The document discusses changes made to a teaser poster based on feedback received. Feedback led to changing the font from "Coming Soon" to "Windsor Hands", removing color from the skyline font as it looked too "cartoony", and repositioning various elements as the original design was "too crowded". Additional changes included brightening the page by adding a yellow color and repositioning the masthead from the middle to improve attention on other elements based on feedback.

1. To make it more appealing for the
target audience I made some changes
to my teaser poster:
After getting that original
feedback about my “Coming
Soon” font choice not
working, my final choice was
the Windsor Hands font,
which I feel works really well
now.
It was audience feedback that
lead me to change the skyline
font after being told it looked
too “cartoony”. I made some
changes and took out the
colour.

2. Feedback let me know that my
original design was actually “too
crowded” the sub-heading in my
opinion was in a bad position as it
seemed to really take focus away
from her face. So I changed where I
placed a number of things!
From my feedback it was suggested I tried
to brighten the page up a bit, so I went for
the yellow colour for some of the sell lines,
which I think actually works really well
with the other colours and creates a good
balance.
It was my own and actually my other
students in my class’s feedback that led me
to change the position of my masthead. It
was agreed that positioning it in the middle
was no only less conventional, but it
definitely took attention away from the rest
of the page. I much prefer how it is now!