James evaluated his group's presentation to experts on their proposed school open evening advertisements. He believed they effectively conveyed their ideas and choices of music and script for the main school advertisement. However, the feedback on the sixth form script was poorer because it lacked information and targeting of the audience. Going forward, James would present the scripts and music together to better demonstrate the final product, and explain their production company more clearly to stand out from competitors.

1. JamesPugh
Evaluation
I believe we had some positives from our presentation after receiving the feedback from the
experts who we presented to. I think we did well at getting across our ideas well and
highlighting our reasoning behind our choices of music and script. We got very good
feedback on the main school script as it was much more informative than the sixth form
script and was much more aimed at the target audience. I also think that our music got good
feedback because it was happy and upbeat so would attract people to come to the open
evenings.
However, I feel that we could’ve presented the script and the music in a better way perhaps
by reading the scripts with the music in the background so that the experts could get a
proper feel for what the advert will sound like. I also think that we as a group could have
made more of an effort to explain to the panel what our production company was all about
and why they should pick us over other production companies. If I was to do this again I
would certainly make sure that we present the adverts in a much more interesting way by
making eye contact and speaking more freely to the experts, as this would have been far
more interesting for them. I also think due to our poor feedback about the sixth form script
we could’ve made it much more informative and more aimed at the target audience to
attract people to the sixth form open evening. Also we should not have included a
telephone number in the main school script as many people don’t remember numbers but
they remember email addresses.