Introduction Bridge 1 Verse 1 Chorus1 Verse 2 Bridge 2 Instrumental Chorus2 Outro
Duration 0:00-0:06 0:07-0:33 0:34-1:04 1:05-1:36 1:37-2:05 2:06-2:20 2:21-2:38 2:39-3:08 3:09-3:42
Action Time lapse of the
city
(Wolverhampton),
show the industrial
area.
How will youfilm
the time lapse?
There isa time
lapse feature on
boththe iphone
and the camera.
For thiswe will film
the
Wolverhampton
Ringroad, people
walkinginandout
of banks/local
shops.
What the laughing
isintroducedinto
the music,we will
filma close upof
the maincharacter
hysterically
laughing.We will
add effectstothis
close suchas
increasedspeedto
Whenthe
leadsings
‘feel good’,
we will film
close upsof
the band
member’s
mouths
miming
‘feel good’
As the lyrics
sings‘sha
sha ba da’
we will
have close
upsand
zoomsof
the music
instruments
playedby
the band.
As itsings
‘change’,
we will film
the
different
‘City’sbreaking
downon a
camel’sback’
referstothe
downfall of the
city,so for this
shotwe will film
the city
(Wolverhampton
or B’ham).The
bandmembers
will be insome
of these shots-
smokingtoshow
that theytooare
helpingdeface it
(ironic).Walking
amongsta
crowd of people
whoare all
dressedthe
same.
How are you
goingto getthe
crowd of people
to lookthe
same?
‘Windmill,
windmillforthe
land’
A wide shotof the
countryside with
the band
membersplaying
acoustic
instrumentsto
showthe contrast
betweencitylife
(representedby
the verses).
‘Love foreverlove
isfree’onthe
downbeatof this
we will include
short clipsand
close upsof
people kissing
People kissing?
Are people willing
to do this?
We knowcouples
whoare willingto
be filmedforthis,
alternatively we
‘Laughinggas
these hazmats’
Close upof the
band
laughing/mocking
the crowd that
are all dressed
the same.The
crowd all stand
still asthe band
‘frolick’around
them.
‘Liningthemup
like asscracks we
will panacross a
row of women
linedupand
wearingthe same
thingto show
theyare part of
the system.This
clipwill startoff
withone of the
bandmembers
and endon the
other.
As the lyrics
sings‘sha
sha ba da’
we will
have close
upsand
zoomsof
the music
instruments
playedby
the band.
(Thisis
repeated
fromthe
previous
bridge)
Whenthe
leadsings
‘feel good’,
we will film
close upsof
the band
member’s
mouths
miming
‘feel good’
The instrumental
will involve clips
of the band
performingtothe
crowd andthe
crowd ‘coming
alive’/totheir
sense andstart to
more to the
band.
May alsoinvolve
clipsof the city
(Wolverhampton)
possible time
lapses.
‘Windmill,
windmillfor
the land’
A wide shot
of the
countryside
withthe
band
members
playing
electric
instruments.
Thisis in
contrast to
the acoustic
instruments
as before.
‘Love
foreverlove
isfree’on
the down
beatof this
we will
include
short clips
and close
upsof
See all the crowd enjoying
themselvesastheyno
longerconformforthis
we will use multiple shots
(wide,pan,overhead,close-
up).
Where the lyricslaugh,
we will doa zoomin of
the leadsmouthlaughing
so itfallsintoa blackhole.
To showthe end.
make the character
seempsychotic.
band
member
bodiesto
show
diversity.
For thiswe
initiallyintended
to dressthe
crowdsin suits.
However,white
shirt,black
trousersand
possiblyamask
ismore doable.
However,we
have decidedto
dressour crowd
in‘alternate’
clothing(like the
band) and our
maincharacter
‘the norm’is
goingto be
dressedindull
clothestoshow
that she ispart
of the normsof
the world.
‘Theyjusthave
to go ‘cause they
don’tknow
whack’refersto
the brainwashed
youthso forthis
we will filma
will show‘love’
throughhand
holding/passion
for music.Thiswill
focusof the two
characters (norm
and party) where
the party
character teachers
the normie howto
letgo.
‘Iseverybodyin?’
zoomin onthe
large crowd of
conformists
Because we had
an issue withthe
numberof people
we initially
plannedtohave in
our musicvideo,
we adjustedthe
storyline tobase it
aroundtwo sisters
whoare
completely
different.One
representingthe
mundane/routines
of citizensof the
modernworld,
‘Playthese
poniesatthe
track’ band
members
continue tomock
the crowd for
beingthe same
‘It’smy chocolate
attack’ comment
on addiction.
Showthis
visually.(Band
gettingkicksout
of non
conforming.
‘watchme as I
gravitate’will be
one of the band
members
jumpingoff
somethingplayed
inreverse to
showthe effect
of ‘gravitate’.
