This feedback form provides comments on various courseworks submitted by a student named Jim Machin. For an academic essay, the marker praised Jim's clear writing style but noted the content could be more scientific and analytical. For a journalistic article, the marker asked who the intended audience was. The proforma demonstrated engagement but did not appear to search academic databases. Areas for improvement included including more scientific detail, developing arguments based on evidence, citing sources more frequently, and improving the structure and organization of ideas. The marker provided an assessment rubric and comments to help explain the overall mark of 55%.
This document summarizes the requirements for a student's interdisciplinary synthesis project on a topic related to women's health. The project involves several steps including a paper proposal, source genealogy, first submission, peer review presentation, and final paper. The final paper must integrate scholarship from at least two distinct academic disciplines, one from health sciences and one from social sciences or humanities. It must be based on at least six peer-reviewed sources and make an original argument supported through logical analysis and comparison of the different disciplinary perspectives. The goal is for students to demonstrate interdisciplinary thinking through synthesizing knowledge from multiple areas of study.
Writing essay has different stages which form the common phrases of essay. The phrases are planning, thinking, researching, writing and editing. This lesson guides you how to write essay through the understanding of these phrases.
This document discusses key aspects of academic writing such as structure, style, and referencing. It explains that academic writing focuses on theories and causes while following conventions of formal tone, grammar, and structure. Common structures include essays, with introductions, bodies, and conclusions, and reports with labeled sections. The document also outlines four main referencing styles - APA, MLA, Harvard and Chicago - and provides examples of how sources are cited in each.
This document discusses various types of academic writing. It provides guidance on writing book reviews, annotated bibliographies, comparative essays, literature reviews, abstracts, philosophy essays, scientific writing, and admissions letters. For each type, it outlines key elements to include such as comparing similarities and differences, identifying an author's thesis, contributions to the field, and one's own critical opinions for book reviews. It emphasizes the importance of being clear, concise, and well-organized across all academic writing types.
This document provides guidance on writing key parts of a thesis proposal, including the problem statement, literature review, and research methodology chapter. It discusses how to develop a good research problem and title, and outlines the necessary components of the introduction, problem statement, significance of the study, scope and limitations, and definition of terms sections in the first chapter. It also provides tips for structuring the literature review and related studies chapters, including how to group and link sources. The document aims to help students write their thesis proposals effectively.
This document provides advice on various aspects of academic writing, including essay structure, thesis statements, introductions and conclusions, paragraphs, and research. Some key points include:
- Academic essays should develop a central thesis through reasoning and evidence. They should have an argument and answer a question.
- Paragraphs should each focus on one main idea or point, expressed in a topic sentence. They should be adequately supported with details.
- Outlines are an important part of writing and planning an essay. They help ensure a logical flow of ideas and thorough coverage of the topic.
- Introductions should provide context and indicate the essay's focus. Conclusions should provide a sense of closure while connecting back to
This document summarizes the requirements for a student's interdisciplinary synthesis project on a topic related to women's health. The project involves several steps including a paper proposal, source genealogy, first submission, peer review presentation, and final paper. The final paper must integrate scholarship from at least two distinct academic disciplines, one from health sciences and one from social sciences or humanities. It must be based on at least six peer-reviewed sources and make an original argument supported through logical analysis and comparison of the different disciplinary perspectives. The goal is for students to demonstrate interdisciplinary thinking through synthesizing knowledge from multiple areas of study.
Writing essay has different stages which form the common phrases of essay. The phrases are planning, thinking, researching, writing and editing. This lesson guides you how to write essay through the understanding of these phrases.
This document discusses key aspects of academic writing such as structure, style, and referencing. It explains that academic writing focuses on theories and causes while following conventions of formal tone, grammar, and structure. Common structures include essays, with introductions, bodies, and conclusions, and reports with labeled sections. The document also outlines four main referencing styles - APA, MLA, Harvard and Chicago - and provides examples of how sources are cited in each.
This document discusses various types of academic writing. It provides guidance on writing book reviews, annotated bibliographies, comparative essays, literature reviews, abstracts, philosophy essays, scientific writing, and admissions letters. For each type, it outlines key elements to include such as comparing similarities and differences, identifying an author's thesis, contributions to the field, and one's own critical opinions for book reviews. It emphasizes the importance of being clear, concise, and well-organized across all academic writing types.
This document provides guidance on writing key parts of a thesis proposal, including the problem statement, literature review, and research methodology chapter. It discusses how to develop a good research problem and title, and outlines the necessary components of the introduction, problem statement, significance of the study, scope and limitations, and definition of terms sections in the first chapter. It also provides tips for structuring the literature review and related studies chapters, including how to group and link sources. The document aims to help students write their thesis proposals effectively.
This document provides advice on various aspects of academic writing, including essay structure, thesis statements, introductions and conclusions, paragraphs, and research. Some key points include:
- Academic essays should develop a central thesis through reasoning and evidence. They should have an argument and answer a question.
- Paragraphs should each focus on one main idea or point, expressed in a topic sentence. They should be adequately supported with details.
- Outlines are an important part of writing and planning an essay. They help ensure a logical flow of ideas and thorough coverage of the topic.
- Introductions should provide context and indicate the essay's focus. Conclusions should provide a sense of closure while connecting back to
This document provides advice on various aspects of academic writing such as essay structure, composition methods, characteristics, topics, planning, outlining, thesis statements, introductions, conclusions, paragraphs, and revision. Some key points include:
- An essay should have an argument, answer a question, and try to prove something. It should develop a hypothesis after formulating questions.
- Successful composition methods include starting early, writing the readiest parts first, and revising sentences, diction, and economy.
- Essay structure can vary in terms of points and paragraph length, but paragraphs typically begin with a topic sentence and transition between ideas.
- Careful planning and outlining helps focus the writing and organization.
This document provides an overview of the resources and services available at the Dalhousie University Writing Centre, including help with any phase of the writing process, organization and structure, and referencing. It then discusses key aspects of writing a research paper such as understanding the assignment, choosing a topic, developing a thesis statement, researching and outlining, drafting and revising the paper, using secondary sources, and proper referencing. The writing process and elements of a strong paper such as clear organization, coherent paragraphs, and effective transitions are also explained.
This document provides guidance on writing the introduction chapter of a thesis. The introduction has two parts: a general introduction to the topic and the thesis statement. An introduction should introduce the topic, gain the reader's interest, and demonstrate the relevance of the study. Key parts of an introduction include the motivation, current scientific situation, objective of the study, and brief research design description. The introduction sets up the overall thesis while keeping a concise length.
This document provides an overview of academic writing standards for third-level students. It discusses the differences between personal and academic writing, with academic writing using subject-specific vocabulary to comment and analyze information from various sources. The document also outlines the main purposes of academic writing as exposition, persuasion, and narration. It provides guidance on structuring writing, referencing sources, avoiding plagiarism, and following bibliographic conventions.
This document provides guidance on developing academic writing skills through a one-day workshop. It discusses the key components of a research proposal, including defining the problem, reviewing relevant literature, and describing the proposed research methodology. It also outlines the typical structure of a research proposal into three chapters: introduction, literature review, and research methodology. Finally, it discusses how the proposal is transformed into a thesis research report, with additional chapters for data presentation and analyses and conclusions. The overall document serves as a handbook to train participants in best practices for academic writing, research proposals, and thesis reports.
Academic essays require an argument supported by evidence from sources. They should have an introduction that provides context and a thesis, body paragraphs that develop the argument, and a conclusion. When writing, students should do research, take notes, write drafts, and revise for clarity, flow, and to address any errors. Proper formatting of citations and references is needed to avoid plagiarism.
This document provides information about abstracts, including definitions of descriptive and informative abstracts, guidelines for writing abstracts, and examples. It defines an abstract as a short summary that describes the key points of a larger work. Descriptive abstracts outline the topic and scope while informative abstracts also include results and conclusions. The document explains that abstracts allow readers to quickly evaluate a work's relevance and are useful for indexing in databases. It provides tips for writing abstracts, such as identifying the problem, methodology, and implications. Examples of both descriptive and informative humanities and science abstracts are included to illustrate the components and style.
