The document provides mock up suggestions for improving a magazine, including making the front cover writing white instead of black in the snowflake corner, making the masthead bigger and standing out more, adding more images to the contents page to make it 50% images, adding a lipstick kiss and playing with shapes of puffs, and using more slang words. It also recommends more colorful double page spreads with question and answer based body copy and slightly bigger pictures.

1. Mock Ups

2. Front Cover
Writing is going to be white rather
than black - in the snowflake shaped
puff at the bottom left hand corner.
More in line and bold,
positioned differently and
more out the way of Daniel.
Use more colours that
reflect the pop genre.
Make the Masthead bigger so it
stands out more.

3. Contents Page
Add more images to make it
50/50 as it is a convention.
Add a lipstick kiss where it says
“love meg xx”
Play around with different
shapes for the puff that reads
“comps and prizes” as well as
the one that says “top 20
fashion tips, shh”
Use more more “slang
words” - mode of address.
For example in the editors
letter say “hot goss” instead
of gossip”.

4. Double Page Spread
More colours that reflect genre.
The body copy will be question
and answer based.
The pictures will be slightly
bigger.