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Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Rushes Log
Name of editor Katy-Anne Coleman
Title of production Me, Myself and Them
Date
Shot Number File Type File Name Duration Possibilities and limitations of shots Where stored
Shot 1 PNG Shot 1 5
seconds
This first shot helps to set up the atmosphere,
pacing and style of the film.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 2 PNG Shot 2 5
seconds
Shows off the protagonist for the first time; the first
character seen, so the audience knows she’s
important.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 3 PNG Shot 3 5
seconds
Shots 3, 4 and 5 help to show off characteristics of
Revy. This shot shows her love for music.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 4 PNG Shot 4 5
seconds
Shots 3, 4 and 5 help to show off characteristics of
Revy. This shot shows she can be a little messy,
and also loves video games.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 5 PNG Shot 5 5
seconds
Shots 3, 4 and 5 help to show off characteristics of
Revy. This shot shows that she can also be neat
and tidy with her things, and that she likes books
and (based off the pot of pencils) likes drawing.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 6 PNG Shot 6
(Frame 1, 2
and 3)
15
seconds
Not an entirely necessary shot, but it helps with the
transition between her relaxing and her looking at
her messages.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 7 PNG Shot 7 5
seconds
This shot helps to start up the plot, since we aren’t
told through any other means due to there being
no talking.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Shot 8 PNG Shot 8 5
seconds
Not an entirely needed shot, but it simply backs up
what Leah says about it being late. Also shows (to
an extent) that Revy likes/can stay up quite late.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 9 PNG Shot 9 5
seconds
More furthering of the plot. My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 10 PNG Shot 10
(Frame 1, 2,
3, 4, 5, 6, 7
and 8)
2
seconds
Includes some animation into the film, as well as
helps with the transition between the bedroom and
bathroom. Can’t make it very smooth and natural
however, due to limited software/artistic
capabilities.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 11 PNG Shot 11
(Frame 1
and 2)
4
seconds
Establishes the new area where Revy is going to. My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 12 PNG Shot 12
(Frame 1
and 2)
1.5
seconds
Helps establish the events of the scene (where
objects are).
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 13 PNG Shot 13 2
seconds
Wanted to animate this scene, unable to due to
lack of time. Kept the shot concept in though, to
show a passage of time/why the protagonist went
into the bathroom.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 14 PNG Shot 14
(Frame 1, 2,
3and 4)
3
seconds
Helps with the transition between her brushing her
teeth and grabbing her phone before she leaves.
Also wanted to animate this scene, but due to a
lack of time I did the best I could.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 15 PNG Shot 15
(Frame 1, 2,
3, 4, 5, 6, 7,
8, 9 and 10)
4
seconds
Helps with the transition between bathroom and
bedroom. Was unable to make this animation
smoother due to time and software restrictions as
well as my own artistic capabilities.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 16 PNG Shot 16
(Frame 1, 2,
3 and 4)
4
seconds
The shot helps with the transition between her
coming from the bathroom and checking her
phone, as well as shows how restless she is.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Shot 17 PNG Shot 17 4
seconds
Shots 17, 18, and 19 all help to both further the
storyline of the film and show the relationship
between the characters.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 18 PNG Shot 18 4
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 19 PNG Shot 19
(Frame 1
and 2)
8
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 20 PNG Shot 20 5
seconds
Legs are a bit short in this shot, and her feet size
doesn’t match the shoes seen nearby.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 21 PNG Shot 21
(Frame
1and 2)
8
seconds
The extreme close-up on the eyes acts as a good
transition between the real world and her mind, as
well as expresses her emotions.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 22 PNG Shot 22 4
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 23 PNG Shot 23 4
Seconds
Legs look a little strange in this shot but make
enough sense due to the fact she’s lying on the
floor.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 24 PNG Shot 24 2
seconds
Was going to animate her standing up, but I lack
the artistic skill required to. Ended up changing this
to a front view of her getting up (Shot 25).
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 25 PNG/GIF Shot 25
(Frame 1, 2,
3, 4, 5, 6
and 7) Shot
25 Run
Animation.
