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Evaluation
April-Wimmer
Production Process Evaluation
Research
I looked up podcasts on comparing different TV shows
and thought about how they started and ended etc.
Time Management
I think I managed my time well, I stuck to my
schedule and used time outside lessons to
record my audio and also work on my script.
I made sure I recorded it when there would be
no distractions in my house.
Planning
I planned well. I made sure I got all the sound
effects and had put them in the order I needed.
I wrote the whole script and made sure I
compared the similarities and differences
between the Disney’s Peter Pan and The Once
Upon a time’s version well.
Technical Qualities
The sound Quality was good but needed to have
the Voice over a little louder. The sound effects
worked well and the background music was
edited well but between sound effects they
seem a little “Jumpy” as I did not know about
fades. There were no distracting noises even
though it was recorded at home.
Aural Qualities
The quality of the voice and incidental music
mixed with the sound effects were good.
The joints between music and effects could have
been smoother in places.
Overall the delivery was well received.
Audience Appeal
The feedback I received was mainly positive.
I made sure the music fitted well to add to the
magical feel which would have appealed to my
young teenage audience. It helped people to
connect and link with the films.
I varied the music from the 2003 Peter Pan,
Disney’s Peter Pan and also the Pan pies from Once
Upon a Time.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
Lots of content
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Jumps could be better
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– It is long and has lots of different information
– The background music fits well
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
• There is a few points when there is long
breaks in speaking
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
Voice over is beautifully read and engaging.
Enjoyed the use of Background music
Sounds professional
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Voice to be louder
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– The podcast was put together well
– I agree it was a little Jumpy and could have
smoother transitions
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– Nothing
Peer Feedback Summary
Overall people enjoyed it and were positive but they
think it was perhaps a little too stretched out.
I would make the transitions smoother between effects
and music to make the podcast flow a little better and I
would rehearse and work out how long the pauses
between points and paragraphs need to be.

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7. evaluation(4)

  • 3. Research I looked up podcasts on comparing different TV shows and thought about how they started and ended etc.
  • 4. Time Management I think I managed my time well, I stuck to my schedule and used time outside lessons to record my audio and also work on my script. I made sure I recorded it when there would be no distractions in my house.
  • 5. Planning I planned well. I made sure I got all the sound effects and had put them in the order I needed. I wrote the whole script and made sure I compared the similarities and differences between the Disney’s Peter Pan and The Once Upon a time’s version well.
  • 6. Technical Qualities The sound Quality was good but needed to have the Voice over a little louder. The sound effects worked well and the background music was edited well but between sound effects they seem a little “Jumpy” as I did not know about fades. There were no distracting noises even though it was recorded at home.
  • 7. Aural Qualities The quality of the voice and incidental music mixed with the sound effects were good. The joints between music and effects could have been smoother in places. Overall the delivery was well received.
  • 8. Audience Appeal The feedback I received was mainly positive. I made sure the music fitted well to add to the magical feel which would have appealed to my young teenage audience. It helped people to connect and link with the films. I varied the music from the 2003 Peter Pan, Disney’s Peter Pan and also the Pan pies from Once Upon a Time.
  • 10. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? Lots of content • What improvements could have been made to the product? – Jumps could be better
  • 11. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? – It is long and has lots of different information – The background music fits well • What improvements could have been made to the product? • There is a few points when there is long breaks in speaking
  • 12. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product? Voice over is beautifully read and engaging. Enjoyed the use of Background music Sounds professional • What improvements could have been made to the product? – Voice to be louder
  • 13. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? – The podcast was put together well – I agree it was a little Jumpy and could have smoother transitions • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? – Nothing
  • 14. Peer Feedback Summary Overall people enjoyed it and were positive but they think it was perhaps a little too stretched out. I would make the transitions smoother between effects and music to make the podcast flow a little better and I would rehearse and work out how long the pauses between points and paragraphs need to be.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  3. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences
  5. Does your work sound good? Was it creative? What aspects of your product’s audio do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Make reference to specific recordings, dialogue, music and sound effects
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?