When you’re undertaking tertiary study there are often a lot of assignments and writing to do, which can be daunting at first. The most important thing to remember is to start - and start early. This presentation was made based on an article published on Open Polytechnic NZ.
This document defines a literature review and provides guidance on how to write one. It states that a literature review critically evaluates previous research on a topic to provide background and a theoretical foundation. It should not simply list or summarize sources. The document outlines the purpose, structure, skills, process, and common errors of conducting a literature review to help writers effectively summarize existing scholarly work related to their research problem.
This document provides advice on various aspects of academic writing for college students. It discusses how to plan and organize an essay by formulating an argument, thesis, and topic. It also covers how to structure introductions, conclusions, and paragraphs. The document offers tips for reading critically and researching topics, as well as using and citing sources properly to avoid plagiarism. It provides guidance on writing different types of assignments such as book reviews, annotated bibliographies, literature reviews, abstracts, and comparative essays. Finally, it gives some specific advice for writing history and literature papers.
This document provides a guide for writing academic papers. It outlines the goal of academic writing as exploring a topic of interest through critical thinking and developing skills like research, analysis, and clear writing. The guide describes 10 key principles for academic papers, including having a clear purpose, engaging the audience, supporting a clear thesis with logical organization, strong evidence, and correct citation style. It provides tips for each section of a paper and the writing and revision process.
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This document provides guidance on writing the introduction section of a research paper. It explains that an introduction introduces the topic, reviews previous literature, and states the research questions or hypotheses. The recommended structure includes an opening paragraph, literature review, and summary. The opening paragraph should include a statement of the topic, a summary of previous findings, what is missing from the literature, the aim of the study, and an overview of the study approach. An example opening paragraph is provided to illustrate this structure.
Rubrics research paper and presentation rubric for the final pssusere73ce3
The document outlines the rubrics for evaluating student research papers and presentations. It provides grading criteria for papers in areas such as integration of course concepts, topic focus, depth of discussion, cohesiveness, writing mechanics, and use of sources. Presentations are graded on content, creativity, speaking skills, audience interaction, and length. Students must write a 10-12 page research paper on a topic of their choice using at least 5 current sources, cite sources properly using APA style, and present their findings in a 10 minute presentation to be evaluated based on the outlined rubrics.
A genre based analysis on the discussion section of ph d research manuscript ...Tutors India
During the course of writing your undergraduate dissertation, there will be a time when you have to take up the task of writing a literature review. For those who are unaware, a literature review is deemed as an integral part of academic writing which would be instrumental in signifying understanding and knowledge about academic literature regarding a particular topic [1]. However, the important aspect that academic researchers need to know is that literature review is not just about writing, on the contrary, it would consist of critically assessing the literature [2]. That’s the main reason why it is known as a literature review. Otherwise, it could have very well been termed as a literature report.
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The student received a categorical mark of 2:1 for their literature review task. The assessor provided strengths and suggestions for improvement. Key strengths included an introduction that set the background well, a range of primary research was summarized cohesively, and an academic writing style was demonstrated. Suggestions for improvement included adding more of the student's own opinions on the studies' claims, considering other diagnostic techniques, including further subheadings, and minor formatting issues. The student commented they will focus on critical analysis and improving presentation in future work.
This document provides feedback on a literature review completed by student Dorobantu, Adina. The assessor provides strengths of the literature review, including clear writing, wide range of literature covered, good scientific detail and critical analysis. Suggestions for improvement include being more critical of information presented, focusing on either pathogenic mechanisms or therapeutic strategies in more detail, and standardizing the bibliography presentation. The student comments they will use the feedback to improve future work.
This document contains an assessment grid that was used to evaluate a student's literature review. The criteria assessed include the use of research sources, scientific content, argument and analysis, essay structure, academic writing style, presentation and grammar, and citation and referencing format. For each criterion, descriptors are provided for performance levels ranging from 0-20% to 80-100%. The student received a total score of 62/100. Strengths noted were the inclusion of figures and engagement with scientific style. Suggestions for improvement included providing more in-depth scientific explanations, defining all abbreviations, including more primary references, and improving coherence and flow. The student acknowledged the need to write more deeply and coherently explain concepts.
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Final Assessment Point - Guidelines for the Case Study
Module title: Inclusive Pedagogy and Evidencing Impact on Learners
Assessment task: Case Study
Word count limit: 4,500 words
Submission deadline: Please consult the VLE.
Submission procedure: Please submit via the submission link on the VLE.
Extenuating circumstances
If you are experiencing unforeseen personal circumstances that are affecting your ability to
submit within the stipulated deadlines, you are required to communicate these issues to the
Unicaf Extenuating Circumstances team in the first instance, via
[email protected], for further information on how to make a personal
circumstances application for consideration.
Personal circumstances requests may usually only be made within 5 working days of the
original deadline unless valid justification, along with appropriate evidence, exists to show
that you could not have reasonably communicated the issues any earlier. It is
important to keep in mind that if the claim is not upheld and you have not submitted by the
deadline, the module shall be failed as a result of no submission of the summative
assessment.
Academic misconduct including plagiarism
………
……….
……….
By submitting your work you acknowledge that you have read and agree
with the above statements.
mailto:[email protected]
mailto:[email protected]
2
General Guidance
Your assignment should be word processed (handwritten assignments are not accepted),
using time new roman size 12 font, double spaced, with numbered pages and your student
number printed as a footer on every page.
The word limits stated for this assignment excludes the reference list at the end of the
assignment but includes all text in the main body of the assignment (including direct
quotations, in-text citations, footnotes, tables, diagrams and graphs).
Please be aware that exceeding the word count limit will affect the academic judgement of
the piece of work and may result in the award of a lower mark.
Appendices are not considered a supplement, and thus, will not be assessed as part of the
content of the assignment. As such, they will not contribute to the grade awarded, however
it may be appropriate to use an Appendices section for any material which is a useful reference
for the reader. Please note that appendices are not included in the word count.
The majority of references should come from primary sources (e.g., journal articles,
conference papers, reports, etc.) although you can also utilise area specific textbooks. You
must ensure that you use the Harvard style of referencing.
Please indicate the word count length at the end of your assignment.
Please note that you are required to submit an extended literature review project where you
will critically evaluate scholarly articles and books in order to answer specific research
questions.
NO STUDENT WILL BE ALLOWED TO COLLECT ANY .
This document provides advice on various aspects of academic writing such as essay structure, composition methods, characteristics, topics, planning, outlining, thesis statements, introductions, conclusions, paragraphs, and revision. Some key points include:
- An essay should have an argument, answer a question, and try to prove something. It should develop a hypothesis after formulating questions.
- Successful composition methods include starting early, writing the readiest parts first, and revising sentences, diction, and economy.
- Essay structure can vary in terms of points and paragraph length, but paragraphs typically begin with a topic sentence and transition between ideas.
- Careful planning and outlining helps focus the writing and organization.
This document provides an overview of the resources and services available at the Dalhousie University Writing Centre, including help with any phase of the writing process, organization and structure, and referencing. It then discusses key aspects of writing a research paper such as understanding the assignment, choosing a topic, developing a thesis statement, researching and outlining, drafting and revising the paper, using secondary sources, and proper referencing. The writing process and elements of a strong paper such as clear organization, coherent paragraphs, and effective transitions are also explained.
This document provides guidance on writing the introduction chapter of a thesis. The introduction has two parts: a general introduction to the topic and the thesis statement. An introduction should introduce the topic, gain the reader's interest, and demonstrate the relevance of the study. Key parts of an introduction include the motivation, current scientific situation, objective of the study, and brief research design description. The introduction sets up the overall thesis while keeping a concise length.
This document provides an overview of academic writing standards for third-level students. It discusses the differences between personal and academic writing, with academic writing using subject-specific vocabulary to comment and analyze information from various sources. The document also outlines the main purposes of academic writing as exposition, persuasion, and narration. It provides guidance on structuring writing, referencing sources, avoiding plagiarism, and following bibliographic conventions.
This document provides guidance on developing academic writing skills through a one-day workshop. It discusses the key components of a research proposal, including defining the problem, reviewing relevant literature, and describing the proposed research methodology. It also outlines the typical structure of a research proposal into three chapters: introduction, literature review, and research methodology. Finally, it discusses how the proposal is transformed into a thesis research report, with additional chapters for data presentation and analyses and conclusions. The overall document serves as a handbook to train participants in best practices for academic writing, research proposals, and thesis reports.
