From feedback on an audience, the creator changed fonts, made the lead story longer, added a caption and jump lines to stories, filled gaps by making a plug bigger, changed coloring from orange to red to stand out more as other elements were also red, and felt the final product was vibrant with colors and not many gaps, easily selling as a brand while catching teenagers' eyes as modern and targeted to them.

1. From my audience feedback, I changed a few things, first of all I changed the fonts of my
headlines, and story, I also made my lead story longer to fill in any gaps. I also added a
caption to the photo and added jump lines to both stories, as well as trying to fill in some
of the gaps, for instance making the plug in the top right hand corner bigger, I also
changed the colouring from orange to red to make it stand out more, I also thought the
colour went better as ‘Noise’ and ‘Free’ are also in red.
I quite like my end product, as I think it is quite vibrant with all the different
colours, I also think now there are not so many gaps and white spaces, it could quite
easily sell as a brand. I also think it would catch teenager’s eyes, as it is modern,
and targeted at a younger audience.