The document is an error correction exercise from the group of Johnny Jaimes, Jose Luis, Leo Ceballos and Luis Zambrano on Ice Age II. It contains 20 sentences with errors that the group corrected and explained. The task was to download the presentation, correct sentences with errors from each group member, upload the corrected file to a wiki before the end of class with the group name and members who worked on it.

1. I N S E D U A R D F O N T S E R E
4 R T B
Y E A R 2 0 1 2 – 1 3
G R O U P : J H O N N Y J A I M E S , J O S E L U I S ,
L E O C E B A L L O S A N D L U I S Z A M B R A N O
Exam Corrections Ice Age II

2. TASK
 Download this presentation in your notebook
 Correct as many sentences as you can. There is one
incorrect sentence from each of you
 Upload it to the wiki again before the end of the
class.
https://fluwiki.wikispaces.com/Error+correction+exercise
 Do not forget to CHANGE THE TITLE: Write the
names of your group, and the members who worked in
this
 If someone was missing, or did not contribute, you
should NOT write his/her name

3. Teacher tip
 Remember you can use some of these sentences for
your Learning Diary!

4. Example
Error Correction Explanation
Ellie I like Mannie Ellie LikeS Mannie A sentence cannot have
two subjects
The 3rd person singular
needs an S in present
simple

5. Error Correction Explanation
Paris Hilton is a girl very
beautiful
Paris Hilton is girl very
beautiful
in the sentence is not
written "a"

6. Error Correction Explanation
Sid it is a lazy Sid is a lazy. in the se3ntence is not
written the "it"

7. Error Correction Explanation
Ice Age II to start when
the ice “se descongela”
Ice Age II began when the
ice is thawed
Spanglish
To start is „‟ para iniciar „‟
not consistent
change the "thaws" for "is
thawed“

8. Error Correction Explanation
Ellie think she possums Ellie think she was a
possums.
We added "she was a" to
match the sentence.

9. Error Correction Explanation
Sid loves sing and talk too
much
Sid loves sing and talk to
much.
we changed "too" with
"to"

10. Error Correction Explanation
Diego, Mannie and Sid is
good friend.
Diego, Mannie and Sid
are good friends
change "is" for "are" and
"friend" by "friends",
for the sentence is plural

11. Error Correction Explanation
At first sight he is a lot of
kind.
At first sigh is a lot of
kind.
we have removed the
“He"

12. Error Correction Explanation
In the Ice Age II have a
very characters.
In Ice Age II have a very
characters.
No need to write'' the''

13. Error Correction Explanation
Manny search her herd. Manny seeks his herd Serch no es correcto

14. Error Correction Explanation
I‟m a prey of the love. I‟m prev ius of the love. we have removed the "a"
and have put previous

15. Error Correction Explanation
Ellie she very confused Ellie is very confused. we changed the "she" for
"is".

16. Error Correction Explanation
You prefer either a ice
cream or a rattle snakes.
You prefer either a ice
cream or rattle snakes.
We removed "a" so that
the sentence is correct

17. Error Correction Explanation
Either study english for
next day or play PS3
Either study english for
next day play in the PS3
'' Or'' not said in that
sentence

18. Error Correction Explanation
Ellie she is shy and thinks
that it is a possum
Ellie she is shy and thinks
that is a possum.
remove the "it" in the
sentence

19. Error Correction Explanation
Many is fat but and Ellie
like.
Manny is fat but and like
Ellie
the error was Manny's
name was misspelled, was
also poorly located "like"

20. Error Correction Explanation
Possums are heavies Possums are heavy. Adjectives are not plural
in English

21. Error Correction Explanation
I don‟t eat junk food
never
I never eat junk food Never doesn‟t get in the
end

22. Error Correction Explanation
Manny is a bad because
not have family.
Manny is bad because not
have family.
we have removed the "a".

23. Error Correction Explanation
Mannie and Ellie they are
very big
Manny and Ellie they are
very big
the name "Manny" was
misspelt

24. Error Correction Explanation
Diego a fraid of water Diego is afraid of water have joined "fraid" and
post "is" before.

25. Error Correction Explanation
His friends are
intelligents and not speak
with he.
His friends are
intelligence and not speak
with he
Intelligents not exist