A Level Media Studies Evaluation - Question 3

1. Evaluation
Question 3:
What have you learnt from your audience feedback?

2. Front Cover
FeedbackComments:
'I likethe image but the writingblends in a
bit'
'Title needs to stand out more'
'The font makesthe magazinelook more
approachable'
What I have learnt and what I would
change:
I have learnt that the title needs to be less
plainand simpleas it may not catch
everyone'seye.The white text may have
not been a good idea too as it can be hard
to distinguishfrom the background.I
would changeboth of these to makethem
stand out more. I would have also made a
more 'branded' title to use throughout my
media products as it would be eye-catching
and also would create a brand opportunity
for the magazine

3. Contents Page
FeedbackComments:
'I think the list would be better bullet
pointed and maybe linkthe imagesto
articleswith numbering'
'Colour scheme fits in with the theme!'
What I have learnt and what I would
change:
I did have the list bullet pointedbut it
was suggested that it would look
better without, which I agreed with. I
would now bullet pointthem in a
differentway to what I did orginally.I
would alsomaybe try and linkthe
imagesin with articleswith
numbering, for example, linkingthe
bottom right picture with my main
feature page.

4. Feature Page
FeedbackComments:
'Maybechange the white text to a
differentcolour as is blendsin with the
background!'
'The 'A' would look better on the same
lineas 'lookback on'.
'I love the vibrancyof the boat!'
What I have learnt and what I would
change:
I have learnt that not everyone may be
able to clearlyread the white text on
the light blue backgroundso I would
changethis to make this accessibleto
everyone. I would alsotake into
considerationchangingthe title of the
article. I staggered this to make a more
dramaticeffect but I would try out
differentways to make it dramatic
other than staggeringmy text.

5. Billboard
FeedbackComments:
'The informationwithinthe billboardis
positionedwell, it is clearand easy to
read'
'The website name and socialmedia
handlescould be biggerto advertise it
clearly'
What I have learnt and what I would
change:
I have learnt that I have conformedto
the conventionsof a billboardby
havingthe informationclearly
displayed.I should've taken into
considerationthat the socialmedia
handlesare smallerin real life than
they appeared to be in photoshop,so I
would definitelymakethose bigger.

6. Website
FeedbackComments:
'It is easyto navigate and isn't too
complicatedto find what youare
lookingfor'
'Sophisticatedpresentationand it looks
likethe website hasn’t been rushed, you
have taken your time with it.'
'On the Broadstairstab page, more
photos would be ideal as it would then
advertise the town more'.
What I have learnt and what I would
change:
By usingWix, I learnt how to successfully
make a website by using a template and
customisingit to my own theme. I did
have some more photos on my
Broadstairsweb-page but due to
technicaldifficulties,Iwas unable to
upload any more than the one I had. I
would have also likedto extend on my
articlewithin that page, but found it
restrictive.