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THE EV LUA
      A TION




           Holly Redmond
In what ways does your media product use, develop or
         challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
S IMILARITIES IN FRONT COVER

                         Both use plain white masthead in capitals and
                         quite bold, white is not complicated but stands
                         out on the page and looks clean.


                         Close up main image where eyes and lip on the
                        person stand out a lot. Main image placed behind
                                  the masthead as the image is close up.

                         Barcode in bottom right hand corner.


                        All text on cover lines in capitals, making it seem
                        like what is written is important and to also catch
                                                           the readers eye.


                         Majority of text on my front cover filled in white
                         and VIBE magazine in black. Both plain yet
                         sophisticated colours, not over the top.
DIFFERENCES IN FRONT COVER


                     My magazine has a header and a footer
                     whereas VIBE magazine doesn’t have anything.
                     I included a header and a footer to put more
                     information on the front cover of the magazine
                     as I didn’t want to crowd the front with lots of
                     sell lines so that it didn’t look cluttered.
                      My image takes up the whole cover so there is
                             no need for a background whereas VIBE
                      magazine has a plain blue background. I would
                          have included a background if I had used a
                      different image but the image I chose I thought
                           would look good covering the whole page.

                     VIBE magazine contains less text on the page
                     and has one overly dominant sell line whereas
                     my magazine has more sell lines and also the
                     font size of all the text is pretty much the same.
                     I chose to do this as I have more text on my
                     page and wanted to fit it all in without it looking
                     cluttered.
                          My image has a more sepia effect and VIBE
                       magazines main image of Rihanna has a black
                       and white effect. I wanted this effect because it
                        brought out the eyes and lips better than black
                                                              and white.
                     The person in my main image is looking straight
                     into the camera making it obvious she knows
                     the photo is being taken whereas in the image
                     of Rihanna it is unsure if she knows the photo is
                     being taken as she is looking away and not
                     really posing. I did this because I wanted the girl
                     in the image to look powerful and make a
                     statement as she is supposed to be an
                     upcoming artist whereas Rihanna is already
                     well known and established.
S IMILARITIES IN CONTENTS PAGE


                        I got the style of separating the letters in
                        ‘contents’ from VIBE magazine as it looks more
                        creative and gives an edge to the contents
                        page. It also allowed more space on the page
                        as I could place it in one corner on the page
                        instead of taking up the top of the page.
                             Both magazines use the main image as a
                       background, they both take up the whole page .
                           I did this as the photo is of good quality so I
                                              didn’t need a background.

                        Both magazine have a smaller picture in the
                        corner, which has a white background.

                         Both magazines contain headings for the text,
                            separating the content of the magazine into
                       different sections making it easier for the reader
                                                                 to follow.

                        All of the text on my contents page is in capital
                        letters and the majority of text on VIBE contents
                        is also in capitals. I did this to make it look more
                        clean on the page and look more sophisticated
                        and stand out more.

                           In both magazines, the smaller image in the
                             picture is looking straight into the camera.
DIFFERENCES IN CONTENTS PAGE

                      The main image in VIBE magazine is looking
                      straight into the camera but my main image is
                      looking away from the camera. I got the person
                      to look out of the view of the camera because it
                      is obvious she is already doing a certain pose
                      so she knows the photo is being taken and I
                      wanted to contents to look a little different to the
                      pose shown in my front cover.
                      The smaller photo in my magazine contains text
                      showing where to go in the magazine to find out
                             more and the image is also tilted and has a
                             black border around it whereas the smaller
                               image in VIBE contents is showing you a
                       magazine cover, does not have a border and is
                       not tilted. I wanted my smaller image to also be
                       noticed which is why I added a border because
                            the main image is so strong that without it, it
                                                  might not be noticed.
                       The background on my main image is green as
                       I got the person to stand in front of my green
                       wallpaper whereas the VIBE contents has other
                       people in the background and shows the setting
                       of the image. I choose a plain background as
                       her outfit has colour in it already and I wanted
                       white text.
                         Some of the text in VIBE contents has smaller
                           text underneath it adding extra information in
                          the page whereas mine doesn’t. I thought my
                            page had enough text on it without including
                                                                anymore.
                       My main image has colour and VIBE main
                       image is in black and white. I wanted colour in
                       my magazine as wanted it to be as bright as
                       possible.
                       My image is of younger people than the people
                       in VIBE magazine as I am aiming my magazine
                       at a younger audience.
S IMILARITIES IN DOUBLE PAGE S PREAD




                                       Both images are on the left page and take up
                                       the whole page. I chose to do this as I thought
                                       the image was good so wanted to make it more
                                       dramatic and big.


                                       I used VIBE magazine to get the idea of using
                                       initials of the person in big on the right page with
                                       two different colours, one being black and the
                                       other being red going with the theme of the
                                       page.

                                       Both images have page number, mine is in the
                                       bottom corners of each page and VIBE
                                       magazines is in the top right hand corner.


                                       Both images are focused on the camera and
                                       are mid close ups.

                                       Both pages have two columns of text in them.
DIFFERENCES IN DOUBLE PAGE S PREAD




                                 My main image has a white background
                                 whereas VIBE double page spread has a black
                                 background. I chose a white background as the
                                 black background made the image look
                                 obviously cropped out more than the white
                                 background. The white background also goes
                                 with the white background to the text.