Academic essays require an argument supported by evidence from sources. They should have an introduction that provides context and a thesis, body paragraphs that develop the argument, and a conclusion. When writing, students should do research, take notes, write drafts, and revise for clarity, flow, and to address any errors. Proper formatting of citations and references is needed to avoid plagiarism.
This document provides information about abstracts, including definitions of descriptive and informative abstracts, guidelines for writing abstracts, and examples. It defines an abstract as a short summary that describes the key points of a larger work. Descriptive abstracts outline the topic and scope while informative abstracts also include results and conclusions. The document explains that abstracts allow readers to quickly evaluate a work's relevance and are useful for indexing in databases. It provides tips for writing abstracts, such as identifying the problem, methodology, and implications. Examples of both descriptive and informative humanities and science abstracts are included to illustrate the components and style.
When you’re undertaking tertiary study there are often a lot of assignments and writing to do, which can be daunting at first. The most important thing to remember is to start - and start early. This presentation was made based on an article published on Open Polytechnic NZ.
This document defines a literature review and provides guidance on how to write one. It states that a literature review critically evaluates previous research on a topic to provide background and a theoretical foundation. It should not simply list or summarize sources. The document outlines the purpose, structure, skills, process, and common errors of conducting a literature review to help writers effectively summarize existing scholarly work related to their research problem.
This document provides advice on various aspects of academic writing for college students. It discusses how to plan and organize an essay by formulating an argument, thesis, and topic. It also covers how to structure introductions, conclusions, and paragraphs. The document offers tips for reading critically and researching topics, as well as using and citing sources properly to avoid plagiarism. It provides guidance on writing different types of assignments such as book reviews, annotated bibliographies, literature reviews, abstracts, and comparative essays. Finally, it gives some specific advice for writing history and literature papers.
This document provides a guide for writing academic papers. It outlines the goal of academic writing as exploring a topic of interest through critical thinking and developing skills like research, analysis, and clear writing. The guide describes 10 key principles for academic papers, including having a clear purpose, engaging the audience, supporting a clear thesis with logical organization, strong evidence, and correct citation style. It provides tips for each section of a paper and the writing and revision process.
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How to write an introduction the first paragraph tcm18-117650Adib Che Ibrahim
This document provides guidance on writing the introduction section of a research paper. It explains that an introduction introduces the topic, reviews previous literature, and states the research questions or hypotheses. The recommended structure includes an opening paragraph, literature review, and summary. The opening paragraph should include a statement of the topic, a summary of previous findings, what is missing from the literature, the aim of the study, and an overview of the study approach. An example opening paragraph is provided to illustrate this structure.
Rubrics research paper and presentation rubric for the final pssusere73ce3
The document outlines the rubrics for evaluating student research papers and presentations. It provides grading criteria for papers in areas such as integration of course concepts, topic focus, depth of discussion, cohesiveness, writing mechanics, and use of sources. Presentations are graded on content, creativity, speaking skills, audience interaction, and length. Students must write a 10-12 page research paper on a topic of their choice using at least 5 current sources, cite sources properly using APA style, and present their findings in a 10 minute presentation to be evaluated based on the outlined rubrics.
A genre based analysis on the discussion section of ph d research manuscript ...Tutors India
During the course of writing your undergraduate dissertation, there will be a time when you have to take up the task of writing a literature review. For those who are unaware, a literature review is deemed as an integral part of academic writing which would be instrumental in signifying understanding and knowledge about academic literature regarding a particular topic [1]. However, the important aspect that academic researchers need to know is that literature review is not just about writing, on the contrary, it would consist of critically assessing the literature [2]. That’s the main reason why it is known as a literature review. Otherwise, it could have very well been termed as a literature report.
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The student received a categorical mark of 2:1 for their literature review task. The assessor provided strengths and suggestions for improvement. Key strengths included an introduction that set the background well, a range of primary research was summarized cohesively, and an academic writing style was demonstrated. Suggestions for improvement included adding more of the student's own opinions on the studies' claims, considering other diagnostic techniques, including further subheadings, and minor formatting issues. The student commented they will focus on critical analysis and improving presentation in future work.
This document provides feedback on a literature review completed by student Dorobantu, Adina. The assessor provides strengths of the literature review, including clear writing, wide range of literature covered, good scientific detail and critical analysis. Suggestions for improvement include being more critical of information presented, focusing on either pathogenic mechanisms or therapeutic strategies in more detail, and standardizing the bibliography presentation. The student comments they will use the feedback to improve future work.
This document contains an assessment grid that was used to evaluate a student's literature review. The criteria assessed include the use of research sources, scientific content, argument and analysis, essay structure, academic writing style, presentation and grammar, and citation and referencing format. For each criterion, descriptors are provided for performance levels ranging from 0-20% to 80-100%. The student received a total score of 62/100. Strengths noted were the inclusion of figures and engagement with scientific style. Suggestions for improvement included providing more in-depth scientific explanations, defining all abbreviations, including more primary references, and improving coherence and flow. The student acknowledged the need to write more deeply and coherently explain concepts.
1 Final Assessment Point - Guidelines for the Case Stu.docxrobert345678
1
Final Assessment Point - Guidelines for the Case Study
Module title: Inclusive Pedagogy and Evidencing Impact on Learners
Assessment task: Case Study
Word count limit: 4,500 words
Submission deadline: Please consult the VLE.
Submission procedure: Please submit via the submission link on the VLE.
Extenuating circumstances
If you are experiencing unforeseen personal circumstances that are affecting your ability to
submit within the stipulated deadlines, you are required to communicate these issues to the
Unicaf Extenuating Circumstances team in the first instance, via
[email protected], for further information on how to make a personal
circumstances application for consideration.
Personal circumstances requests may usually only be made within 5 working days of the
original deadline unless valid justification, along with appropriate evidence, exists to show
that you could not have reasonably communicated the issues any earlier. It is
important to keep in mind that if the claim is not upheld and you have not submitted by the
deadline, the module shall be failed as a result of no submission of the summative
assessment.
Academic misconduct including plagiarism
………
……….
……….
By submitting your work you acknowledge that you have read and agree
with the above statements.
mailto:[email protected]
mailto:[email protected]
2
General Guidance
Your assignment should be word processed (handwritten assignments are not accepted),
using time new roman size 12 font, double spaced, with numbered pages and your student
number printed as a footer on every page.
The word limits stated for this assignment excludes the reference list at the end of the
assignment but includes all text in the main body of the assignment (including direct
quotations, in-text citations, footnotes, tables, diagrams and graphs).
Please be aware that exceeding the word count limit will affect the academic judgement of
the piece of work and may result in the award of a lower mark.
Appendices are not considered a supplement, and thus, will not be assessed as part of the
content of the assignment. As such, they will not contribute to the grade awarded, however
it may be appropriate to use an Appendices section for any material which is a useful reference
for the reader. Please note that appendices are not included in the word count.
The majority of references should come from primary sources (e.g., journal articles,
conference papers, reports, etc.) although you can also utilise area specific textbooks. You
must ensure that you use the Harvard style of referencing.
Please indicate the word count length at the end of your assignment.
Please note that you are required to submit an extended literature review project where you
will critically evaluate scholarly articles and books in order to answer specific research
questions.
NO STUDENT WILL BE ALLOWED TO COLLECT ANY .
Following the Topic Selection Guidelines below, choose an argumentat.docxalfred4lewis58146
Following the Topic Selection Guidelines below, choose an argumentative topic to research. This will be your topic throughout the entire course, so the activities required for this assignment will provide the foundation for your future Touchstones. The topic for an argumentative research paper must be a debatable topic, meaning that it involves conflicting viewpoints. Additionally, it cannot be a topic that is already decided or agreed upon by most of society. You will need to take a firm position on the topic and use evidence and logic to support the position. Touchstone 1.2 includes a research question, a working thesis, a detailed outline, and a reflection on this pre-writing process.
A. Topic Selection Guidelines
DIRECTIONS:
You may choose any topic you wish as long as the topic has two clear sides and is not agreed upon by most of society. Your topic should be current, appropriate for an academic context and should have a focus suitable for a 6-8 page essay.
