Evaluation question 5

1. Question 5
Feedback from others

2. Emma’s feedback
• Emma said we used good match on action, with good continuity and
good editing.
• However she said the plot to the video was slow and it could
improved it by making it more interesting.
• Also the there is one place where the 180 degree rule is broken so
another way to improve would be to have re-shoot the scene to make
sure the rule is not broken.
• Overall we should develop the pre-production and planning stages to
ensure the rule wasn’t broken to begin with.

3. Abbie’s feedback
• Good match on action and excellent continuity.
• Clear audio.
• To improve we could develop the storyline to make it more interesting
for the audience.
• Could have also added music.
• Overall techniques like match on action were used effectively
however the simple storyline could be improved.