OR showthe
crowd being
fascinatedbythe
bandmembers
and howthe
bandare
inspiringthemto
intothe
ears of the
conforming
band.
people
kissing- the
band
bewitching
the
‘conforming’
girl
membersof
the crowd
‘Is
everybody
in?’ the
conforming
crowd has
now
changedto
become a
larger
large group of
people inthe
same attire to
showthat they
are conformists.
‘Sowhile youfill
the streetsits
appealingtosee’
Will showa clip
of busystreets
and citylife.Film
the band
membersstood
inthe crowd
whoare all
dressedthe
same
performing
mundane tasks,
while the world
movesaround
them.
How will you
filmthe crowd
scene?Actors?
Camera
movement?
We will use close
upsand pans to
showthe crowd
and make the
room lookfuller
and the other
representingthe
carefree,non-
conformistwho
has theirown
mind.Throughout
the musicvideo
we will followthe
storyof howthe
‘normie’learnsto
letgo of everyday
routine and
become free like
hersister.
come out of their
shell.(firstsigns
of the crowd
realisingtheydo
not have to
conform)
‘ha ha ha ha ha’
do a splitscreen
Of different
bandsmembers
laughing.
‘Gon bite the
dustcan’t fight
withus’filma
fightbetween
twocharacters
(one band
memberandone
memberof the
crowd) and play
it inreverse
than normal.We
have a group of
people whoare
willingtobe a
part of our music
video.
‘All Iwanna hear
isthe message
beep’will be a
clipof the main
character ina
dark roomwith
loadsof hands
enteringthe
shotholding
phones.
‘My dreamsthey
got herkissing,
‘cause I don’tget
sleepno’an
overheadshotof
the leadsinger
lyinginbedwith
hiseyesclosed,
singingthe lyrics
and on the word
‘no’,we zoomin
on the face to
showhiseyes
opening.
Cast Band members(2-
4)
Band
members
(2-4)
Band members
Crowd
Band
Crowd
Band
Crowd
Band
Crowd
Band
Crowd
Band
Crowd
Band
Crowd
Costume/
Props
Instruments
Dressedin
alternative clothing
Instruments
Clothesfor
the
different
band
members
so youcan
tell whois
who
Cigarettes
Mobile phones
Matching
clothesforthe
crowd.
Acoustic
instruments
Balloon
Chocolate bars
(?)
Suits
Instruments Suitsforthe
crowd/matching
clothingand
alternative
clothingforthe
band
Instruments Alternativeclothing
Location Wolverhampton
Pub
(Newhampton/New
Arts)
Dark room
(NewArts)
Streetsof
Wolverhampton
(backalleyssoit
seemsbusier)
Dark room
Countryside
(White ladies
priory?)
Newarts
(Leisure centre-
boxingring)
Newarts Wolverhampton
Newarts
Countryside Newarts
Possible
problems
Time lapse maynot
work
Gettingthe
lighting
correct for
the clip
Notbeingable
to getthe
numberstobuild
the crowd
Weather Getting
permissionto
filminthe leisure
centre
Gettingthe
correct
lightingfor
the clip
The time lapse
may notwork
Weather Gettingcertainshots.

A2 treatment amendment

  • 1.
    Introduction Bridge 1Verse 1 Chorus1 Verse 2 Bridge 2 Instrumental Chorus2 Outro Duration 0:00-0:06 0:07-0:33 0:34-1:04 1:05-1:36 1:37-2:05 2:06-2:20 2:21-2:38 2:39-3:08 3:09-3:42 Action Time lapse of the city (Wolverhampton), show the industrial area. How will youfilm the time lapse? There isa time lapse feature on boththe iphone and the camera. For thiswe will film the Wolverhampton Ringroad, people walkinginandout of banks/local shops. What the laughing isintroducedinto the music,we will filma close upof the maincharacter hysterically laughing.We will add effectstothis close suchas increasedspeedto Whenthe leadsings ‘feel good’, we will film close upsof the band member’s mouths miming ‘feel good’ As the lyrics sings‘sha sha ba da’ we will have close upsand zoomsof the music instruments playedby the band. As itsings ‘change’, we will film the different ‘City’sbreaking downon a camel’sback’ referstothe downfall of the city,so for this shotwe will film the city (Wolverhampton or B’ham).The bandmembers will be insome of these shots- smokingtoshow that theytooare helpingdeface it (ironic).Walking amongsta crowd of people whoare all dressedthe same. How are you goingto getthe crowd of people to lookthe same? ‘Windmill, windmillforthe land’ A wide shotof the countryside with the band membersplaying acoustic instrumentsto showthe contrast betweencitylife (representedby the verses). ‘Love foreverlove isfree’onthe downbeatof this we will include short clipsand close upsof people kissing People kissing? Are people willing to do this? We knowcouples whoare willingto be filmedforthis, alternatively we ‘Laughinggas these hazmats’ Close upof the band laughing/mocking the crowd that are all dressed the same.The crowd all stand still asthe band ‘frolick’around them. ‘Liningthemup like asscracks we will panacross a row of women linedupand wearingthe same thingto show theyare part of the system.This clipwill startoff withone of the bandmembers and endon the other. As the lyrics sings‘sha sha ba da’ we will have close upsand zoomsof the music instruments playedby the band. (Thisis repeated fromthe previous bridge) Whenthe leadsings ‘feel good’, we will film close upsof the band member’s mouths miming ‘feel good’ The instrumental will involve clips of the band performingtothe crowd andthe crowd ‘coming alive’/totheir sense andstart to more to the band. May alsoinvolve clipsof the city (Wolverhampton) possible time lapses. ‘Windmill, windmillfor the land’ A wide shot of the countryside withthe band members playing electric instruments. Thisis in contrast to the acoustic instruments as before. ‘Love foreverlove isfree’on the down beatof this we will include short clips and close upsof See all the crowd enjoying themselvesastheyno longerconformforthis we will use multiple shots (wide,pan,overhead,close- up). Where the lyricslaugh, we will doa zoomin of the leadsmouthlaughing so itfallsintoa blackhole. To showthe end.