B. Research Guidelines
DIRECTIONS:
Refer to the list below throughout the writing process. Do not submit your Touchstone until it meets these guidelines.
1. Research Question and Working Thesis
Keep in mind:
The research question and working thesis are the driving force behind your research and eventual argument.
❒ Your research question should be a single sentence, framed as a question.
❒ Your working thesis should be a single focused sentence, framed as a statement that takes a clear position on the research question.
❒ Include your research question followed by your working thesis.
2. Detailed Outline
Keep in mind:
Your detailed outline provides a map of the argumentative research essay that you will write, including your key claims and the sources that support them. You may not have all your sources yet, and that is fine. The outline is a way to organize your essay and determine which areas (e.g. your sub-points) will require researched evidence as support.
❒ Headings: one for each paragraph with a brief label of the paragraph’s controlling idea(s); at least 7 body paragraphs, an introduction, and a conclusion
❒ Introduction includes your working thesis.
❒ Body paragraphs should each have their own unique title and key points.
❒ Conclusion includes notes on your final thoughts.
❒ Subheadings: two to five for each paragraph, below each heading, indicating key points that support the controlling idea
❒ Sources: one to three for each subheading, as relevant, indicating the support for the key point
❒ For each source, include the author’s name and the idea or information relevant to your argument (e.g. “Lappé on mono-cropping corn/soy and production”).
3. Reflection
❒ Have you displayed a clear understanding of the research activities?
❒ Have you answered all reflection questions thoughtfully and included insights, observations, and/or examples in all responses?
❒ Are your answers included on a separate page below the main assignment?
C. Reflection Que.
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Essay 3
Analytical Research Essay
1st Draft Due: Friday, November 19
Final Draft Due: Wednesday, December 8
Length Requirement: 5-7 pages
Audience: Consider your subject matter, then decide who would be the best or most likely
audience for such a topic. Imagine that your audience includes experts in the topic you are
discussing. Your tone and voice should be appropriate for someone addressing experts in the
field. For instance, if you chose to discuss how the concerns of farmers weigh into the decisions
of politicians, you might consider your audience to be farmers as a whole and others in the
agricultural industry. On the other hand, you might want to consider politicians or the electorate
as your audience. Determining your audience depends on who you think needs to hear your
report. It is possible that once you get into the revision process, your perception of the
appropriate audience may change. And ideally, your overall thesis should evolve as you gather
evidence and revise your essay.
Your Assignment: The goal of this assignment is to choose a topic of personal interest, then
utilize the library database and other credible sources to provide a comprehensive, objective
analysis of the research material. You will start your research very broad, and then become more
specific as you locate sources. Determine your thesis statement based on the exercises and
research done prior to this assignment. Your thesis should present an original viewpoint on your
subject matter. This is not an argumentative or persuasive essay. You will utilize and interpret
sources to support your analysis of the topic. Choose sources that provide supporting facts,
definitions, or anecdotes. You should not use sources to make your point for you. Present your
viewpoint without personal bias or emotional language, but instead with logical reasoning. Your
essay must utilize at least 3 academic/scholarly sources. Other sources may be included, but
they will not count toward the 3 sources required by the assignment, and they must be credible.
You must utilize at least 3 quotations in your essay. Block quotes are highly discouraged.
Format: MLA or APA format, Times New Roman, 12-point font, one-inch margins, double
spaced. Number your pages and include a header at the top left corner of the page with your
name, my name, the class name, and the date. Provide a Works Cited page for any and all
sources referenced (not included in page count). Keep in mind that there are proper ways of
citing your own primary research in both MLA and APA formats. And as always, please give
your paper an appropriate title. Be creative!
Objectives:
This assignment is designed to address the following Learning Outcomes:
The ability to write in a range of genres, using appropriate rhetorical conventions.
Competency in reading, quoting and citing sources, as well as competency in balancing the
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This document provides guidance for students on completing a unit assessment involving both visual and written elements. It outlines the requirements and expectations for the personal investigation component, including: conducting research and developing an initial proposal; maintaining an annotated sketchbook; producing development work and final outcomes; and writing an essay between 1,000-3,000 words. The essay must discuss ideas and findings, reflect on the student's own work, and identify connections to the work of selected artists. Guidelines are provided on critically analyzing artworks, comparing different artists' works, and using appropriate terminology. Tips are included for structuring the essay writing process.
The document discusses key components of a research paper such as the background of the study, conceptual framework, research hypothesis, statement of the research problem, and scope and delimitation of the study. It provides guidance on how to write an effective background section, including covering key concepts, maintaining balance, and avoiding ambiguity. Examples are given of different parts of a research paper like a background section and conceptual framework.
This document outlines the key elements and structure for writing a thesis proposal focused on designing curriculum. It provides guidelines for the typical chapters and sections, including: an introduction with the problem statement and objectives; a literature review to provide context and rationale; methodology describing the curriculum design, subjects, measures, and evaluations; proposed curriculum units and lessons as a results chapter; and a discussion chapter. Key elements are described for each section, such as defining terms, describing the sample and measures, and providing detailed procedures to allow for replication. The goal is to concisely propose and design a curriculum-focused thesis that can be implemented and evaluated.
This document outlines the key elements and structure for writing a thesis proposal focused on designing curriculum. It provides guidelines for the typical chapters and sections, including: an introduction with the problem statement and objectives; a literature review to provide context and rationale; methodology describing the curriculum design, subjects, measures, and evaluations; proposed curriculum units and lessons as a results chapter; and discussion of findings. Key aspects of each section are defined, such as describing the curriculum approach, subject selection process, and evaluation techniques with enough detail to allow replication. The goal is to concisely propose and design a curriculum that can be implemented and assessed to address the objectives.
Requirements and Evaluation ofResearch Paper Each student in H.docxheunice
Requirements and Evaluation ofResearch Paper
Each student in HAS 5125 course will be asked to write a polished original research paper. The research paper will increase the student’s critical perspectives, awareness, and knowledge in a course subject area. Each paper will focus on a specific and narrowly defined topic. The topic could be formulation, implementation, or/and modification phases of any health policy making at federal or state level. Students choose the focus of their papers based on their professional and academic interests within the course’s context. All topics must be approved before writing. Students may consult individually with instructor as they formulate research topics, collect sources, draft their papers, and revise work for final submission.
The paper should demonstrate that the student has read widely and critically in the relevant field. The student has a chance to present his/her point of view through a well-structured and compelling paper while properly citing others’ ideas. The paper’s references section should include at least 5reliable, current, and professional sources.
The paper must be at least 9 pages long including an abstract, with 12-pt font double-spaced, and 1 inch margins all around. The paper should adhere to the American Psychological Association style manual, and must be submitted to the Blackboard before the deadline. According to FIU policy, student papers will be checked by the Blackboard plagiarism detection software. Violations of the student code of conduct (plagiarism, cheating) will result in an F being assigned for this course.
Research Paper Rubric
4
Exceeds Expectations
3
Meets Expectations
2
Approaches Expectations
1
Does not Meet Expectations
Abstract
Clearly and sequentially conveys the content of paper
Gives a general overview of paper topic, but no sequential elaboration of contents
Does not provide a clear representation of paper contents
Not provided
Topic Introduction
Excellent introduction that addressed purpose, theoretical basis, and significance of the paper topic. The significance of the research paper has been established and grounded in previous knowledge or research.
Adequate introduce purpose, and significance of the topic with some weaknesses. The significance of the research has been established.
Significant weaknesses in introduction of purpose, significance of the topic.
The introduction is unacceptable.
Development
Paper statement or research question addresses a relevant and specific course area and advances a new argument or perspective
Paper statement or research question addresses a relevant and specific course area
Paper statement or research question is overly general but makes an arguable claim
Paper statement or research question is not well defined or absent
Evidence
Paper statement or research question is thoroughly supported by evidence, examples, observations, and appropriate citations
Paper statement or research qu.
