pitching our film to the 'dragons' and getting feedback and how to improve

1. Pitching our film
By Lilly, Leighton, Cameron

2. UNTOLD
We thought of the name UNTOLD because in our story the villain is masked with a pig face to create
tension and a frightening atmosphere every time the villain appears. Also the story behind why all
the bullying happened is untold which creates suspense.
Lilly

3. Story line
• ‘Rosie Smith’ is a selfish arrogant young girl that has no feeling
towards anyone.
• She used to bully any people in her school but only one is out for
revenge.
• There was a death within Rosie’s family which caused her to run from
her parents that choose to neglect her. While sleeping rough she is
taken by the villain who is also the one she once used to bully.
Summer

4. Characters
• Rosie the main character of the film. A stubborn, rebellious young
girl that is disobedient towards her parents as she runs away from
home due to a tragic death within her family. She is well known for
her constant issues involving drugs and alcohol.
The real Rosie is afraid, afraid of getting hurt.
Lilly

5. ROSIE
Drug addict
Not religious
No friends 16 years old
No school
No career
Habits-drinking
alcohol, taking
drugs
Fears everything
underneath
Arguments Bully
Selfish
Lilly

6. Villain
• The ‘unknown’ villain is masked by a pigs face as he wants his identity
to be kept from citizens and God as he’s very religious, but the villain
was once bullied by Rosie Smith and now he seeks revenge with
anyone that passes his cabin in the woods.
Leighton

7. Villain
Very religious
Lives in cabin in woods
No family, No
No career friends
Hobbies – finding
revenge
Wants to go to heaven
Hurting people brings a
connection
Was bullied Pig mask on
face
No life, ruined
Confident
NAME IS
UNKNOWN
Leighton

8. Films that inspired our 2 minute film
• Saw –
• Texas Chain Saw Massacre -
The background on our film-
We thought about the target audience and decided that
a horror film/trailer would lure most people in and
make them interested in the film.
Leighton

9. Setting
• Our production will be filmed in and outside of school.
• The rooms that we will need to be used are DT rooms as they have
tools that we could use as props and easily dress the room to our
settings.
Other scenes would be filmed at the tunnel on the Chester road
Summer

10. Audience
• For our film UNTOLD the target audience is based on aged 15 and
over for both male and female as most teenagers enjoy thrillers and
horrors as it appeals to them more.
Lilly

11. Conclusion
• In conclusion we want to achieve our own goal by making a good 2
minute trailer that many people will enjoy and find intriguing.
Leighton