                                 My page has lines at the top as I wanted to
                                 keep the theme of lines as was on my contents,
                                 I also added a red line to go with the double
                                 page spread. VIBE magazine doesn’t have any
                                 pattern apart from the text and image.



                                 Although both pages have two columns, the
                                 layout of my text is where the first column is set
                                 to the right and the right column is set to the left.
                                 VIBE magazines text is justified. I wanted all of
                                 my text to look like its all going into the middle of
                                 the page which is why I set out my text in that
                                 way.
How does your media product represent
             particular social groups?
Professional image                                                          Professional image
                                                  Female R&B singers are portrayed to be very
                                                  strong, powerful women and this shows through
                                                  their music as well as their image.
                                                  R&B singers usually look very expensive with
                                                  flashy clothes and their own style, for example
                                                  Rihanna’s hair style changes frequently and her
                                                  image is quirky and cool. I want my images for
                                                  my magazine reflect the same idea a lot which
                                                  is why I chose to take photographs of a girl with
                                                  big, choppy short hair and a girl with her own
                                                  individual style and also big hair as this goes
                                                  with the conventions of R&B, pop and hip hop.
                                                  Male R&B singers are usually portrayed to have
                                                  a lot of respect and are looked up to because
        




                                                                                                                             
                                                  they have a high reputation.

                                                  Although female R&B singers look powerful and
                           My image                                                                           My image
                                                  in control, they also look attractive and sexy.
                                                  Therefore my magazine attracts both a female
                                                  and male audience as the images of the girls
                                                  are strong making other females aspire to be
                                                  like them but as they are attractive it might
                                                  make males want the magazine as they are
                                                  attracted to them.
                                                  They are also known for their quirky style which
                                                  is commonly called ‘swag’, a word that is used
                                                  in relation to R&B and hip hop music.




I looked at images of
well established,
powerful female artists
and wanted to recreate                                                              
the type of look they
portray.                                                                                                          My image




                                  Professional image
What kind of media institution might
         distribute your media product and why?


IPC Media produces over 85 media brands
Two thirds of their readers are women
Their brands when they come together reach over
20 million users each month.
They have knowledge in the music genre as they
distribute NME magazine.
Publishing my magazine will be a good
opportunity to expand their audiences and genres
of music as the audience I am targeting is
younger than the audience for NME and my genre
is also different so this would expand their
knowledge and would also be good for my
magazine as they are a well established, well
known and trustworthy company.
Who would the audience be for your
                                       media product?
The audience for my media product will be aimed at
both genders even though in my magazine the images
are only of women, they should also attract men as the
women are attractive in the images.

People that enjoy R&B, hip hop and pop music, and
people that enjoy going to gigs and concerts that are of
this genre will also be my target audience for my
magazine.

My target audience will not just be aimed at Afro-
Caribbean which is the stereotypical audience but will
be targeted at people from different backgrounds
including ethnic minorities to broaden the audience.

I am also targeting both women that are confident and
powerful and can relate to the women in the magazine
and women that are not as confident and aspire to be
like the women in the magazine.
Typical Target Audience

  Tom, 17 year old Student from
  Solihull, favourite colour blue.
  Likes music, socializing, going to
  the gym, high interest in fashion.
  Dislikes rock music.
  Favourite music – MOBO (music
  of black origin), R&B.
  Goes to concerts, listens to
  music on iPod at the gym,
  majority of the time downloads
  music onto his iPod or CDs.
Typical Target Audience

 Name: James Browning
 Aged: 18
 Ethnicity: White British
 Occupation: sales assistant
 Favourite Colour: Blue
 Favourite Artists: Eminem, Gyptian, Vybz Kartel
 Interests: Jogging, socializing, bowling
 High interest in music, goes to concerts, downloads
 music to his iPod, collects vinyl's
How did you
                      attract/
                             address your
                                audience?
My initial target audience indicated certain things
they wanted from a magazine before I made my
magazine…
Target Audience based on focus group
For this task I asked a 4 people, a mix of male and female, who were interested in the Pop, Hip Hop and R&B genre what they would like in that genre of
magazine. I then summarised there results to see what would be best suited for my target audience in the magazine.
I asked them a range of questions and wrote down the main responses:
Summary of results
 Section 1 – the front cover (QUESTIONS 1-4)
1. Front cover – what images would you like?
The images on the front cover should be one striking image, which should be of a male or female that is attractive to the audience and current at the
time.
would like to see on the front cover e.g. sell lines?
Exclusive interviews with current performers that relate to the genre, upcoming events that the reader may not have known otherwise, gossip about the
artists/bands and fashion that is linked to the artists/bands that will be featured in the magazine to show the magazine has extra to offer.
 3.What colours would be appropriate?
Bright, loud colours which will pop out at the audience and also relate to the style of music.
4. What type of language would you expect?
The language should be informal, easy to read and casual. It should also use urban words that are used by the artists/bands as the audience listen to
them already so will be able to relate to that style of writing.
Section 2 – the contents page (QUESTIONS 5-8)
Contents page - what type of images would you like and how many?
There should be more then one image on the contents page, to show what will be featured inside the magazine but there also should be a dominant
image.
What would you want to be contained within the magazine?
The magazine should offer a wide range of things, all of which relating to hip hop, pop and R&B. it should also offer more than just about music such as
fashion and gossip to keep the audience interested.
How much images and text would you expect?
There should be a few images and some text to tell the audience about what features in the magazine and a message from the editor to make the
magazine feel friendlier. Images and text should be combined to both help show what will be inside the magazine.
What type of language?
The language should be informal and friendly, and the type of words used should relate to the genre the magazine is based on.
Section 3- the double page spread article (QUESTIONS 9-12)
Double page – what choice of images would you want?
There should be one main image that consists of who the article is about and should portray them in the way that reflects the artist/band in a positive
way. Depending on the artist/band they should be shown in the picture in the same light that they would be shown in their music videos or through the
songs they sing.
What would you prefer the article to be about?
A star that is current at the time and maybe one that has had bad press in the past so that during the interview you can see the real them and not what is
portrayed of them. Also about their personal life and information that you would be surprised at or never knew before.
How would you expect the language to be?
The language should be chatty and informal, and relaxed to suggest conversation rather than just questions and answers if it is an interview. It should
reflect how the artist talks to people themselves so shouldn’t be structured but flowing.
Would you prefer more image or text based articles?
Their should be a variety of pictures that link to the text content but there should be enough text that the reader has gained information about the artist.
There shouldn’t be too much text so not to bore the reader but shouldn’t be overcrowded with pictures as it would not give enough information.
How did you attract/
                                              address your
                                                 audience?
   I attracted my audience to my magazine by having lots of sell lines that
might capture the readers attention, such as ‘The Only Interview’ and ‘The
                                                          Glam Life of’ etc.
    I used a dominant image with bold eyes and mouth to stand out and a
 choppy fringe coming around the persons face which looks a bit different
      to the usual hairstyle. The image is a powerful and strong one which
                                    relates to the audience I have aimed at.

I set a reasonable price that all of my target audience will be able to afford.


    I addressed my audience by not using overly formal language but used
                               simple and easy to understand language.


         My target audience wanted one dominant image with easy to read,
      interesting text on the front. They also wanted bright and bold colours
        which I have not included as much as I could have but I went for my
relaxed colours instead to make the magazine look more sophisticated and
    link with the genre as if I used bright bolder colours it may have related
                                                   more to a pop magazine.
How did you attract/
                                      address your
                                         audience?
   The images I have used should attract the target audience
        because I have used people of different cultures and
    backgrounds to attract people from different backgrounds
                                                      also.

  The main image is dominating the page so it is also used as
         a background to make the contents more unique and
      interesting and the smaller image is tilted. Both of these
       changes I have made may further attract the audience.

 My contents page addresses the reader through the regular
  and featured articles listed because the singers and bands
      listed would attract the audience as it is music they are
                            familiar with and most likely enjoy.

   I have used all capital letters when writing my text and the
      writing is in filled in white to stand out better against the
   background. This will attract the audience as it will capture
                                                          the eye.

 My target audience wanted a few images with one dominant
image, I have used two images and one dominant image that
           stands out. The target audience also wanted more
  information than music, such as gossip and fashion, which I
  have suggested will be in my magazine in my contents. My
  target audience wanted me to combine image and text so I
      added some text onto my smaller image to indicate what
 would be inside and also had text all around my main image.
How did you attract/
                                                  address your
                                                     audience?

     The colour scheme I have used will attract my
 audience as over the two pages the red flows from
       parts of the text to the colours in the image.

          The big heading at the front will capture the
      audiences eye and the strap line which is all in
   capitals will make the reader want to read on as it
gives an insight of what will be included in the article.

The big image which dominates the whole of the left
 page is interesting and the girl looks powerful in the
  image which will attract both males and females to
the magazine as females with either aspire or relate
        to the image and men may find it attractive.
 My target audience wanted a dominant image of the
      artist being interviewed that portrayed them in a
positive way, the image looks powerful and strong so
 I feel this is a positive image for the artist. They also
wanted a new and upcoming artist so I have included
                             that she is quite a new star.
Audience Feedback

LIKED MOST ABOUT THE                                   HOW TO IMPROVE THE
MAGAZINE                                               MAGAZINE

                       Realistic                      Masthead on front cover to
                                                      contrast with image a bit better
 Professional – very good images
                and manipulation                      Colours on cover don’t show up
                 Use of images                        very well




                                                                        Overall, how would you rate this magazine?

                                                4.5

                                                 4

                                                3.5

                                                 3
                             Number of people




                                                2.5
                                                                                                                            Number of people
                                                 2

                                                1.5

                                                 1

                                                0.5

                                                 0
                                                        Excellent   Very good         Good             OK            Poor
What have you learnt about technologies from
    the process of constructing this product?




      Using cameras to take
     photos for my magazine,       Using InDesign to create
     using different shot types,   my magazine base and
    editing the way the camera     then my final magazine,
    takes the picture using the    inserting things into the
      settings on the camera.                                  Using PhotoShop I was
                                    pages and also editing
                                                                    able to edit the
                                    things using InDesign.
                                                               photographs I had taken
                                                                on my camera to make
                                                                   them look more
                                                                   professional and
                                                                manipulate the image.
Front cover                                                 Using Photoshop
                                   I have edited my image
                                   for my front cover using
                                   Photoshop. I have made
                                   the image darker by
                                   playing around with levels
                                   and colour balance to
                                   make it look a bit different
                                   to the original image,
                                   darker and more
                                   professional.