1. Research Paper75 points (See Grading Rubric Below)The purpsalmonpybus
1. Research Paper 75 points (See Grading Rubric Below)
The purpose of this assignment is to provide you with an opportunity to move from beyond basic mastery of developmental aspects of behavior to a more advanced integrative knowledge of the ways in which development is a constant interplay of affective, biological, cognitive, social, and other aspects of behaviors. For this paper you are asked to select a topic or issue in developmental psychology that you would like to learn more about. After reviewing a minimum of 12 peer-reviewed journal articles and/or scholarly books, you will write a paper that outlines your topic and explains its relevance to developmental psychology. In your review of the literature make sure that you address two or more aspects of behavior (affective, biological, cognitive, social, etc.) related to your developmental issue. You must also include a discussion of cultural considerations and how aspects of individual and cultural diversity may impact your topic. Your paper should be 10-12 pages long, not including Title Page and References. Below is a sample outline for your paper.
I. Abstract
II. Introduction
a. Provide a brief overview of your topic or issue.
b. Explain why you chose this topic and its relevance to human development.
III. Review and Integration of the Literature
IV. Further Directions for Prevention, Treatment, and/or Research
V. References
Research Paper Rubric
A (67-75 points)
B (60-66
points)
C (52-59
points)
D or below (< 52 points)
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most part
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understands and has
concepts found
of the research.
that the author
applied concepts
in research
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has fully
found in research.
materials and
apply or
understood the
Research and
has applied the
integrate the
topic. The
concepts are
concepts
concepts and
concepts were
integrated in
studied. Some
topics studied.
not accurately
author’s own words.
of the
applied or
The writer provides
conclusions,
synthesized.
concluding remarks
however, are
that show insight,
not supported
analysis, and
in the body of
synthesis of ideas.
the paper.
Topic Focus
The topic is focused
The topic is
The topic is too
The topic is not
narrowly enough for
focused but
broad for the
clearly defined.
the scope of the
lacks direction.
scope of this
assignment. A
assignment.
thesis statement
provides direction
for the paper.
Depth of
In-depth discussion
In-depth
The writer has
Cursory
Discussion
and elaboration in
discussion and
omitted
discussion in
all sections of the
elaboration in
pertinent
all sections of
paper.
most sections
content or
the paper or
of the paper.
content runs-on
brief
excessively.
discussion in
Quotations
only a few
from others
sections.
outweigh the
writer’s own
ideas
excessively.
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Ties together
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Assessment Title: Term 2 Assessment essay -choose 1 out of the 3 titles (see below for essay titles)
Module Leader: Professor Shireen Kanji
Distribution Date:
Submission Deadline: 12:00 noon on **/**/****
Feedback by : **/**/**** (20 working days after the submission the deadline.)
Contribution to overall module assessment: 100 %
Indicative student time working on assessment: Hours
Word or Page Limit (if applicable): 2,500 (not including references)
Assessment Type (individual or group): Individual
Main Objective of the assessment
1. To demonstrate an understanding of how to apply a critical lens to understanding management and organizational issues and to demonstrate how
this approach differs from the mainstream.
2. To demonstrate the ability to read and synthesise arguments from the literature.
3. To demonstrate the ability to write a clear and cogent argument which draws on theories and concepts from the literature and illustrates these
concepts with examples in ways that are relevant to the question.
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Amended Assignment/Coursework Brief for 2019/20
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Write an essay (2, 500 words, not including references) on ONE of the following themes:
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Question 1: How does the Fordist system of production differ from the flexible system of production in terms of (i) the methods of production, (ii) systems
of control and (iii) effects on workers? Answer all three parts of the question.
OR
Question 2: In what ways are organisations gendered (50 marks) and what are the effects of this gendering on men and women? (50 marks)
OR
Question 3: Are multi-national corporations part of the problem or part of the solution to the global problems we face? Explain your answer drawing on at
least one theory of globalisation.
Points to remember:
· Specify your sources clearly in the assignment.
· Be as specific and clear as possible in explaining and supporting your claims.
· Use examples, well-chosen quotes and data as appropriate.
· Your assignment should include both a description and an analysis/interpretation, with emphasis on the latter. The linkage to course concepts should be
explicit. Although you need not explain or describe the course concepts in great depth, you should describe them briefly and provide references/citations to
their sources. Explicitly mention (and reference) course materials that are directly relevant to your analysis. The best way for you to demonstrate your
mastery of course concepts is to apply them appropriately in your analysis, explaining their relevance. Employ independent research and relevant additional
reading where relevant.
Submission Instructions
Coursework must be submitted electronicall.
This document outlines the required sections and formatting for a thesis or dissertation. It includes preliminaries like the title page, recommendation page, and abstract. It also describes the typical chapters which cover the introduction/problem statement, literature review, research methodology, results and discussion, and conclusions. Key sections and subsections are defined, such as defining terms, theoretical frameworks, data collection sources and procedures. Formatting guidelines are provided for citations, appendices, and curricula vitae.
King AbdulAziz University Faculty of Economics and Adm.docxdurantheseldine
King AbdulAziz University
Faculty of Economics and Administration
Human Resource Management Department
RESEARCH PROPOSAL GUIDELINE
Executive Master Program
Semester 1st Semester Academic Year 2022
STEPS TOWARDS YOUR PROPOSAL:
• Articles: You should read peer reviewed academic articles and answer the following questions for each
article.
o What is the author’s main purpose?
o What is the points s/he makes (related to your topic)?
o How the points are supported (what kind of evidence is used)?
o Whether the evidence seems strong and persuasive?
o The conclusions that are reached (related to your topic)
• Outline: You should use the notes on the articles and develop a detailed outline of all aspects of the final
research proposal.
• Rough Draft: Expand the outline by including details of what you intend to include in the final proposal.
Write your rough draft in the same manner you would in your final proposal. Remember your draft will help
you to figure out the quality of your proposal. Feel free to use a peer reviewer for feedback.
• Write your Final Proposal
o Title: You should include a relevant and interesting title to your research topic.
o Introduction: Write an introduction that engages the reader and includes important background
information.
o Literature Review: Use peer-reviewed academic articles to tie together the different ideas that shape
your research question
o Explanation of Research Questions: You should explain your primary research questions and any
other sub questions that may support answering the primary research question.
o Research Methodology: Identify which research method you will use and explain why you chose
that method (linking back to your research question and literature review)
o Bibliography: cite all sources in an appropriate style; APA style is preferred to be used.
King AbdulAziz University
Faculty of Economics and Administration
Human Resource Management Department
NOTE: Plagiarism is a serious research offense that may lead to your disqualification. Do not copy other
people’s work and whenever you use someone else’s work, ensure that you acknowledge it through proper
citation and referencing.
The commonest types of plagiarism may involve the following:
• Copying a paragraph word for word from a book, journal, webpage, lecture notes or other
printed or electronic source without acknowledgement.
• Copy the work of another student (past or present).
• Copying a paragraph, but making small changes, such as replacing a few verbs or adjectives
with words which mean the same thing.
• Cutting and pasting a paragraph by using a few sentences of the original but leaving one or
two out, or by putting one or two sentences in a different order.
• Putting a paragraph together by cutting and pasting a few choice phrases from a number of
different sources and adding in some words of your own.
King AbdulAziz Uni.
This document discusses quantitative research methods. It defines quantitative research as seeking to add to the body of knowledge through new discoveries and filling gaps. The key aspects of quantitative research covered are:
1. The research process involves planning, collecting and analyzing data, and reporting findings.
2. Problems are identified through observation, literature reviews, and experts in the field. The problem statement should precisely define the issue and be stated in a clear, declarative form.
3. A literature review analyzes and summarizes previous related studies on the topic, and provides context and justification for the present research. It identifies gaps and weaknesses in past work.
Touchstones are projects that illustrate your comprehension of the.docxjuliennehar
Touchstones are projects that illustrate your comprehension of the course material, help you refine skills, and demonstrate application of knowledge. You can work on a Touchstone anytime, but you can't submit it until you have completed the unit’s Challenges. Once you've submitted a Touchstone, it will be graded and counted toward your final course score.
Touchstone 1.1: Engage with a Work of Research
ASSIGNMENT: For this essay, you will select one of the articles provided below and engage in a 2-3 page summary and response dialogue with the source. This will involve providing a detailed summary of the source's argument and responding to that argument with your position based on the information provided in the source.
