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NARRATING
EVENTS
WHY DO WE NEED TO NARRATE
EVENTS CHRONOLOGICALLY?
4 3 2 1
Purpose Contains an
engaging
introduction;
successfully
entertains or
presents a theme.
Contains a
somewhat
engaging
introduction;
entertains or
presents a theme
Contains an
introduction;
attempts to
entertain or to
present a theme
Begins abruptly or
confusingly; leaves
purpose unclear
Organizat
ion
Creates an
interesting, clear
narrative; told from
a consistent point
of view.
Presents a clear
sequence of
events; told from a
specific point of
view.
Presents a mostly
clear sequence of
events; contains
inconsistent points
of view
Presents events
without
logical order; lacks
a consistent point
of view
Elaborati
on
Provides insight
into
character; develops
plot; contains
dialogue
Contains details
and
dialogue that
develop
character and plot
Contains details
that
develop plot;
contains
some dialogue
Contains few or no
details to develop
characters or plot
Use of
Language
Uses word choice
and tone
to reveal story’s
theme;
contains no errors
in
grammar,
punctuation, or
Uses interesting
and fresh word
choices;
contains few errors
in grammar,
punctuation,
and spelling
Uses some clichés
and
trite expressions;
contains some
errors in grammar,
punctuation,
and spelling
Uses uninspired
word
choices; has many
errors in grammar,
punctuation, and
spelling

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Why We Narrate Chronologically

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  • 3. WHY DO WE NEED TO NARRATE EVENTS CHRONOLOGICALLY?
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  • 10. 4 3 2 1 Purpose Contains an engaging introduction; successfully entertains or presents a theme. Contains a somewhat engaging introduction; entertains or presents a theme Contains an introduction; attempts to entertain or to present a theme Begins abruptly or confusingly; leaves purpose unclear Organizat ion Creates an interesting, clear narrative; told from a consistent point of view. Presents a clear sequence of events; told from a specific point of view. Presents a mostly clear sequence of events; contains inconsistent points of view Presents events without logical order; lacks a consistent point of view Elaborati on Provides insight into character; develops plot; contains dialogue Contains details and dialogue that develop character and plot Contains details that develop plot; contains some dialogue Contains few or no details to develop characters or plot Use of Language Uses word choice and tone to reveal story’s theme; contains no errors in grammar, punctuation, or Uses interesting and fresh word choices; contains few errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling Uses some clichés and trite expressions; contains some errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling Uses uninspired word choices; has many errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling