The student created a magazine cover for a school publication about starting 6th form. They received positive feedback on the use of color, realistic images, and readable fonts. Negative feedback suggested adding a selling line, making the heading and main cover line stand out more. The student made changes like adding a white selling line in the corner, giving the heading a shadow to stand out, and making the word "FRESH" larger in the main cover line. The revisions improved the professionalism and appeal of the cover based on key magazine design conventions.

1. Positive Feedback on Magazine CoverThe positive feedbacks I got was: The use of colour is catchy and goes very well with everything

2. The background image looks and the models smile looks very realistic

3. The fonts used were catchy and at the same time readable

4. Looks professional and appealing

5. Not a lot of fonts used which is good Negative Feedback on Magazine CoverThis is my original magazine cover, which is about starting 6th form. I have finished my cover and to improve on it I asked 3 students for feedback. The feedbacks I got was: To add a selling line in order for it to look more realistic and catchy

6. Make the heading stand out more as it is not sharp enough and not so appealing