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Rewrite quotes with correct puctuation

1. Hello he repeated and this time his
own voice came through the speakers

2. I will come to the village Salva
promised as soon as it is safe
A Long Walk to Water
Learning Objectives

I can analyze a model literary analysis
essay to determine its strengths.
I can use quotes effectively in my writing.
I can punctuate quotes correctly in my
writing.
A Long Walk to Water
Essay Writing

Today’s Focus
• Look at a model (example) essay
• Discover what makes it a good essay
• Read along as we read it to you aloud!
A Long Walk to Water
Vocabulary

Tough words in the essay
Back of the notebook!
• despite =
• hostile =

• brutality=
A Long Walk to Water
Vocabulary

Tough words in the essay
Back of the notebook!
• daunting =
• parched =

•

___________ =
A Long Walk to Water
Discussion Appointments

Today’s appointment:

WHITE NILE APPOINTMENT!
A Long Walk to Water
Discussion Appointment

Re-read the essay
• What one sentence in the essay states the
main point the writer is trying to make?
(the claim)
• Highlight it
• When done, raise your hand and I’ll check
to see if it’s right!!
A Long Walk to Water
Discussion Appointment

What makes the essay good
• Was the author’s message clear?
• What is one thing you think helped make the
essay clear? (discuss)
Writer’s Tips

What can we do?

Things Good Writers Do
• State the main idea in the beginning

• State the main idea in the ending (again)
• Give examples to support your topic
Essay Writing
Punctuation

Look at QUOTES
1.
2.
3.
4.

Underline the quotes in the essay
How did you find them?
What paragraphs have them?
Why did the author put them in these
paragraphs?
Essay Writing
Punctuation

How to use QUOTES
1. Words are directly from the text
2. Begin and end with quotation marks “”
3. Are there to support your ideas
4. Followed by page number from the book (32)
5. Character speaking is named

6. ALWAYS has thinking explained around it
Essay Writing
Punctuation

Tips on Using Quotes Handout
1. Read over the sheet with me!
2. Ellipses ( the … at the end of a sentence) are
not required for this essay
A Long Walk to Water
Homework

Try some quotes on your own:
• Select three (3) quotes from A Long Walk
to Water from your notes or old
worksheets
• Put each IN A SENTENCE, using correct
punctuation
• Be ready to hand in tomorrow!

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A Long Walk to Water: Lesson11 unit2

  • 1. DO NOW • Take out homework (organizer) Rewrite quotes with correct puctuation 1. Hello he repeated and this time his own voice came through the speakers 2. I will come to the village Salva promised as soon as it is safe
  • 2. A Long Walk to Water Learning Objectives I can analyze a model literary analysis essay to determine its strengths. I can use quotes effectively in my writing. I can punctuate quotes correctly in my writing.
  • 3. A Long Walk to Water Essay Writing Today’s Focus • Look at a model (example) essay • Discover what makes it a good essay • Read along as we read it to you aloud!
  • 4. A Long Walk to Water Vocabulary Tough words in the essay Back of the notebook! • despite = • hostile = • brutality=
  • 5. A Long Walk to Water Vocabulary Tough words in the essay Back of the notebook! • daunting = • parched = • ___________ =
  • 6. A Long Walk to Water Discussion Appointments Today’s appointment: WHITE NILE APPOINTMENT!
  • 7. A Long Walk to Water Discussion Appointment Re-read the essay • What one sentence in the essay states the main point the writer is trying to make? (the claim) • Highlight it • When done, raise your hand and I’ll check to see if it’s right!!
  • 8. A Long Walk to Water Discussion Appointment What makes the essay good • Was the author’s message clear? • What is one thing you think helped make the essay clear? (discuss)
  • 9. Writer’s Tips What can we do? Things Good Writers Do • State the main idea in the beginning • State the main idea in the ending (again) • Give examples to support your topic
  • 10. Essay Writing Punctuation Look at QUOTES 1. 2. 3. 4. Underline the quotes in the essay How did you find them? What paragraphs have them? Why did the author put them in these paragraphs?
  • 11. Essay Writing Punctuation How to use QUOTES 1. Words are directly from the text 2. Begin and end with quotation marks “” 3. Are there to support your ideas 4. Followed by page number from the book (32) 5. Character speaking is named 6. ALWAYS has thinking explained around it
  • 12. Essay Writing Punctuation Tips on Using Quotes Handout 1. Read over the sheet with me! 2. Ellipses ( the … at the end of a sentence) are not required for this essay
  • 13. A Long Walk to Water Homework Try some quotes on your own: • Select three (3) quotes from A Long Walk to Water from your notes or old worksheets • Put each IN A SENTENCE, using correct punctuation • Be ready to hand in tomorrow!