8
seconds
Shows the protagonist noticing the threat and
running towards another location. The running
animation could be a little more fluid, and if you
stare it can sort of look like she’s running
backwards, but other than that it’s drawn to the
best of my ability.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Shot 26 PNG Shot 26 4
seconds
Shows where she’s running to. My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 27 PNG Shot 27
(Frame 1, 2,
and 3)
8
seconds
Shots 27, 28 and 29 help establish the Good
Thought characters and the Safe Space.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 28 PNG Shot 28 4
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 29 PNG Shot 29 4
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 30 PNG Shot 30 1.5
seconds
Continuation of protagonist running. Not entirely
required but helps transition a little better between
the action and the shots establishing the Good
Thoughts.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 31 PNG Shot 31 6
seconds
Shots 31 and 32 introduce the antagonists, the
Bad Thoughts, and starts the climax of the film.
Would make them coming up from the ground
smoother if I had the time and better software.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 32 PNG Shot 32 3
seconds
The zoom ins are a little fuzzy and the lines end up
looking a lot more pixelated and more choppy. I
may try to smooth them out and adjust them, but it
could take a lot of time to do this with all the shots
that look like this.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 33 PNG Shot 33 Shot was cut due to limited time.
Shot 34 PNG Shot 34 2
seconds
Helps express the fear Revy feels. Might add
eyebrows to the shots including her face so she’s a
bit more expressive.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 35 PNG Shot 35 1
seconds
Was going to create another more detailed running
animation, but it was far too time consuming.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Shot 36 PNG Shot 36
(Frame 1
and 2)
1.2
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 37 PNG Shot 37 4
seconds
Would animate her falling down, but the poses
would be too difficult and time consuming.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 38 PNG Shot 38 2
seconds
Shots 38, 39 and 41 could be made to look more
evil and menacing, but I’m unsure how I could do
that.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 39 PNG Shot 39 2
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 40 PNG Shot 40 2
seconds
Shows the effect of everything on Revy. Tears
could be drawn better, but fit with the
cartoon/anime style.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 41 PNG Shot 41 2
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 42 PNG Shot 42 Shot cut due to limited time.
Shot 43 PNG Shot 43
(Frame 1, 2,
3, 4, 5, 6
and 7)
8
seconds
Slowly begins to calm things down after the climax
(and the main focus of the story) hits.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 44 PNG Shot 44 3
seconds
Could show more disbelief on her face, still might
go ahead with the eyebrows idea to show that.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 45 PNG Shot 45 4
seconds
Characters here are a little choppy and pixelated
too, may go over those lines as well.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 46 PNG Shot 46 5
seconds
The shoulders look a little too wide on the Good
Thoughts, but other than that I like how I drew
them.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Shot 47 PNG Shot 47 4
seconds
Neck is a bit too long, but otherwise the Good
Thought looks fine.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 48 PNG Shot 48 4.5
seconds
Shoulders look a little wide, but otherwise fine. My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 49 PNG Shot 49 3
seconds
May change this shot or delete it entirely because
it doesn’t look at all how I intended.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 50 PNG Shot 50
(Frame 1
and 2)
6
seconds
The transition back to the real world matches the
one to get into mindscape. Helps to show how the
protagonist feels once again.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 51 PNG Shot 51 2
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 52 PNG Shot 52
(Frame 1, 2
and 3)
7
seconds
Again, might try to lengthen the legs a little bit in
Frame 1. Her arm also looks a little strange in
Frame 2, might try to adjust that a bit more.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 53 PNG Shot 53
(Frame 1, 2
and 3)
14
seconds
Shot 53 and shot 55 brings the plot to a close, as
well as furthers the relationship between the
characters.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 54 PNG Shot 54 3
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 55 PNG Shot 55
(Frame 1, 2,
3 and 4)
16
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 56 PNG Shot 56 1
second
Was going to animate her getting up and walking,
but it would be too time consuming.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Unit 17: Preparing material for editing
Shot 57 PNG Shot 57 4
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 58 PNG Shot 58 5
seconds
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 59 PNG Shot 59
(Frames 1,
2, 3, 4, 5, 6,
and 7)
15
seconds
Shows the conclusion of the storyline. I love how
expressive she looks in this shot, it’s exactly how I
envisioned it in my mind. The appearance of the
bird is a little different though, since I don’t have
the artistic capability or time to have him fly in.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots
Shot 60 PNG Shot 60 2
seconds
A good final shot, nice and clear. Her hand might
be a bit strangely sized for the angle and size of
the light switch.