Original image for front cover




           I put my image and
         masthead together to
         make the base of my
        magazine cover and to                               After editing my main image in Photoshop I
        make sure that it went                              then made my masthead ‘VOLUME’. The
              well. I placed the                            font used was Agency FB. I edited the
      masthead just above the                               masthead by changing the font to a style
       eyes as it will make the                             which I feel makes it look more like hip
      eyes stand out more and                               hop/R&B/pop genre and made it larger. I
            look more striking.                             also changed the colour to white as it will
                                                            go well with my main image and as the
                                                            image has darkness to it the white would
                                                            contrast well.

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Using PhotoShop (cont)
                                  I then added some cover                     As I knew the image I am using for my contents page
                                  lines and strap lines to the                has a green background, I added the same colour to
                                  page mainly using the font                  my swatches and used this colour to edit some of the
                                  ‘impact’ as it is bold and                  text on the front cover. I added some boxes that were
                                  stands out yet it also                      filled with the green and placed them behind some text
                                  looks sophisticated and                     which I have made black to make certain words stand
                                  clean. I started off with the               out on the page that I think the audience would be
                                  text being all white as I                   attracted to. I also edited some of the colour of the text
                                  knew I wanted my main                       and used effects such as drop shadow, inner shadow
                                  colour on the page to be                    and inner glow to make them pop out. I also added
                                  white.                                      ‘NEW’ in green inside the ‘O’ in my masthead so that
                                                                              my masthead had an element of the green on it to tie in
                                                                              with the theme.




                                  I edited the barcode
                             slightly so that instead of                  When I was happy with
                              it being black lines on a               everything I had edited on
                              white background it was                         the page and where
                                 white lines on a black                  everything was, I added
                            background and rotated it
                                                                        the barcode which I also
                                 on the page as I felt it
                                                                              slightly edited and a
                                           looked more                flasher; filled in green and
                                         sophisticated.               edited using drop shadow,
                                                                          with a white £1.50 sign
                                                                        coming slightly out of the
After I had completed my                                                  circle to give it an edge
front cover I made the                                                      and make it stand out
layout of my magazine                                                                        more.
front cover, contents and
double page spread using
InDesign and then placed
my front cover in there.
Contents                                                                                             Using InDesign
                                                    I did not edit the second photo as it was
                                                     already a strong picture, so I used it as
                                                       the image that was going to dominate
                                                                          my contents page.




 I took various photographs for my contents
 page and decided on two photos.




                                                                                                 I used Photoshop to edit my first photo, I
                                                                                                 cropped out the background and then
                                                                                                 placed it in the contents page.
            After placing in the image, I rotated
            it slightly and made a black border
              around it to emphasise the photo
           and make it look more professional.
          I moved it to the right hand corner of
                the page and left out some of it.




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Using InDesign (cont)

                                                                      I added headings using the same font I
                                                                      did on my front cover, in white with a
                                                                      black background, following the theme
                                                                      throughout the magazine. I also added a
                                                                      pull quote and a page number to go to
                                                                      onto the smaller picture. In the left hand
                                                                      corner of the page I added ‘volume
                                                                      contents’ which you will see in a standard
                                                                      magazine on the corner of all pages.
I added text saying ‘contents’ with Agency
FB font like my masthead on my front cover
and used shape boxes filled in black to
make a shape going in the top left hand
corner to make the page look structured.




                                                      I then added text under the
                                             headings and filled them in white, I
                                              used Agency FB font tying in with
                                                the theme of the magazine. For
                                              the page numbers I used Impact.
                                                  All text is in capitals to make it
                                                            stand out on the page.
Using PhotoShop and InDesign (cont)
Double page spread
                                                                                                I placed the edited
                                                                                             photo in InDesign and
                            My original image for    I then further edited
                                                                                             added page numbers
                            my double page           the photo in
                                                                                                     at the bottom.
                            spread.                  Photoshop
                            I shone a light on her   to make her eyes
                            face while taking the    stand out more and                     I then added text in the
                            photograph to make       to make                                     top left hand corner
                            her eyes stand out.      the image look                                           saying
                                                     harder and more                            ‘volume interview’ in
                                                     edgy.                                     the same style as on
                                                                                                 the contents page.




            I added a strap line introducing
            the person I’m interviewing. It
            was written in capitals to make
            it stand out to the other text that
            I would be writing in lower case.




                                                                  As I had used straight lines in the corner of my
                                                                  contents page, I carried on the theme of using
                                                                  lines, but as my main image had red in it I filled
                                                                  in one of the lines red so it matched. I also
                                                                  added a headline and to keep the theme of red
                                                                  I made one of the letters red.
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Using PhotoShop and InDesign (cont)

                        I added my text and filled the questions in red
                        and kept the answers in black to make it clear
                        to the audience when they are reading. I also
                        added a by-line to show who the article was
                        written by.




  I added a pull quote and placed it in between
      my text to draw attention to the interview.
Looking back at your preliminary task, what
                    do you feel you have learnt in the progression
                                     from it to the full product?
I have learnt how to make my magazine look more professional in the way that I have taken
better quality pictures and thought about the way I took them including the backgrounds, etc.
as the background to the images in my preliminary task haven’t got much edit to them and
have the original background making it look less official.

I have learnt how to manipulate images using Photoshop and also using InDesign to effectively
create my article. By using these programs my final magazine looks a lot more improved compared
to the preliminary magazine.

