This is my evaluation of the feedback we were given from the panel on our audio advert pitches and how we plan to improve them.

1. Pitch Feedback Evaluation
Generally, I think the pitch went quite well as we managed to include all the needed
information and did so in a smooth and controlled way. The observers wrote that they liked
the pack we gave them, which contained the risk assessment, production schedule and
script and they also commented that they liked the script and the fact that we broke it down
in the pitch and explain each technique used, alongside the use of the sound effects that
were incorporated and flowed well with the script.
2 of the panel members commented on the fact that we should have introduced ourselves
and our company in more detail, however the only rectifiable comment was that the sixth
form script didn’t include anything about its academic success so we are going to tweak that
slightly, probably by adding in another vox pop line talking about grades and university. The
only other comment was that neither advert lasted 30 seconds when we read them out but
we will ensure they are the full 30 second duration after we add all the sound effects and
pace the ads well.