2. Intro
On the 10/02/17, we had a class showing of the
second edits of our music videos. I asked for
feedback about the performance parts of my
video and, more generally, what parts of my video
needed improvement.
3. Questions
I asked two questions to the class before showing my video
which were:
■ Are the performance elements of my video too repetitive?
■ What should be improved in my video?
5. Areas For Improvement
■ Performance shots in second half are too long.
■ Need to add something visual that makes him ‘wake up’ from
his monotonous ‘zombie’ trance.
■ The lip sync is not perfect.
6. How I’m Going to Improve
■ I am going to break up the long lip sync shots with more
footage to make the second half of the video more visually
interesting.
■ I am going to try to make the lip sync more accurate.
■ I am going to add something in to make his ‘waking up’ have
more reason.