When making my preliminary magazine I didn’t look at other magazines to give me ideas for my
magazine whereas for my final magazine I compared it to real music magazines of the same genre
that I was doing which helped me make my magazine.

I have learnt how to place things on the page to make it look neat and well
presented rather than looking like there is no purpose for where it is put.




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Front cover
                   More professional looking as I got the girl in
                   the image to look more professional herself
                    whereas the preliminary image was not as
                              focused and serious.

                   Better quality image as I was aware of how
                  to use Photoshop and how to change levels
                    of the image giving me the opportunity to
                            make it of a better quality.

              Better use of shot types as I had an idea in my head
               of what I wanted the picture to look like whereas
                before I just tried out different shot types which
                           didn’t really work very well.

                  Understood what my target audience want the
                   magazine to look like, used that to include the
                 text that I did whereas before I just used my own
                           knowledge when including text.


                   Better information in text as I thought a lot more
                     about what might attract my target audience
                  instead of just focusing on information like I did in
                                  my preliminary task.
Contents

            Used a better background that was plain
             instead of busy in the background so it
              looked more sopihisticated and not as
             unprofessional as my preliminary task.


           Less images in the final contents to make it
                look more sophisticated rather than
           cluttering the page with lots of images like I
                     did in the preliminary task.




              Better use of shot types, making the
               magazine look more interesting.



             Text spaced around the page surrounding
             the image instead of on one side down the
              page, also the main heading ‘contents’ is
                separated making it look unique and
            interesting instead of placing it on the top of
                              the page.
Double page spread



    Linked the colours
throughout the two pages
   – understood how to                                                                            Included a sufficient
  make the double page                                                                              amount of text –
spread look sophisticated                                                                           around the same
      and structured.                                                                               amount as a real
                                                                                                   magazine – but not
                                                                                                  so much to bore the
                                                                                                       audience.




                                                      Able to expand from preliminary task to
        Manipulated my image so that it would look   being able to make a double page spread
        good as a dominant image on the whole of       for my magazine using InDesign and
                        the page.                    Photoshop in order to help me make it look
                                                                   professional.

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FINAL EVALUATION. HOLLY REDMOND

