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A Long Walk to Water
Learning Objectives

I can write a clear and organized analysis
essay that makes a valid claim about the
theme of A Long Walk to Water.
I can support my claim with details and
quotes from the book.
I can use quotes correctly.
A Long Walk to Water
Learning Objectives

I correct grammar and punctuation
errors.
I can use feedback from others to revise
and improve my essay.
I can use new vocabulary appropriately in
my essay.
A Long Walk to Water
Essay Writing

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State the main idea in the beginning
Give examples to support your topic
Make the beginning interesting
Match and answer the question
Really understand what you are writing
Details (quotes) should support a claim.
Organize their topics
Write formally
Create conclusions related to the topic
A Long Walk to Water
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Back to the essay today!!
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A Long Walk to Water: Lesson19 unit2

  • 1. DO NOW Take out homework: Two Voice Poem Organizer Review Essays • Look at your returned essays • Read over my comments • Notice any conventions errors
  • 2. A Long Walk to Water Learning Objectives I can write a clear and organized analysis essay that makes a valid claim about the theme of A Long Walk to Water. I can support my claim with details and quotes from the book. I can use quotes correctly.
  • 3. A Long Walk to Water Learning Objectives I correct grammar and punctuation errors. I can use feedback from others to revise and improve my essay. I can use new vocabulary appropriately in my essay.
  • 4. A Long Walk to Water Essay Writing Major errors for this class:
  • 5. Writer’s Tips What can we do? Things Good Writers Do • • • • • • • • • State the main idea in the beginning Give examples to support your topic Make the beginning interesting Match and answer the question Really understand what you are writing Details (quotes) should support a claim. Organize their topics Write formally Create conclusions related to the topic
  • 6. A Long Walk to Water Essay Writing Back to the essay today!! • Time to revise your work • Make it as perfect as possible! • Fix mistakes and add information where needed
  • 7. A Long Walk to Water Homework Final Draft of Essay Due tomorrow • Must be finished • Will hand in with the draft and planner