Where is my apprentice?” he barked. Eleza gulped. Already she was in trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. “I need more sunflower petals for this spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, don’t just stand there! Go!”
  • 35.
    Third-person point ofview The wizard looked around. “Where is my apprentice?” he barked. Eleza gulped. Already she was in trouble. “Yes, sir?” she asked. “I need more sunflower petals for this spell,” the wizard grumbled. “Well, don’t just stand there! Go!”
  • 36.
    Third-person limited Inthird-person limited point of view, the narrator reveals the thoughts and feelings of one character only.
  • 37.
    Third-person limited Elezascuttled to the sunflower patch. She thought that becoming a wizard’s apprentice would be fun and exciting. Instead she was here in the garden, picking sunflower petals with the grasshoppers. “Hurry!” the wizard called from inside.
  • 38.
    Whose thoughts areshared? Eleza scuttled to the sunflower patch. She thought that becoming a wizard’s apprentice would be fun and exciting. Instead she was here in the garden, picking sunflower petals with the grasshoppers. “Hurry!” the wizard called from inside.
  • 39.
    Why this pointof view? Why might an author choose to write a story with third-person limited point of view?
  • 40.
    Third-person omniscient Whena story is written from third-person omniscient point of view, the narrator reveals the thoughts and feelings of all of the characters.
  • 41.
    Third-person omniscient Reggiestared at the water. He thought the waves looked huge! “I don’t think I want to swim,” he said. Quit being such a baby, Quentin thought, but of course he didn’t say this aloud. “Stay on the shore then,” he said. “I’m jumping in!” Their mother sighed, wishing that her boys could get along.
  • 42.
    Notice all thethinking! Reggie stared at the water. He thought the waves looked huge! “I don’t think I want to swim,” he said. Quit being such a baby, Quentin thought, but of course he didn’t say this aloud. “Stay on the shore then,” he said. “I’m jumping in!” Their mother sighed, wishing that her boys could get along.
  • 43.
    Third-person omniscient Whatmight be a problem with this point of view?
  • 44.
    Review A storythat is told from the point of view of a character in the story is told from ___________ point of view.
  • 45.
    Review A storythat is told from the point of view of a character in the story is told from point of view.
  • 46.
    Review A storythat puts the reader in the story by using the pronouns “you” and “yours” is told from point of view.
  • 47.
    Review A storythat puts the reader in the story by using the pronouns “you” and “yours” is told from point of view.
  • 48.
    Review I lookedaround me in delight. Flowers, flowers, everywhere! I would definitely be able to take a picture of a butterfly here. With this picture, I could win the school photo contest. Can you identify the point of view?
  • 49.
    Review I lookedaround me in delight. Flowers, flowers, everywhere! I would definitely be able to take a picture of a butterfly here. With this picture, I could win the school photo contest. First person
  • 50.
    Review Lara lookedglumly around the pond. It wasn’t a fun beach or an exciting theme park. She wondered if the entire vacation would be this boring. “Isn’t the pond gorgeous?” Mom asked. Lara frowned. She didn’t think so. Can you identify the point of view?
  • 51.
    Review Lara lookedglumly around the pond. It wasn’t a fun beach or an exciting theme park. She wondered if the entire vacation would be this boring. “Isn’t the pond gorgeous?” Mom asked. Lara frowned. She didn’t think so. Third person limited
  • 52.
    Review You stareat the distant horizon. There—off in the distance—could it be real? You can’t believe your eyes. You are looking at a real UFO! Can you identify the point of view?
  • 53.
    Review You stareat the distant horizon. There—off in the distance—could it be real? You can’t believe your eyes. You are looking at a real UFO! Second person
  • 54.
    Putting it alltogether What have you learned about point of view? Write three sentences to share your new learning.
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Editor's Notes

  • #19 This is a polyphemus moth.
  • #20 This is a polyphemus moth.