  • 1. THE EV LUA A TION Holly Redmond
  • 2. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products? S IMILARITIES IN FRONT COVER Both use plain white masthead in capitals and quite bold, white is not complicated but stands out on the page and looks clean. Close up main image where eyes and lip on the person stand out a lot. Main image placed behind the masthead as the image is close up. Barcode in bottom right hand corner. All text on cover lines in capitals, making it seem like what is written is important and to also catch the readers eye. Majority of text on my front cover filled in white and VIBE magazine in black. Both plain yet sophisticated colours, not over the top.
  • 3. DIFFERENCES IN FRONT COVER My magazine has a header and a footer whereas VIBE magazine doesn’t have anything. I included a header and a footer to put more information on the front cover of the magazine as I didn’t want to crowd the front with lots of sell lines so that it didn’t look cluttered. My image takes up the whole cover so there is no need for a background whereas VIBE magazine has a plain blue background. I would have included a background if I had used a different image but the image I chose I thought would look good covering the whole page. VIBE magazine contains less text on the page and has one overly dominant sell line whereas my magazine has more sell lines and also the font size of all the text is pretty much the same. I chose to do this as I have more text on my page and wanted to fit it all in without it looking cluttered. My image has a more sepia effect and VIBE magazines main image of Rihanna has a black and white effect. I wanted this effect because it brought out the eyes and lips better than black and white. The person in my main image is looking straight into the camera making it obvious she knows the photo is being taken whereas in the image of Rihanna it is unsure if she knows the photo is being taken as she is looking away and not really posing. I did this because I wanted the girl in the image to look powerful and make a statement as she is supposed to be an upcoming artist whereas Rihanna is already well known and established.
  • 4. S IMILARITIES IN CONTENTS PAGE I got the style of separating the letters in ‘contents’ from VIBE magazine as it looks more creative and gives an edge to the contents page. It also allowed more space on the page as I could place it in one corner on the page instead of taking up the top of the page. Both magazines use the main image as a background, they both take up the whole page . I did this as the photo is of good quality so I didn’t need a background. Both magazine have a smaller picture in the corner, which has a white background. Both magazines contain headings for the text, separating the content of the magazine into different sections making it easier for the reader to follow. All of the text on my contents page is in capital letters and the majority of text on VIBE contents is also in capitals. I did this to make it look more clean on the page and look more sophisticated and stand out more. In both magazines, the smaller image in the picture is looking straight into the camera.
  • 5. DIFFERENCES IN CONTENTS PAGE The main image in VIBE magazine is looking straight into the camera but my main image is looking away from the camera. I got the person to look out of the view of the camera because it is obvious she is already doing a certain pose so she knows the photo is being taken and I wanted to contents to look a little different to the pose shown in my front cover. The smaller photo in my magazine contains text showing where to go in the magazine to find out more and the image is also tilted and has a black border around it whereas the smaller image in VIBE contents is showing you a magazine cover, does not have a border and is not tilted. I wanted my smaller image to also be noticed which is why I added a border because the main image is so strong that without it, it might not be noticed. The background on my main image is green as I got the person to stand in front of my green wallpaper whereas the VIBE contents has other people in the background and shows the setting of the image. I choose a plain background as her outfit has colour in it already and I wanted white text. Some of the text in VIBE contents has smaller text underneath it adding extra information in the page whereas mine doesn’t. I thought my page had enough text on it without including anymore. My main image has colour and VIBE main image is in black and white. I wanted colour in my magazine as wanted it to be as bright as possible. My image is of younger people than the people in VIBE magazine as I am aiming my magazine at a younger audience.
  • 6. S IMILARITIES IN DOUBLE PAGE S PREAD Both images are on the left page and take up the whole page. I chose to do this as I thought the image was good so wanted to make it more dramatic and big. I used VIBE magazine to get the idea of using initials of the person in big on the right page with two different colours, one being black and the other being red going with the theme of the page. Both images have page number, mine is in the bottom corners of each page and VIBE magazines is in the top right hand corner. Both images are focused on the camera and are mid close ups. Both pages have two columns of text in them.
  • 7. DIFFERENCES IN DOUBLE PAGE S PREAD My main image has a white background whereas VIBE double page spread has a black background. I chose a white background as the black background made the image look obviously cropped out more than the white background. The white background also goes with the white background to the text. My page has lines at the top as I wanted to keep the theme of lines as was on my contents, I also added a red line to go with the double page spread. VIBE magazine doesn’t have any pattern apart from the text and image. Although both pages have two columns, the layout of my text is where the first column is set to the right and the right column is set to the left. VIBE magazines text is justified. I wanted all of my text to look like its all going into the middle of the page which is why I set out my text in that way.
  • 8. How does your media product represent particular social groups?
  • 9. Professional image Professional image Female R&B singers are portrayed to be very strong, powerful women and this shows through their music as well as their image. R&B singers usually look very expensive with flashy clothes and their own style, for example Rihanna’s hair style changes frequently and her image is quirky and cool. I want my images for my magazine reflect the same idea a lot which is why I chose to take photographs of a girl with big, choppy short hair and a girl with her own individual style and also big hair as this goes with the conventions of R&B, pop and hip hop. Male R&B singers are usually portrayed to have a lot of respect and are looked up to because   they have a high reputation. Although female R&B singers look powerful and My image My image in control, they also look attractive and sexy. Therefore my magazine attracts both a female and male audience as the images of the girls are strong making other females aspire to be like them but as they are attractive it might make males want the magazine as they are attracted to them. They are also known for their quirky style which is commonly called ‘swag’, a word that is used in relation to R&B and hip hop music. I looked at images of well established, powerful female artists and wanted to recreate  the type of look they portray. My image Professional image
  • 10. What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why? IPC Media produces over 85 media brands Two thirds of their readers are women Their brands when they come together reach over 20 million users each month. They have knowledge in the music genre as they distribute NME magazine. Publishing my magazine will be a good opportunity to expand their audiences and genres of music as the audience I am targeting is younger than the audience for NME and my genre is also different so this would expand their knowledge and would also be good for my magazine as they are a well established, well known and trustworthy company.
