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Learning Intention:
WALT
Explain how writers use language
 to create effects.
Technique

Evidence

Purpose

Effect
Technique   Less

Evidence

Purpose

Effect      More
What techniques
  are used to
   describe?
What is the
PURPOSE of this
    text?
Top 5Techniques
WALT
- Explain the ways that a writer‟s language choices
  can shape reader response
„Top 5‟ Techniques
 Choose 5 quotations which are most persuasive /
  effective
 List them in your books
 Choose the top 3 and Explain them
 Choose the top 1 and Justify your choice
„Top 5‟ Techniques
 Choose 5 quotations which are most persuasive /
  effective
 List them in your books
 Choose the top 3 and Explain them
 Choose the top 1 and Justify your choice
Explaining Effects
    „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because it
    sounds good and makes you think.

     Great explanation will be more
              detailed by:
-Including Purpose and Effect (TEPE)
-Commenting with increasing precision on the
effect of power words and techniques
-Linking to elsewhere in the text
Explaining Effects
 „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because
 the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact
 that the water is clean.
Explaining Effects
 „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because
 the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact
 that the water is clean. The alliteration of „cool‟
 and „clear‟ reinforces this point, and gives the
 reader hope that if they give money, good things
 will happen.
Explaining Effects
    „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because
     the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact
     that the water is clean. The alliteration of „cool‟
     and „clear‟ reinforces this point, and gives the
     reader hope that if they give money, good things
     will happen. It also contrasts with the „dirty yellow‟
     water of the other field, making it seem even
     cleaner.
Excellent explanation will be more detailed
                    by:
-Discussing Purpose and Effect (TEPE)
-Commenting with increasing precision on the effect
of power words and techniques
Explaining Effects
    „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because
   the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact
   that the water is clean. The alliteration of „cool‟
   and „clear‟ reinforces this point. The alliteration of
   „cool‟ and „clear‟ reinforces this point, and gives
   the reader hope that if they give money, good
   things will happen. It also contrasts with the „dirty
   yellow‟ water of the other field, making it seem
Excellent explanation will be more detailed
   even cleaner.
                          by:
-Discussing Purpose and Effect (TEPE)
-Commenting with increasing precision on the effect
of power words and techniques
 „Wonder filling her eyes‟
 Here they have used strong emotive language to
 give the reader a better understanding but also
 give a strong image. It also shows the reader the
 happiness the little girl had when she saw the
 clear water.
Technique             Evidence                  Purpose                     Effect
                                                                     Using the word
Strong word choice   “wonder filling her   This might be to create   ‘wonder’ shows that
                          eyes”            a strong sense of         she is amazed at the
                                           emotion.                  water pipe and shows
                                                                     us that water is precious
                                                                     to her.
Technique   Evidence   Purpose   Effect
One way that the writer uses language to describe in this section is ...................


T   Another way the writer uses language to describe is ...............
    The author‟s use of language / words / tone of voice is significant in creating description.
    The author uses setting to convey ...
    The characterisation of ... is developed in this section.


    We can see this in the quotation ...


E
    We hear the scene described as ...
    This is shown in the line “......................”
    Arguably, the most significant line is ................



    The author seems to be suggesting ...


P
    The author is, perhaps, exploring the idea of ...
    The author is explaining, illustrating, uncovering, hiding, illuminating, developing,
    The author is creating a child‟s point of view by....

    The words suggest / imply / convey ...


E
    This word / phrase / image / character makes me think of ...
    This conveys feelings of ...
    The word / image contains several ideas. For example...
    The author seems to be exploring the theme / idea of ..
    Developing the interpretation further, we could argue that...
Success criteria:

        Skilled:                Excellent:

• Knowledge:              • Speculation: what
  Correctly identify        might the author‟s
  several literary          purpose be in using
  techniques that can       this technique?
  be found in the text.
                          • Speculation: what
• Comprehension:            might the effect on
  For each one, write       the reader be?
  down a quote from
  the text as evidence.

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Tepe gcse

  • 1. Learning Intention: WALT Explain how writers use language to create effects.
  • 3. Technique Less Evidence Purpose Effect More
  • 4. What techniques are used to describe?
  • 5.
  • 6. What is the PURPOSE of this text?
  • 7.
  • 8. Top 5Techniques WALT - Explain the ways that a writer‟s language choices can shape reader response
  • 9. „Top 5‟ Techniques  Choose 5 quotations which are most persuasive / effective  List them in your books  Choose the top 3 and Explain them  Choose the top 1 and Justify your choice
  • 10. „Top 5‟ Techniques  Choose 5 quotations which are most persuasive / effective  List them in your books  Choose the top 3 and Explain them  Choose the top 1 and Justify your choice
  • 11. Explaining Effects  „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because it sounds good and makes you think. Great explanation will be more detailed by: -Including Purpose and Effect (TEPE) -Commenting with increasing precision on the effect of power words and techniques -Linking to elsewhere in the text
  • 12. Explaining Effects  „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact that the water is clean.
  • 13. Explaining Effects  „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact that the water is clean. The alliteration of „cool‟ and „clear‟ reinforces this point, and gives the reader hope that if they give money, good things will happen.
  • 14. Explaining Effects  „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact that the water is clean. The alliteration of „cool‟ and „clear‟ reinforces this point, and gives the reader hope that if they give money, good things will happen. It also contrasts with the „dirty yellow‟ water of the other field, making it seem even cleaner. Excellent explanation will be more detailed by: -Discussing Purpose and Effect (TEPE) -Commenting with increasing precision on the effect of power words and techniques
  • 15. Explaining Effects  „buckets with cool, fresh, clear water‟ – because the use of the three adjectives amplifies the fact that the water is clean. The alliteration of „cool‟ and „clear‟ reinforces this point. The alliteration of „cool‟ and „clear‟ reinforces this point, and gives the reader hope that if they give money, good things will happen. It also contrasts with the „dirty yellow‟ water of the other field, making it seem Excellent explanation will be more detailed even cleaner. by: -Discussing Purpose and Effect (TEPE) -Commenting with increasing precision on the effect of power words and techniques
  • 16.  „Wonder filling her eyes‟  Here they have used strong emotive language to give the reader a better understanding but also give a strong image. It also shows the reader the happiness the little girl had when she saw the clear water.
  • 17.
  • 18. Technique Evidence Purpose Effect Using the word Strong word choice “wonder filling her This might be to create ‘wonder’ shows that eyes” a strong sense of she is amazed at the emotion. water pipe and shows us that water is precious to her.
  • 19. Technique Evidence Purpose Effect
  • 20. One way that the writer uses language to describe in this section is ................... T Another way the writer uses language to describe is ............... The author‟s use of language / words / tone of voice is significant in creating description. The author uses setting to convey ... The characterisation of ... is developed in this section. We can see this in the quotation ... E We hear the scene described as ... This is shown in the line “......................” Arguably, the most significant line is ................ The author seems to be suggesting ... P The author is, perhaps, exploring the idea of ... The author is explaining, illustrating, uncovering, hiding, illuminating, developing, The author is creating a child‟s point of view by.... The words suggest / imply / convey ... E This word / phrase / image / character makes me think of ... This conveys feelings of ... The word / image contains several ideas. For example... The author seems to be exploring the theme / idea of .. Developing the interpretation further, we could argue that...
  • 21. Success criteria: Skilled: Excellent: • Knowledge: • Speculation: what Correctly identify might the author‟s several literary purpose be in using techniques that can this technique? be found in the text. • Speculation: what • Comprehension: might the effect on For each one, write the reader be? down a quote from the text as evidence.