Article Option 1: "The Recess Debate: A Disjuncture between Educational Policy and Scientific Research"Article Option 2: "Sugar in School Breakfasts: A School District's Perspective"Sample Touchstone
A. Assignment Guidelines
DIRECTIONS: Refer to the list below throughout the writing process. Do not submit your Touchstone until it meets these guidelines.
1. Article Summary
❒ Have you communicated the source's purpose?
❒ Have you included all of the source's main points?
❒ Have you restated the source's argument in your own words?
2. Article Response
❒ Have you provided your perspective on the source's argument?
❒ Have you used specific examples from the source to illustrate why you either agree or disagree with the argument?
3. Reflection
❒ Have you answered all reflection questions thoughtfully and included insights, observations, and/or examples in all responses?
❒ Are your answers included on a separate page below the main assignment?
B. Reflection Questions
DIRECTIONS: Below your assignment, include answers to all of the following reflection questions.
1. What ideas originally came to mind when you first read through the article? Did your initial response to the article change after reading it for a second time? (3-4 sentences)
2. How does paying attention to the way you respond to a source help you formulate your stance on a topic? (2-3 sentences)
C. Rubric
Advanced (90-100%)
Proficient (80-89%)
Acceptable (70-79%)
Needs Improvement (50-69%)
Non-Performance (0-49%)
Source Summary
Summarize the main argument of a research source.
Provides a complete and accurate summary of the article’s main purpose and argument in the writer’s own words.
Provides an accurate summary of the article’s main purpose and argument in the writer’s own words.
Provides an accurate summary, but relies too heavily on source quotations.
Provides an incomplete summary of the article’s main purpose and argument and/or relies too heavily on source quotations.
Does not provide a complete and accurate summary of the article’s main purpose and argument in the writer’s own words.
Source Response
Articulate a response to the argument presented in a research source.
Constructs a thoughtful and academically appropriate response to the source, incl ...
The instructions and questions for this exam are visible once the .docxjmindy
The instructions and questions for this exam are visible once the exam is opened - there is no time limit on the exam and you have unlimited attempts to complete it. Please read the INSTRUCTIONS for this final exam, essay portion, carefully and remember to address every aspect of the question in your essay response. Remember, as well, to be specific - do not rely on generalizations to support your conclusions. Use specific historical examples, case studies, etc. as you formulate your essay response. You may want to work out your essay as a Microsoft Word document, first - save it as you compose it, and then "cut and paste" the finished product into the section provided for your response. That will allow you the opportunity to think carefully about the information you are providing in your response and to correct all spelling/typographical errors before the final submission. You may launch the exam, work on it, save it, and return to it later. Unlike the weekly quizzes, you are not forced to complete it once it is launched. Good Luck!
The purpose of this final essay question is two-fold: first, it gives you the opportunity to reflect upon the course content, respond in an honest and straightforward manner, and "show your stuff" in terms of what you've learned throughout the semester; secondly, it allows me the chance to implement that CAP, approach - CONTENT, ANALYSIS, PERSPECTIVE. You understand the CONTENT, you have the ability to CRITICALLY ANALYZE the material, and formulate a PERSPECTIVE. In other words, I want to see that you've actually THOUGHT about the material we've covered throughout the semester, and that you have the ability to articulate your thoughts on paper.
Keep in mind that you are free thinking, creative, intelligent students of history - therefore, I don't want to know what the author of your book has to say about a topic (I can read that for myself). While you can refer to the text when offering specific examples (i.e. statistical information, direct quotes), that material must be cited properly, including proper use of quotation marks and parenthetical citations. What I would really prefer to see is a creative use of the material from the textbook and supplemental material (websites found in the EXTERNAL LINKS folder, etc) incorporated into a well-organized, thoughtful, insightful essay that addresses each of the aforementioned questions in one way or another. I prefer that you utilize NO other sources than the textbook, external links, and your notes from the course. Approach this final exam as though we were engaging in a verbal exchange - I want to see that you've not only learned various aspects of United States History, but that you also enhanced your ability to THINK for yourself!
It's QUALITY, not quantity! Therefore, I am looking for a comprehensive reflection on the course material. You may be able to do that in 500 words, or perhaps it may take you 1500 words to complete that task. Responses a.
Eng 101 e3 The Summary + Response” ESSAY Writing based on read.docxSALU18
Eng 101
e3 The “Summary + Response” ESSAY: Writing based on reading about language, culture & identity
The summary+response essay requires you to use and engage with other written materials - that is, ideas and quotations from other writers - in an essay.
Articles: Tan, "Mother Tongue" (127-132)
In your essay, you will (A) present the writer's ideas accurately and fairly, using your skills in summarizing, paraphrasing, and using quotations. And you will (B) present a thoughtful response, in which you take a stand on the major issue of the original.
You don't need additional information from the internet and you don't need to look for any more sources. If you do want to use another source, you need to clear it with your instructor.
Preliminary Steps
1. Read, re-read, annotate the article you chose.
2. Complete the "Responding to Writing" worksheet to help clarify and organize your thoughts on the issues.
3. Be able to summarize and paraphrase the material accurately.
A Possible Outline for Your Essay
Your essay might be organized something like this, in which each of the first-level bullets would be one or more ¶s:
• Open: Introduce the issues in a general way, possibly without mentioning the article/author yet.
• Introduce & briefly summarize the main article:
· Summarize the main, relevant ideas of the article and include important details. (Include the author's full name and title of the article.)
· Note that you will also refer to and summarize and quote from the article in the response section of the essay, so you don't need to provide a complete, detailed summary here.
• Respond:
· You will probably use some of the ideas you generated in the "Responding to Writing" worksheet.
· Discuss and offer some analysis of the issues raised in the article, and possibly comment on how the author has presented them, how convincing her/his evidence is, and so on.
· Present your own perspectives, thoughts, and perhaps feelings on the issues. You might describe your own life experiences or experiences of friends, as they relate to the issues in question.
· In this response section you need to be sure to explain your ideas clearly and support them (with logic, with illustrative examples, maybe with more quotes from the article).
· If you wish, you can bring in a couple of ideas/quotes from one or two of the additional articles to supplement or support your points.
· This section should be presented in logically organized, focused paragraphs.
• Close: Wrap up the essay in a meaningful and satisfying way.
Think it through!
Don't just grab onto the first thought that comes to you, an initial and superficial reaction. Consider your thoughts and feelings, think hard about the topic and what you have read about it, and form a coherent and thoughtful response.
In a thoughtful response, you don't need to solve or resolve the problem or the issue. You don't have to try to have the "last word" on the topic. Saying that it's troubling (or not) or an im ...
The assignment is to write a paper reflecting on 2-3 topics that w.docxarnoldmeredith47041
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55 machin 20 21 aeeb feedbacksheet grid and category mark
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Student Name: Jim Machin
Title of coursework
Marker: Karen Stanley
overall MARK*: 55%
Comments
Academic Essay
you identify some important points, your writing style is clear (although see comments below*) , you bring in some
statistics, you make a good attempt to cite your sources appropriately, you make an attempt to illustrate your points
Journalistic article
A good attempt, your style is descriptive and clear - which magazine is this aimed at? who are you writing for? It is
based on the same information as your academic essay - is that appropriate for the readers of your magazine?
Proforma / explanation of Searching strategies
Your proforma demonstrates that you have engaged with task well although don’t appear to have attempted to search
academic databases? - see my comments and suggestions and hope this may help you continue to master this skill
Strengths:
enthusiastic, you have found appropriate sources – an extensive reference list*, citations and references well formatted
Things you could improve in future coursework
you could gain more marks if you included more specific and more scientific detail
*details of your content are simplified. sometimes vague, similar to the level of detail that is more typically used by
websites e.g. public information websites, especially when compared to that expected in scientific and academic
writing
*see comments about descriptive style of writing rather than analytical - consider developing ‘arguments’ or making
a case based on scientific evidence (for example data from experimental studies)
your essay would benefit from a wider range of reading - see comments on reference list
avoid data from media news items if the news item is reporting the publication of the paper, go to the original paper
you could gain more marks fi you consider the structure of your writing - see comments on re-sorting information -
in places it feels like your discussions jumps backwards and forwards between topics but could be better
organised and will thereby come across with more force and cogency
subheadings - see my comments on making these more specific
cite your sources more frequently -see comments where I have questioned the source of the information or
whether it is your opinion you would gain more marks if you included the widely held views of published scientists
rather than vague discussion or ideas
you have made a good attempt to write an academic style but see comments on hyperbole and in particular on
making your illustrations work as more effective tools of clear communication
Remember to include title and subheading ‘introduction’
Also see annotation of grid below which help explain your mark
See comments on the coursework for more detail
DATE: Jan Feb 2021/ *Unratified mark
2. Academic essay (65% weighting) Assessment Criteria for Coursework - Applied Ecology andEnvironmental Biosciences
Refer 3rd class 2.ii 2.i 1st class / distinction
outstanding
<40% 40 – 49% 50 – 59% 60 – 69% 70% +
Scientific Content
Answers may show some
understanding oftheissue, atleast
in part, butmay includeserious
errors and/oromissions,or may
indicate poor understanding.