  • 11. Who would the audience be for your media product? The audience for my media product will be aimed at both genders even though in my magazine the images are only of women, they should also attract men as the women are attractive in the images. People that enjoy R&B, hip hop and pop music, and people that enjoy going to gigs and concerts that are of this genre will also be my target audience for my magazine. My target audience will not just be aimed at Afro- Caribbean which is the stereotypical audience but will be targeted at people from different backgrounds including ethnic minorities to broaden the audience. I am also targeting both women that are confident and powerful and can relate to the women in the magazine and women that are not as confident and aspire to be like the women in the magazine.
  • 12. Typical Target Audience Tom, 17 year old Student from Solihull, favourite colour blue. Likes music, socializing, going to the gym, high interest in fashion. Dislikes rock music. Favourite music – MOBO (music of black origin), R&B. Goes to concerts, listens to music on iPod at the gym, majority of the time downloads music onto his iPod or CDs.
  • 13. Typical Target Audience Name: James Browning Aged: 18 Ethnicity: White British Occupation: sales assistant Favourite Colour: Blue Favourite Artists: Eminem, Gyptian, Vybz Kartel Interests: Jogging, socializing, bowling High interest in music, goes to concerts, downloads music to his iPod, collects vinyl's
  • 14. How did you attract/ address your audience? My initial target audience indicated certain things they wanted from a magazine before I made my magazine…
  • 15. Target Audience based on focus group For this task I asked a 4 people, a mix of male and female, who were interested in the Pop, Hip Hop and R&B genre what they would like in that genre of magazine. I then summarised there results to see what would be best suited for my target audience in the magazine. I asked them a range of questions and wrote down the main responses: Summary of results Section 1 – the front cover (QUESTIONS 1-4) 1. Front cover – what images would you like? The images on the front cover should be one striking image, which should be of a male or female that is attractive to the audience and current at the time. would like to see on the front cover e.g. sell lines? Exclusive interviews with current performers that relate to the genre, upcoming events that the reader may not have known otherwise, gossip about the artists/bands and fashion that is linked to the artists/bands that will be featured in the magazine to show the magazine has extra to offer. 3.What colours would be appropriate? Bright, loud colours which will pop out at the audience and also relate to the style of music. 4. What type of language would you expect? The language should be informal, easy to read and casual. It should also use urban words that are used by the artists/bands as the audience listen to them already so will be able to relate to that style of writing. Section 2 – the contents page (QUESTIONS 5-8) Contents page - what type of images would you like and how many? There should be more then one image on the contents page, to show what will be featured inside the magazine but there also should be a dominant image. What would you want to be contained within the magazine? The magazine should offer a wide range of things, all of which relating to hip hop, pop and R&B. it should also offer more than just about music such as fashion and gossip to keep the audience interested. How much images and text would you expect? There should be a few images and some text to tell the audience about what features in the magazine and a message from the editor to make the magazine feel friendlier. Images and text should be combined to both help show what will be inside the magazine. What type of language? The language should be informal and friendly, and the type of words used should relate to the genre the magazine is based on. Section 3- the double page spread article (QUESTIONS 9-12) Double page – what choice of images would you want? There should be one main image that consists of who the article is about and should portray them in the way that reflects the artist/band in a positive way. Depending on the artist/band they should be shown in the picture in the same light that they would be shown in their music videos or through the songs they sing. What would you prefer the article to be about? A star that is current at the time and maybe one that has had bad press in the past so that during the interview you can see the real them and not what is portrayed of them. Also about their personal life and information that you would be surprised at or never knew before. How would you expect the language to be? The language should be chatty and informal, and relaxed to suggest conversation rather than just questions and answers if it is an interview. It should reflect how the artist talks to people themselves so shouldn’t be structured but flowing. Would you prefer more image or text based articles? Their should be a variety of pictures that link to the text content but there should be enough text that the reader has gained information about the artist. There shouldn’t be too much text so not to bore the reader but shouldn’t be overcrowded with pictures as it would not give enough information.
  • 16. How did you attract/ address your audience? I attracted my audience to my magazine by having lots of sell lines that might capture the readers attention, such as ‘The Only Interview’ and ‘The Glam Life of’ etc. I used a dominant image with bold eyes and mouth to stand out and a choppy fringe coming around the persons face which looks a bit different to the usual hairstyle. The image is a powerful and strong one which relates to the audience I have aimed at. I set a reasonable price that all of my target audience will be able to afford. I addressed my audience by not using overly formal language but used simple and easy to understand language. My target audience wanted one dominant image with easy to read, interesting text on the front. They also wanted bright and bold colours which I have not included as much as I could have but I went for my relaxed colours instead to make the magazine look more sophisticated and link with the genre as if I used bright bolder colours it may have related more to a pop magazine.
  • 17. How did you attract/ address your audience? The images I have used should attract the target audience because I have used people of different cultures and backgrounds to attract people from different backgrounds also. The main image is dominating the page so it is also used as a background to make the contents more unique and interesting and the smaller image is tilted. Both of these changes I have made may further attract the audience. My contents page addresses the reader through the regular and featured articles listed because the singers and bands listed would attract the audience as it is music they are familiar with and most likely enjoy. I have used all capital letters when writing my text and the writing is in filled in white to stand out better against the background. This will attract the audience as it will capture the eye. My target audience wanted a few images with one dominant image, I have used two images and one dominant image that stands out. The target audience also wanted more information than music, such as gossip and fashion, which I have suggested will be in my magazine in my contents. My target audience wanted me to combine image and text so I added some text onto my smaller image to indicate what would be inside and also had text all around my main image.
  • 18. How did you attract/ address your audience? The colour scheme I have used will attract my audience as over the two pages the red flows from parts of the text to the colours in the image. The big heading at the front will capture the audiences eye and the strap line which is all in capitals will make the reader want to read on as it gives an insight of what will be included in the article. The big image which dominates the whole of the left page is interesting and the girl looks powerful in the image which will attract both males and females to the magazine as females with either aspire or relate to the image and men may find it attractive. My target audience wanted a dominant image of the artist being interviewed that portrayed them in a positive way, the image looks powerful and strong so I feel this is a positive image for the artist. They also wanted a new and upcoming artist so I have included that she is quite a new star.
  • 19. Audience Feedback LIKED MOST ABOUT THE HOW TO IMPROVE THE MAGAZINE MAGAZINE Realistic Masthead on front cover to contrast with image a bit better Professional – very good images and manipulation Colours on cover don’t show up Use of images very well Overall, how would you rate this magazine? 4.5 4 3.5 3 Number of people 2.5 Number of people 2 1.5 1 0.5 0 Excellent Very good Good OK Poor