  • 2.
    make the character seempsychotic. band member bodiesto show diversity. Forthiswe initiallyintended to dressthe crowdsin suits. However,white shirt,black trousersand possiblyamask ismore doable. However,we have decidedto dressour crowd in‘alternate’ clothing(like the band) and our maincharacter ‘the norm’is goingto be dressedindull clothestoshow that she ispart of the normsof the world. ‘Theyjusthave to go ‘cause they don’tknow whack’refersto the brainwashed youthso forthis we will filma will show‘love’ throughhand holding/passion for music.Thiswill focusof the two characters (norm and party) where the party character teachers the normie howto letgo. ‘Iseverybodyin?’ zoomin onthe large crowd of conformists Because we had an issue withthe numberof people we initially plannedtohave in our musicvideo, we adjustedthe storyline tobase it aroundtwo sisters whoare completely different.One representingthe mundane/routines of citizensof the modernworld, ‘Playthese poniesatthe track’ band members continue tomock the crowd for beingthe same ‘It’smy chocolate attack’ comment on addiction. Showthis visually.(Band gettingkicksout of non conforming. ‘watchme as I gravitate’will be one of the band members jumpingoff somethingplayed inreverse to showthe effect of ‘gravitate’. OR showthe crowd being fascinatedbythe bandmembers and howthe bandare inspiringthemto intothe ears of the conforming band. people kissing- the band bewitching the ‘conforming’ girl membersof the crowd ‘Is everybody in?’ the conforming crowd has now changedto become a larger
  • 3.
    large group of peopleinthe same attire to showthat they are conformists. ‘Sowhile youfill the streetsits appealingtosee’ Will showa clip of busystreets and citylife.Film the band membersstood inthe crowd whoare all dressedthe same performing mundane tasks, while the world movesaround them. How will you filmthe crowd scene?Actors? Camera movement? We will use close upsand pans to showthe crowd and make the room lookfuller and the other representingthe carefree,non- conformistwho has theirown mind.Throughout the musicvideo we will followthe storyof howthe ‘normie’learnsto letgo of everyday routine and become free like hersister. come out of their shell.(firstsigns of the crowd realisingtheydo not have to conform) ‘ha ha ha ha ha’ do a splitscreen Of different bandsmembers laughing. ‘Gon bite the dustcan’t fight withus’filma fightbetween twocharacters (one band memberandone memberof the crowd) and play it inreverse
  • 4.
    than normal.We have agroup of people whoare willingtobe a part of our music video. ‘All Iwanna hear isthe message beep’will be a clipof the main character ina dark roomwith loadsof hands enteringthe shotholding phones. ‘My dreamsthey got herkissing, ‘cause I don’tget sleepno’an overheadshotof the leadsinger lyinginbedwith hiseyesclosed, singingthe lyrics and on the word ‘no’,we zoomin on the face to showhiseyes opening.
  • 5.
    Cast Band members(2- 4) Band members (2-4) Bandmembers Crowd Band Crowd Band Crowd Band Crowd Band Crowd Band Crowd Band Crowd Costume/ Props Instruments Dressedin alternative clothing Instruments Clothesfor the different band members so youcan tell whois who Cigarettes Mobile phones Matching clothesforthe crowd. Acoustic instruments Balloon Chocolate bars (?) Suits Instruments Suitsforthe crowd/matching clothingand alternative clothingforthe band Instruments Alternativeclothing Location Wolverhampton Pub (Newhampton/New Arts) Dark room (NewArts) Streetsof Wolverhampton (backalleyssoit seemsbusier) Dark room Countryside (White ladies priory?) Newarts (Leisure centre- boxingring) Newarts Wolverhampton Newarts Countryside Newarts Possible problems Time lapse maynot work Gettingthe lighting correct for the clip Notbeingable to getthe numberstobuild the crowd Weather Getting permissionto filminthe leisure centre Gettingthe correct lightingfor the clip The time lapse may notwork Weather Gettingcertainshots.