Insufficientcoverageoftopic to
merit a pass.Fails toidentify and
retrieverelevant knowledgeform
sources .
Answer displays someknowledgeand
understanding ofthetopiccontent,some of
the main facts underpinning theissue are
included, but theseaspects may belimited
in depth and extent. Choice ofcontent may
be limited oroflimited relevanceto the
question.
Answer demonstrate
understanding ofkey issues,
attempts to identify anddescribe
complexities.Relevant scientific
content has beenincluded.
Reasonablelevel ofrelevant
detail.
Essay demonstrates a sound
understanding ofa rangeofrelevant
concepts, explains complexities
objectively with relevant level of
detail.Inclusionofrelevant scientific
content .Good levelofrelevant detail
balancedagainst appropriate breadth
topics coveredin your approach.
An excellent/outstanding choiceof
scientificcontent,demonstrates deep
understanding ofconcepts andprinciples,
clearlyidentifies and objectively
addresses a rangeofcomplexities with
highly relevantlevelofdetail. Excellent
communication o enhances argumentand
further demonstrates depth of
understanding. Excellentbalanceof
relevant detail againstbreadth, excellent
concision.
Academic and
scientific writing
style
Lack ofengagement with an
academicscientific style ofwriting
scientific
Style ofwritten English lacks academic
rigour or adherenceto scientific convention.
Ideas may bepoorlyexpressed andlack
clarity
Demonstrates anattemptto
engage with anacademic styleof
written English and adoptionof
scientificconventions.Some
ideas may bepoorly expressed.
Demonstrates good engagementwith
academicstyleofwrittenEnglishand
adherenceto scientificconventions.
Clarity and,lack ofambiguityin
writing.
Demonstrates excellent engagement with
academicstyleofscientific English and
consistently adheres to scientific
conventions.
Analysis and
argument
Little analysis, nojudgements
made. case is poorly argued
Largely descriptiveapproach, someattempt
to developacademic arguments, some
judgements madebutmaylack supporting
evidenceor data.
Attempts todevelopanacademic
argument, somejudgements
made.
Strands ofacademic arguments run
throughout,judgments well
supported by sound analysis,
The arguments are clearly constructed,
well supported by pertinentexamples or
evidence/ data, andincludecriticalor
originalanalysis ofsituation.Excellent
structure ofwriting facilitates easy
appreciation by reader.
Research sources
used
Limiteduseofappropriate
academicresources.
Referencesources may belimited,
inappropriate orlack academicrigour.
Draws upon academic literature.
In places may relyon
inappropriate resources. May
lack appropriate rangeof
sources.
Draws upon a range ofappropriate
and relevant academicliterature
including someprimary data sources.
Makes judicious useofnon-academic
sources.
Draws appropriatelyupona widerangeof
appropriateandrelevant academic
sources including primary data sources.
Makes judicious useofnon-academic
sources to enhanceargument.
Citation and
Referencing
Little or noengagement with the
academicconventionofcitation or
providing a listofreferencesources There may bea lack ofappropriatecitation
or referencing,lack ofadherenceto
requiredformat.
Citation and referencing may lack
adherenceto requiredformat.
More citation neededto support
arguments.
References frequently cited,
Referencing and citation adhereto
requiredformat.
Sophisticated citation indicates strong
understanding ofimportance androleof
citation inacademic writing.
Referencing and citationadhereto
requiredformat in allareas.
3. Academic essay (65% weighting) Theunofficial marking guide
*The lectureschedulein semester 1 highlightsall thelecturesections which arerelevant to these marking criteria
* You will gain marks for the following……. You are likely to lose marks (or may fail to gain marks) if …………
Scientific
Content and
underpinning
concepts
-you bring in concepts and principles, youdiscuss them andexplain whatthey mean
-if you explain phrases and terminology thatyou haveused
-if your explanations arecorrect
-if you includediscussionofconcepts and their applicationto the situationthat you are writing
about
-if you go in to relevant scientific details inatleast some importantareas (it doesn’t need tobe
deeply detailed alltheway throughto gain a goodmark butyou gainmoremarks ifyour detail
is in the mostimportant areas)
-you don’t mention relevantconcepts andprinciples,
-you don’t explainwhat theymean,
-you use terms,terminologyor jargonwithout indicating you understandthe meaning,
-your essay generalises and lacks details -throughout, (too broad withlittle depth)
-the content lacks 'science'content,andfor examplefocuses onpolitical, socialor economic issues.
-you go in to too much detail in areas thatare not closely relevant to the topic
-the majority of your content, or the topic area, is notrelevant tothemodule (i.e. ifit focuses more on
issues thatare not scientific aspects ofecology and/or environmental issues)
if you are significantly underor over thespecified work count
Academic
and scientific
writing style
-if your writing style is objective(rather than subjective)
-you use the past passive tenseeffectively,whereappropriate
-if you attemptto useobjectivelanguageand objectiveterms ('compare'vs showX is better or
best)
-you will gainsomemarks for attempting an academic styleofwriting
-within sentences,you break complex ideas down so thatthey are explained well
-you attempt to explaincomplexissues rather thanjust hinting andexpecting thereader to
understand your meaning
-you use academicandscientific conventions and scientific formats effectively
-your writing style is 'like a spoken style'
-you use hyperbolic terms (i.e.deliberately exaggerated) and emotive language
-your writing is toocomplexto follow(e.g. sentences arelong and complex, but notclear).
- you use wasn’t, isn't,cant,rather than writing these phrases out infull
-you don’t useacademic or scientificconventions (especially thosethat you havelearntin PSPmodules
e.g. units,superscriptor subscript where appropriate, )
- you don’t use scienceformatting e.g. (superscriptor subscript for units,whereappropriate,
-don’t integratecitations appropriately in tothetext (seeguidance sheet on BB site)
Structure,
analysisand
argument
-you introduce the topic, thecontext oftheissue/ problemand therationalefor thecontent
you are going toinclude
-if your ideas are presentedin a logicalorder thatis consistentwith your introduction
-when you makea statement,caseor argument yousupportit with evidence, data or
statistics (notjust a citation)
-if you includea finalsummary, conclusionor finalsection thatwraps up the arguments you
have been making
-if that section is concluding on thearguments youhave made rather thanrepeating or
summarising informationyou present in themain partofthe essay
-other elements ofyourwriting help enhanceyour argument, such as explaining context,
significance
-you use paragraphs effectively (one point per paragraph)
-your paragraphs have effective key sentences thattell the reader what thekeypoint that
your paragraph is making
-ifyou fail to introducethetopic
-ifyour introduction fails to givea rationalefor thecontent/ direction ofargument you havechosen
-ifyou just 'describe'situations but don’t attempt toanalysethesignificanceofthestatements youmake
-ifyour introduction sectionis long anddescriptive
-you only makedescriptivestatements,not arguments
-ifyou make statements, caseor arguments thatarenotsupportednot evidence, discussion, statistics or
data (just citing a referencedoes notnecessarilygain yougood marks)
-if you introducetopics or ideas later on intheessay thatyou haven't effectively introducedsomehow
earlier in theessay(seerevisionoftextand howto rewriteyour introduction)
-ifyou don’t havea finalsection that attempts towrap up theessay
-ifthat final sectionis just a summary and repeats whatyou havewrittenin the main partoftheessay
-ifyour paragraphs try to make severaldifferent points, ifthey starton one point and finish onanother, if
you don’t write key sentences
Research
sourcesused
-if you use evidenceand data fromprimary papers
-if you use and data evidencefromofficial data sources such as relevant websites government
-ifyou rely on websites e.g dot.coms,
- ifyou rely on 'populist science magazines (eg New Scientist, ScientificAmerican)
-ifyou don’t usepublishedacademic articles
Citation and
Referencing
-if you the cite sources ofevidence,facts, statements andopinions thatare not your own
-where you suggest there is 'lots ofresearch'… on a topicor that'many studies have
suggested'…,you citemultiplesources
-ifyou make statements opinions that arenot your own, or give facts without citing their source
-ifyou don’t adhereto the formatting advice for APAstyle citation and referencing
4. Assessment criteriafor Sections 2 and3
Refer 3rd Class 2.ii 2.i 1st class / distinction
not sufficient for a pass sufficient for a pass good very good excellent to outstanding
<40% 40 – 49% 50 – 59% 60 – 69% 70% +
Journalistic
style news
article
(30%)
There may bea failureto address
or engage with the task.
