Take out yourpersonal narrative
Agenda:• Review of run-ons• Partner practice fixing run-ons• Complete P. 71 “PROOFREAD”• Read your narrative to a partner.
Partner PracticePartner A Partner B
SCENARIO 1
“#1. Brown bears include the grizzly andthe kodiak, the largest brown bear is thekodiak.”
Partner A Partner BI think #1 is a run-on because…You are correct!
SCENARIO 2
Partner A Partner BI think #1 iscorrect.Unfortunately, it’s not.Now that you know it’sa run-on, where do youneed to correc...
OR
Partner A Partner BI think #1 is a run-on because…You are incorrect.Circle the subject andunderline the verb.
R . T
For each sentence…•I think that #1 is correct/arun-on because…•You are correct/incorrectbecause…
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10 9 e21-1

  1. 1. Take out yourpersonal narrative
  2. 2. Agenda:• Review of run-ons• Partner practice fixing run-ons• Complete P. 71 “PROOFREAD”• Read your narrative to a partner.
  3. 3. Partner PracticePartner A Partner B
  4. 4. SCENARIO 1
  5. 5. “#1. Brown bears include the grizzly andthe kodiak, the largest brown bear is thekodiak.”
  6. 6. Partner A Partner BI think #1 is a run-on because…You are correct!
  7. 7. SCENARIO 2
  8. 8. Partner A Partner BI think #1 iscorrect.Unfortunately, it’s not.Now that you know it’sa run-on, where do youneed to correct it?I think thesentence ends at“kodiak.”You are correct!
  9. 9. OR
  10. 10. Partner A Partner BI think #1 is a run-on because…You are incorrect.Circle the subject andunderline the verb.
  11. 11. R . T
  12. 12. For each sentence…•I think that #1 is correct/arun-on because…•You are correct/incorrectbecause…

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