We did a reasonably good job presenting our scripts and ideas, but could have been better prepared. We provided too little information about our organization and goals. Additionally, we lacked confidence and eye contact with the panel, instead focusing on our scripts. Feedback also criticized the sixth form script for lacking depth and persuasiveness compared to the school advert. For future presentations, we should provide more details on what sets us apart, how customers can contact us, our production schedule, and equipment used.

1. Evaluation
I believe that went reasonably well and that we did a good job in presenting our scripts and
ideas to the panel of professional that we presented too, I also believe that we all spoke
loud enough so that the clients could understand well what we were trying to get across.
However I think that we could’ve been a lot better if we had given the clients more
information about our organisation and what we are setting out to do, and if we had made
eye contact with the people we were presenting to as we are the ones trying to sell our
product to them and we weren’t as confident as we could’ve been towards them and
though we spoke loud enough we needed to speak a bit more clearly as we for a lot of the
presentation just looked down and spoke into our scripts instead of looking up and
projecting our voices clearly.
Also our Sixth form script needs a little work on it as we got praise for the school advert
being good but we received criticismfor the sixth form advert lacking depth and not being
as persuasive as the school advert. And from the feedback that we received we found out
that we needed to sell our script and organisation more to them and show them what sets
us apart from other organisations, more information about how our customers would
contact the school and we also didn’t include our Production schedule for the day of
recording so we would need to add that to our presentation so that the panel has an idea of
what we will be doing on the day of recording. And lastly we could probably include more
information about the equipment and actors that we would use as our list on our
PowerPoint was a bit scarce and we would use a lot more equipment than what we listed.