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A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: Lumley, Matthew
The work for the main task is complete.
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
• Shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en
scene
• Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects
• Recording and editing sound with images appropriately.
Music Video Comments:
Some beautiful shots,greatB/Wgrading,some greatcutsto beatand some nice transitions.Music
fitsvisuals.Clearnarrative.
Ancillary Task 1:
Proficient ability in the creative use of most of the technical skills. Good design fitting genre
and artist. Clear understanding of conventions. Some technical skill.
Ancillary Task 2:
Proficient ability in the creative use of most of the technical skills. Good design fitting genre
and artist. Some understanding of conventions. Some technical skill.
Video:
31/40
Level 3
Ancillary Task 1:
7/10
Ancillary Task 2:
7/10
Total 45 /60 Level: B

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Matthew Lumley Coursework Feedback

  • 1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts Name: Lumley, Matthew The work for the main task is complete. There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills. • Shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en scene • Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects • Recording and editing sound with images appropriately. Music Video Comments: Some beautiful shots,greatB/Wgrading,some greatcutsto beatand some nice transitions.Music fitsvisuals.Clearnarrative. Ancillary Task 1: Proficient ability in the creative use of most of the technical skills. Good design fitting genre and artist. Clear understanding of conventions. Some technical skill. Ancillary Task 2: Proficient ability in the creative use of most of the technical skills. Good design fitting genre and artist. Some understanding of conventions. Some technical skill. Video: 31/40 Level 3 Ancillary Task 1: 7/10 Ancillary Task 2: 7/10 Total 45 /60 Level: B