feedback

1. Client Feedback
First meeting – 4/12/18
In myfirstmeetingwiththe clienttheytoldme thattoimprove myscriptI needto adda school
address andadd scene numbers before the scene description.Ialsoneedtosplitthe description
until a character enters.The clientalsotoldme thatI neednobracketson directionsandtheyneed
to be put to the left.Tofurtherimprove the structure of my scriptI alsoneedtoput the emotions of
the character nextto character name.Finally,Ineedto include lessdetail inthe scene description to
make it easiertounderstand
Second Meeting – 10/12/18
My secondmeetingwiththe clientwentwell the onlythingsIneededtoadjustwastoshortenthe
scene 2 description tomake sure I donot explainwhathashappenedbefore the dialogue does.
FinallyIalsoneedtoshortenmyscene 4 descriptionandexplainthatBillyismakingaphone call,
thenI justneedto put textmessage inbrackets nexttoJess’ text.