Changes that I made to the Main and Ancillary tasks after receiving feedback.

1. CHANGES MADE TO MAIN
AND ANCILLARY TASKS
AFTER FEEDBACK
Sam Chittock

2. BEFORE AFTER
These are the final two screens of the trailer, the release date and credits, the
original transition between the two was a simple cut. After receiving feedback
by one of my teachers, It was decided to make it a little more interesting and to
represent the action in the film more, I would add a glass shatter effect to the
release date screen. After adding this the release date screen looks like it is
shattered and the pieces fall to reveal the credits. This gave the ending much
more of an impact on the audience, even after the clips are over.

3. BEFORE AFTER
Although it is quite difficult to tell here, the
critic quotes originally stayed still, no zoom
or any effect. After receiving some
feedback from the teacher on how this
could be improved, the quotes now zoom
in. This zoom makes the quotes seem more
important, it also fits with the fast moving
ending of the trailer.

4. BEFORE AFTER
These two shots were originally meant to transition using a simple cut. The person
walking in front of camera was meant to make it look like the main protagonist
was in populated area. I was told by one of my peers that I use replicate a
transition they have seen in films before where a person walking in front of
camera acts as a wipe transition. This ended up being very effective as a
smooth transition and is one of my favourite parts of the trailer.

5. BEFORE AFTER
Although it is hard to see it clearly here, the
film logo originally only zoomed out. After
receiving feedback from one of my
teachers, I made the letters start to get
closer to each other. This both made it a
more interesting way of presenting the film
logo and also represents how the
antagonists are closing in on the protagonist
in the trailer.

6. BEFORE AFTER
For the ancillary tasks, the logo used was originally completely greyscale. After
receiving feedback by one of my peers when discussing how I could make my
products represent the action in the trailer better as it is the action parts that
draws a large audience, they told me that I should add some kind of blood
effect to the film logo. This was a great idea as it well represented the violence
in the film and also made it look more interesting.

7. BEFORE AFTER
While developing my magazine design, I noticed a lack of colour. I asked a
teacher what I could do to make it more attention grabbing and it was
decided that colouring the mask details would benefit the design greatly. After
doing this the magazine stands out far more than it did before, it also still fits with
the colour already used on the cover. It was important that the mask attracted
attention as it’s the cover image that is needed to make people interested in
seeing my film, adding the colour definitely made sure this happened.