The student received a categorical mark of 2:1 for their literature review task. The assessor provided strengths and suggestions for improvement. Key strengths included an introduction that set the background well, a range of primary research was summarized cohesively, and an academic writing style was demonstrated. Suggestions for improvement included adding more of the student's own opinions on the studies' claims, considering other diagnostic techniques, including further subheadings, and minor formatting issues. The student commented they will focus on critical analysis and improving presentation in future work.