34. Before they even begin to read, readers form impressions about
ease of reading by looking at paragraph length. When they see
long paragraphs, they often enter skim mode—searching for
certain words and ideas rather than reading. Long paragraphs
can signal disorganization and even disrespect for the reader’s
time. Typically, paragraphs should contain 40 to 80 words. For
routine messages, paragraphs as short as 20 to 30 words are
common and appropriate. As the level of information and
analysis grows deeper, some paragraphs will be longer. Rarely
should paragraphs exceed 150 words. In a matter of seconds,
you can easily check how many words are in your paragraph
with nearly all word processing software.
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people wonder exactly what we do. That’s a fair question. In an
effort to support people in need, we provide food in a well -
balanced and nutritious manner. We have an on-site food pantry
and a food pantry truck to provide delivery. We also serve hot
meals on-site for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. The food bank
bestows our clients with bountiful and sustainable food. In
2019, we served 2,152 households, 5,327 children were served,
another 986 senior citizens were served, and altogether we
served 23,887 meals! Our food bank is also a dietary guidance
organization. Generally, impoverished families simply don’t
have the wherewithal to procure healthy foods. We have done
research that shows 83 percent of the people we serve usually
purchase inexpensive and unhealthy foods. As a result, many of
our clients need more education about proper dietary needs. We
also provide clothing assistance and give away books. We have
supported thousands of members of the community get back on
their feet. The charity watchdog group Charity Navigator has
given us a perfect rating for the past five years because of our
ability to serve our community with the resources we
receive.This paragraph contains 195 words. It also contains
excessive numerical figures.