My Pictures/Sixth
Form/Media/Units
16, 11, 17/Shots

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04. rushes log

  • 1. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Rushes Log Name of editor Katy-Anne Coleman Title of production Me, Myself and Them Date Shot Number File Type File Name Duration Possibilities and limitations of shots Where stored Shot 1 PNG Shot 1 5 seconds This first shot helps to set up the atmosphere, pacing and style of the film. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 2 PNG Shot 2 5 seconds Shows off the protagonist for the first time; the first character seen, so the audience knows she’s important. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 3 PNG Shot 3 5 seconds Shots 3, 4 and 5 help to show off characteristics of Revy. This shot shows her love for music. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 4 PNG Shot 4 5 seconds Shots 3, 4 and 5 help to show off characteristics of Revy. This shot shows she can be a little messy, and also loves video games. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 5 PNG Shot 5 5 seconds Shots 3, 4 and 5 help to show off characteristics of Revy. This shot shows that she can also be neat and tidy with her things, and that she likes books and (based off the pot of pencils) likes drawing. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 6 PNG Shot 6 (Frame 1, 2 and 3) 15 seconds Not an entirely necessary shot, but it helps with the transition between her relaxing and her looking at her messages. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 7 PNG Shot 7 5 seconds This shot helps to start up the plot, since we aren’t told through any other means due to there being no talking. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots
  • 2. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Shot 8 PNG Shot 8 5 seconds Not an entirely needed shot, but it simply backs up what Leah says about it being late. Also shows (to an extent) that Revy likes/can stay up quite late. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 9 PNG Shot 9 5 seconds More furthering of the plot. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 10 PNG Shot 10 (Frame 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 and 8) 2 seconds Includes some animation into the film, as well as helps with the transition between the bedroom and bathroom. Can’t make it very smooth and natural however, due to limited software/artistic capabilities. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 11 PNG Shot 11 (Frame 1 and 2) 4 seconds Establishes the new area where Revy is going to. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 12 PNG Shot 12 (Frame 1 and 2) 1.5 seconds Helps establish the events of the scene (where objects are). My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 13 PNG Shot 13 2 seconds Wanted to animate this scene, unable to due to lack of time. Kept the shot concept in though, to show a passage of time/why the protagonist went into the bathroom. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 14 PNG Shot 14 (Frame 1, 2, 3and 4) 3 seconds Helps with the transition between her brushing her teeth and grabbing her phone before she leaves. Also wanted to animate this scene, but due to a lack of time I did the best I could. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 15 PNG Shot 15 (Frame 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9 and 10) 4 seconds Helps with the transition between bathroom and bedroom. Was unable to make this animation smoother due to time and software restrictions as well as my own artistic capabilities. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 16 PNG Shot 16 (Frame 1, 2, 3 and 4) 4 seconds The shot helps with the transition between her coming from the bathroom and checking her phone, as well as shows how restless she is. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots
  • 3. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Shot 17 PNG Shot 17 4 seconds Shots 17, 18, and 19 all help to both further the storyline of the film and show the relationship between the characters. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 18 PNG Shot 18 4 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 19 PNG Shot 19 (Frame 1 and 2) 8 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 20 PNG Shot 20 5 seconds Legs are a bit short in this shot, and her feet size doesn’t match the shoes seen nearby. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 21 PNG Shot 21 (Frame 1and 2) 8 seconds The extreme close-up on the eyes acts as a good transition between the real world and her mind, as well as expresses her emotions. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 22 PNG Shot 22 4 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 23 PNG Shot 23 4 Seconds Legs look a little strange in this shot but make enough sense due to the fact she’s lying on the floor. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 24 PNG Shot 24 2 seconds Was going to animate her standing up, but I lack the artistic skill required to. Ended up changing this to a front view of her getting up (Shot 25). My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 25 PNG/GIF Shot 25 (Frame 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7) Shot 25 Run Animation. 8 seconds Shows the protagonist noticing the threat and running towards another location. The running animation could be a little more fluid, and if you stare it can sort of look like she’s running backwards, but other than that it’s drawn to the best of my ability. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots
  • 4. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Shot 26 PNG Shot 26 4 seconds Shows where she’s running to. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 27 PNG Shot 27 (Frame 1, 2, and 3) 8 seconds Shots 27, 28 and 29 help establish the Good Thought characters and the Safe Space. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 28 PNG Shot 28 4 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 29 PNG Shot 29 4 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 30 PNG Shot 30 1.5 seconds Continuation of protagonist running. Not entirely required but helps transition a little better between the action and the shots establishing the Good Thoughts. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 31 PNG Shot 31 6 seconds Shots 31 and 32 introduce the antagonists, the Bad Thoughts, and starts the climax of the film. Would make them coming up from the ground smoother if I had the time and better software. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 32 PNG Shot 32 3 seconds The zoom ins are a little fuzzy and the lines end up looking a lot more pixelated and more choppy. I may try to smooth them out and adjust them, but it could take a lot of time to do this with all the shots that look like this. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 33 PNG Shot 33 Shot was cut due to limited time. Shot 34 PNG Shot 34 2 seconds Helps express the fear Revy feels. Might add eyebrows to the shots including her face so she’s a bit more expressive. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 35 PNG Shot 35 1 seconds Was going to create another more detailed running animation, but it was far too time consuming. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots
  • 5. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Shot 36 PNG Shot 36 (Frame 1 and 2) 1.2 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 37 PNG Shot 37 4 seconds Would animate her falling down, but the poses would be too difficult and time consuming. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 38 PNG Shot 38 2 seconds Shots 38, 39 and 41 could be made to look more evil and menacing, but I’m unsure how I could do that. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 39 PNG Shot 39 2 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 40 PNG Shot 40 2 seconds Shows the effect of everything on Revy. Tears could be drawn better, but fit with the cartoon/anime style. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 41 PNG Shot 41 2 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 42 PNG Shot 42 Shot cut due to limited time. Shot 43 PNG Shot 43 (Frame 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7) 8 seconds Slowly begins to calm things down after the climax (and the main focus of the story) hits. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 44 PNG Shot 44 3 seconds Could show more disbelief on her face, still might go ahead with the eyebrows idea to show that. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 45 PNG Shot 45 4 seconds Characters here are a little choppy and pixelated too, may go over those lines as well. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 46 PNG Shot 46 5 seconds The shoulders look a little too wide on the Good Thoughts, but other than that I like how I drew them. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots
  • 6. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Shot 47 PNG Shot 47 4 seconds Neck is a bit too long, but otherwise the Good Thought looks fine. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 48 PNG Shot 48 4.5 seconds Shoulders look a little wide, but otherwise fine. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 49 PNG Shot 49 3 seconds May change this shot or delete it entirely because it doesn’t look at all how I intended. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 50 PNG Shot 50 (Frame 1 and 2) 6 seconds The transition back to the real world matches the one to get into mindscape. Helps to show how the protagonist feels once again. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 51 PNG Shot 51 2 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 52 PNG Shot 52 (Frame 1, 2 and 3) 7 seconds Again, might try to lengthen the legs a little bit in Frame 1. Her arm also looks a little strange in Frame 2, might try to adjust that a bit more. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 53 PNG Shot 53 (Frame 1, 2 and 3) 14 seconds Shot 53 and shot 55 brings the plot to a close, as well as furthers the relationship between the characters. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 54 PNG Shot 54 3 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 55 PNG Shot 55 (Frame 1, 2, 3 and 4) 16 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 56 PNG Shot 56 1 second Was going to animate her getting up and walking, but it would be too time consuming. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots
  • 7. Unit 17: Preparing material for editing Shot 57 PNG Shot 57 4 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 58 PNG Shot 58 5 seconds My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 59 PNG Shot 59 (Frames 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7) 15 seconds Shows the conclusion of the storyline. I love how expressive she looks in this shot, it’s exactly how I envisioned it in my mind. The appearance of the bird is a little different though, since I don’t have the artistic capability or time to have him fly in. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots Shot 60 PNG Shot 60 2 seconds A good final shot, nice and clear. Her hand might be a bit strangely sized for the angle and size of the light switch. My Pictures/Sixth Form/Media/Units 16, 11, 17/Shots