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of masthead on the contents page. 
People also suggested removing the border 
from around the page number on the main 
image. 
Another suggestion was to discard the use of 
page-page format. 
After considering these, I improved the cover and this was the result: 
I included the magazine name in the banner at 
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number which makes the cover look more 
professional and moved the subheading down. 
The page-page format has been removed 
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