  • 20. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product? Using cameras to take photos for my magazine, Using InDesign to create using different shot types, my magazine base and editing the way the camera then my final magazine, takes the picture using the inserting things into the settings on the camera. Using PhotoShop I was pages and also editing able to edit the things using InDesign. photographs I had taken on my camera to make them look more professional and manipulate the image.
  • 21. Front cover Using Photoshop I have edited my image for my front cover using Photoshop. I have made the image darker by playing around with levels and colour balance to make it look a bit different to the original image, darker and more professional. Original image for front cover I put my image and masthead together to make the base of my magazine cover and to After editing my main image in Photoshop I make sure that it went then made my masthead ‘VOLUME’. The well. I placed the font used was Agency FB. I edited the masthead just above the masthead by changing the font to a style eyes as it will make the which I feel makes it look more like hip eyes stand out more and hop/R&B/pop genre and made it larger. I look more striking. also changed the colour to white as it will go well with my main image and as the image has darkness to it the white would contrast well. NEXT PAGE
  • 22. Using PhotoShop (cont) I then added some cover As I knew the image I am using for my contents page lines and strap lines to the has a green background, I added the same colour to page mainly using the font my swatches and used this colour to edit some of the ‘impact’ as it is bold and text on the front cover. I added some boxes that were stands out yet it also filled with the green and placed them behind some text looks sophisticated and which I have made black to make certain words stand clean. I started off with the out on the page that I think the audience would be text being all white as I attracted to. I also edited some of the colour of the text knew I wanted my main and used effects such as drop shadow, inner shadow colour on the page to be and inner glow to make them pop out. I also added white. ‘NEW’ in green inside the ‘O’ in my masthead so that my masthead had an element of the green on it to tie in with the theme. I edited the barcode slightly so that instead of When I was happy with it being black lines on a everything I had edited on white background it was the page and where white lines on a black everything was, I added background and rotated it the barcode which I also on the page as I felt it slightly edited and a looked more flasher; filled in green and sophisticated. edited using drop shadow, with a white £1.50 sign coming slightly out of the After I had completed my circle to give it an edge front cover I made the and make it stand out layout of my magazine more. front cover, contents and double page spread using InDesign and then placed my front cover in there.
  • 23. Contents Using InDesign I did not edit the second photo as it was already a strong picture, so I used it as the image that was going to dominate my contents page. I took various photographs for my contents page and decided on two photos. I used Photoshop to edit my first photo, I cropped out the background and then placed it in the contents page. After placing in the image, I rotated it slightly and made a black border around it to emphasise the photo and make it look more professional. I moved it to the right hand corner of the page and left out some of it. NEXT PAGE
  • 24. Using InDesign (cont) I added headings using the same font I did on my front cover, in white with a black background, following the theme throughout the magazine. I also added a pull quote and a page number to go to onto the smaller picture. In the left hand corner of the page I added ‘volume contents’ which you will see in a standard magazine on the corner of all pages. I added text saying ‘contents’ with Agency FB font like my masthead on my front cover and used shape boxes filled in black to make a shape going in the top left hand corner to make the page look structured. I then added text under the headings and filled them in white, I used Agency FB font tying in with the theme of the magazine. For the page numbers I used Impact. All text is in capitals to make it stand out on the page.
  • 25. Using PhotoShop and InDesign (cont) Double page spread I placed the edited photo in InDesign and My original image for I then further edited added page numbers my double page the photo in at the bottom. spread. Photoshop I shone a light on her to make her eyes face while taking the stand out more and I then added text in the photograph to make to make top left hand corner her eyes stand out. the image look saying harder and more ‘volume interview’ in edgy. the same style as on the contents page. I added a strap line introducing the person I’m interviewing. It was written in capitals to make it stand out to the other text that I would be writing in lower case. As I had used straight lines in the corner of my contents page, I carried on the theme of using lines, but as my main image had red in it I filled in one of the lines red so it matched. I also added a headline and to keep the theme of red I made one of the letters red. NEXT PAGE
  • 26. Using PhotoShop and InDesign (cont) I added my text and filled the questions in red and kept the answers in black to make it clear to the audience when they are reading. I also added a by-line to show who the article was written by. I added a pull quote and placed it in between my text to draw attention to the interview.
  • 27. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product? I have learnt how to make my magazine look more professional in the way that I have taken better quality pictures and thought about the way I took them including the backgrounds, etc. as the background to the images in my preliminary task haven’t got much edit to them and have the original background making it look less official. I have learnt how to manipulate images using Photoshop and also using InDesign to effectively create my article. By using these programs my final magazine looks a lot more improved compared to the preliminary magazine. When making my preliminary magazine I didn’t look at other magazines to give me ideas for my magazine whereas for my final magazine I compared it to real music magazines of the same genre that I was doing which helped me make my magazine. I have learnt how to place things on the page to make it look neat and well presented rather than looking like there is no purpose for where it is put. NEXT PAGE
  • 28. Front cover More professional looking as I got the girl in the image to look more professional herself whereas the preliminary image was not as focused and serious. Better quality image as I was aware of how to use Photoshop and how to change levels of the image giving me the opportunity to make it of a better quality. Better use of shot types as I had an idea in my head of what I wanted the picture to look like whereas before I just tried out different shot types which didn’t really work very well. Understood what my target audience want the magazine to look like, used that to include the text that I did whereas before I just used my own knowledge when including text. Better information in text as I thought a lot more about what might attract my target audience instead of just focusing on information like I did in my preliminary task.
  • 29. Contents Used a better background that was plain instead of busy in the background so it looked more sopihisticated and not as unprofessional as my preliminary task. Less images in the final contents to make it look more sophisticated rather than cluttering the page with lots of images like I did in the preliminary task. Better use of shot types, making the magazine look more interesting. Text spaced around the page surrounding the image instead of on one side down the page, also the main heading ‘contents’ is separated making it look unique and interesting instead of placing it on the top of the page.
  • 30. Double page spread Linked the colours throughout the two pages – understood how to Included a sufficient make the double page amount of text – spread look sophisticated around the same and structured. amount as a real magazine – but not so much to bore the audience. Able to expand from preliminary task to Manipulated my image so that it would look being able to make a double page spread good as a dominant image on the whole of for my magazine using InDesign and the page. Photoshop in order to help me make it look professional.