The article may show some
understanding oftheissue, atleast
in part, butmay includeserious
errors and/oromissions,or may
indicate poor understanding ofthe
topic and its context.
Article lacks obvious reasoning or
newsworthiness.
Falls shortofthequantify of
content required todemonstrate a
pass
Style ofwritten English maybe
inappropriate for thechosen
publication.
Style may notbeengaging or givea
sense oftimeliness ofinformation.
Lacks senseof‘newsworthiness’.
The article may not befocused ona
current topic or may not attemptto
link topic tocurrent context
Article displays someunderstanding of
the wider issues and identifies someof
the complexities,butthis maybe
limitedin depth and extent.
May display flaws inunderstanding of
some ofthe material. Thereare some
omissions or inaccuracies.
The article may bepoorly constructed,
poorly communicated, ideas may be
poorly expressedand lack clarity.
Demonstrates engagementwith a
journalistic style ofwrittenEnglish to
communicateinformation.
Attempts a style ofwrittenEnglish
that is appropriate for the chosen
publication.
Article displays understanding ofthe
context oftheissue(s),attempts to
identify and explaincomplexities
There may besomeminor errors,
omissions or poorly expressed ideas.
Attempts toidentify
‘newsworthiness’.
Style and content attempt toengage
the generalpublic/ appropriate
audience for thepublication.
Evidence thatthearticle draws on
appropriatereferencesources.
Demonstrates good engagementwith
an appropriate journalistic style of
written English tocommunicate
information andengagethegeneral
public.
Conveys strong senseof
newsworthiness.
Style and content likely toengagethe
scientifically engaged public/ target
audience.
Article displays goodunderstanding
ofthe wider issues, identifies context,
identifies and clearly explains
complexities.
Demonstrates clarity.
Style ofwritten English is appropriate
for the chosen medium
Evidence thatthearticle clearlydraws
on appropriatereference sources
Article displays excellent understanding of
the wider issues, clearlyidentifies context,
identifies and clearly explaincomplexities
Clearly identifies newsworthiness ofissue
Demonstrates excellent engagement with
good journalisticstyleofwrittenEnglish
to effectively communicatescientific
information (or torelatesciencewith
other important issues)
Consistently engaging styleand
interesting,informativerelevant content.
Clearly demonstrates integrity, objectivity
and clarity.
Excellent style ofwrittenEnglishwhich
exemplifies thechosen medium/
publication.
Clearly draws on and reports a rangeof
cutting edge‘new’reference sources.
Proforma/
explanation of
search strategy
There may bea failureto address
or engage with the task of
submitting a proforma for feedback
or explaining your searching for
relevant resources to support
researching for andwriting your
coursework or may fail to
undertake a suitablestrategy for
2nd year undergraduatecoursework
Engages brieflywiththetask of
submitting a proforma for feedback or
explaining yoursearching for relevant
resources to supportresearching for
and writing yourcoursework and/ or
may to undertakea poor strategyfor
2nd year undergraduatecoursework
Engages withthetask ofsubmitting a
proforma for feedback or explaining
your searching for relevant resources
to support researching for andwriting
your coursework and undertakes a
reasonablestrategy for 2nd yearUG
coursework where there is room for
improvement
Engages well withthetaskof
submitting a proforma for feedback
or explaining your searching for
relevant resources to support
researching for andwriting your
coursework and undertakes an
appropriatestrategy for 2nd year
coursework
Engages conscientiously withthetaskof
submitting a proforma for feedback or
explaining yoursearching for relevant
resources to supportresearching for and
writing your coursework and undertakes a
skilful strategy for undergraduate
coursework
5. Level 5 - Generic grade descriptor:relationshipof degree classificationtopercentagemark ranges and categorical grades (CG)
Class Mark range General Characteristics
FIRST
(Excellent)
93 - 100
Exceptional breadthanddepthof knowledgeandunderstandingof the areaof study;evidence of extensive andappropriate selectionand
critical evaluation/synthesis/analysisandof reading/researchbeyondthe prescribedrange,inbothbreadthanddepth,toadvance
work/directarguments;exceptionaldemonstrationof relevantskills;excellentcommunication;performance deemedtobe beyond
expectation.
85 - 92
78 - 84 Outstanding/excellentknowledge andunderstandingof the areaof study as the studentis typicallyable to go beyondwhat has been
taught (particularly for a mid/high1st
); evidence of extensiveandappropriate selectionandcritical evaluation/synthesis/analysisof
reading/research beyondthe prescribedrange,to advance work/directarguments;excellentdemonstrationof relevantskills;excellent
communication;performance deemedbeyondexpectationof the level.
70 - 77
UPPER
SECOND
(Very
good)
67 - 69 Verygoodknowledge andunderstandingof the areaof studyas the student istypicallyable to relate facts/concepts togetherwith
some ability to apply to known/taught contexts; evidence of appropriateselectionandevaluationof reading/research,somebeyond
the prescribedrange,mayrelyonsetsourcesto advance work/directarguments;demonstratesautonomyinapproachtolearning;
verygooddemonstrationof relevantskills;strongcommunicationskills.
64 -66
60 - 63
LOWER
SECON
D
(Good)
57 - 59 Good knowledgeandunderstandingof the areaof study balanced towards the descriptive ratherthan analytical;evidence of appropriate
selectionandevaluationof reading/researchbutgenerallyreliantonsetsourcestoadvance work/directarguments;gooddemonstrationof
relevantskills,thoughmaybe limitedinrange;communicationshowsclaritybutstructure maynotalwaysbe coherent.
54 - 56
50 - 53
THIRD
(Sufficient)
47 - 49 Knowledge and understandingissufficientto deal with terminology,basicfacts and concepts but failstomake meaningful synthesis; some
abilitytoselectandevaluate reading/researchhoweverworkmaybe more generallydescriptive;strongreliance onavailablesupportset
sourcesto advance work;argumentsmaybe weakor poorlyconstructed;adequate demonstrationof relevantskillsoveralimitedrange;
communication/presentationisgenerallycompetentbutwithsome weaknesses.
44 - 46
40 - 43
FAIL
(Insufficient)
30 - 39
Insufficientknowledge andunderstandingof the areaof study;some abilitytoselectandevaluate reading/researchhoweverworkismore
generallydescriptive;failstoaddresssome aspectsof the brief;alimiteduse of sourcestoadvance work;argumentsmaybe weak/pooror
weakly/poorlyconstructed;demonstrationof relevantskillsoverareducedrange;communicationshowslimitedclarity,poor
presentation,structure maynotbe coherent.
20 - 29
10 - 19 Highlyinsufficientknowledge orunderstandingof the areaof study; understandingistypically at the word level withfacts being
reproducedin a disjointedor decontextualised manner;failstoaddressthe outcomesaddressedbythe brief;typicallyignoresimportant
sourcesindevelopmentof workanddata/evidence inappropriatelyused;weaktechnical andpractical competence hampersabilityto
demonstrate/communicate achievement of outcomes.
1-9
ZERO 0 Work of no meritOR absent,worknotsubmitted,penaltyinsome misconductcases.