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Wednesday, 12
October 2022
Question 2 -
Writer's Effect
Underneath your marked work
you have a question or task to
complete.
You have the first 10 minutes of
the lesson to respond to the
marking and improve your
work in . When finished, rule off this work and
write your date and Question 2 -
Writer's Effect for today’s lesson.
To make good progress: To make good progress: To make good progress:
Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress:
Identify appropriate
words and phrases.
Interpret words and
phrases in the text.
Analyse words and
phrases in the text.
Wednesday, 12
October 2022
Question 2 - Writer's
Effect
Interpret words and
phrases in the text.
Analyse words and
phrases in the text.
Analyse a range words and
phrases in the text,
commenting on the
overall impact of language
on the reader
Step-by-Step
1. Read question 2
2. What are you being asked to focus on?
3. Put a star next to the relevant paragraph
4. Re-read the paragraphs
5. Underline 4 words/phrases in each paragraph
6. Give a 2 – 3 sentence overview of each paragraph
7. Write down a choice
8. Give meaning (one sentence) and effect (2-3 sentences)
Re-read the descriptions of:
(a) the storm and its effects in paragraph 6, beginning ‘No sooner were we inside…’;
(b) what Zelda enjoyed about the morning in paragraph 7, beginning ‘Having only
managed…’.
Select four powerful words or phrases from each paragraph. Your choices should include
imagery. Explain how each word or phrase selected is used effectively in the context. Write
about 200 to 300 words
The general effect is of a ferocious storm,
feeling of being under attack
Hammering the rain has the force of a metal
implement which can alter the
surface of what it hits, potential for
damage
like machine gun fire destructive, continuous, loud, rapid
sound of a weapon, dangerous /
would hurt a person who went
outside
shrieking personification – shrill, piercing
noise as though the wind is in pain
or angry, sense of fear
bent double extreme angle into which the
branches have been forced, like a
very old person, suggests power of
storm
“like machine gun fire”
This means the noise was
continuously loud.
The simile suggests a
sense of danger and
destruction. It gives the
impression that the
person who went outside
would be hurt.
Remember – no marks for
writing!
This shows…
This suggests
The general effect is of a ferocious storm,
feeling of being under attack
snatched the leaves have been taken by
force, personifying the wind as a
callous thief
tossed into the air thrown up, careless action as if
wilfully discarded
as if by a manic
juggler
the leaves are whirling around
crazily in all directions, extremely
fast, up into the air and then down
again
an angry agitation violent disturbance, the surface of
the water is stirred up by the force
of the rain
“snatched”
This means that the
leaves have been taken
unexpectedly.
Personifying the wind
suggests it is cruel and
callous which gives it
power over the people.
Make sure your chosen
words and phrases are
focused on the storm!
The general effect is of an awe-inspiring
scene
sun seemed to be
smiling
the sun is warm and benevolent
wearing their spring
foliage like new
coats
the oaks covered with fresh green
leaves, like clothing worn
ostentatiously/proudly
feathery clouds light, wispy, delicate
dabbed here and there, as though an artist
has lightly marked the sky with the
clouds
“feathery clouds”
This means there were
only light clouds in the
sky. It suggests that the
clouds are delicate which
gives the image of a
picturesque and peaceful
day.
Make sure your chosen
words and phrases are
focused on the morning!
The general effect is of an awe-inspiring
scene
religious solemnity austere, sober, serious, an aura of
formality, the grey plumage is like
the clothing worn by someone
clerical/devout/spiritual
like tiny translucent
pearls
the water droplets are small,
round, shiny with light passing
through them, beautiful and
precious
speared sudden attack suggesting
precision/violence
“like tiny translucent
pearls”
This means the water
droplets are small and let
light through. This
suggests they are
precious and beautiful,
creating an image of
tranquillity.
This means
This suggests
To make good progress: To make good progress: To make good progress:
Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress:
Identify appropriate
words and phrases.
Interpret words and
phrases in the text.
Analyse words and
phrases in the text.
Peer Assessment
Question 2 - Writer's
Effect
Interpret words and
phrases in the text.
Analyse words and
phrases in the text.
Analyse a range words and
phrases in the text,
commenting on the
overall impact of language
on the reader

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Writer's Effect Analysis.pptx

  • 1. Wednesday, 12 October 2022 Question 2 - Writer's Effect Underneath your marked work you have a question or task to complete. You have the first 10 minutes of the lesson to respond to the marking and improve your work in . When finished, rule off this work and write your date and Question 2 - Writer's Effect for today’s lesson.
  • 2. To make good progress: To make good progress: To make good progress: Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress: Identify appropriate words and phrases. Interpret words and phrases in the text. Analyse words and phrases in the text. Wednesday, 12 October 2022 Question 2 - Writer's Effect Interpret words and phrases in the text. Analyse words and phrases in the text. Analyse a range words and phrases in the text, commenting on the overall impact of language on the reader
  • 3. Step-by-Step 1. Read question 2 2. What are you being asked to focus on? 3. Put a star next to the relevant paragraph 4. Re-read the paragraphs 5. Underline 4 words/phrases in each paragraph 6. Give a 2 – 3 sentence overview of each paragraph 7. Write down a choice 8. Give meaning (one sentence) and effect (2-3 sentences) Re-read the descriptions of: (a) the storm and its effects in paragraph 6, beginning ‘No sooner were we inside…’; (b) what Zelda enjoyed about the morning in paragraph 7, beginning ‘Having only managed…’. Select four powerful words or phrases from each paragraph. Your choices should include imagery. Explain how each word or phrase selected is used effectively in the context. Write about 200 to 300 words
  • 4. The general effect is of a ferocious storm, feeling of being under attack Hammering the rain has the force of a metal implement which can alter the surface of what it hits, potential for damage like machine gun fire destructive, continuous, loud, rapid sound of a weapon, dangerous / would hurt a person who went outside shrieking personification – shrill, piercing noise as though the wind is in pain or angry, sense of fear bent double extreme angle into which the branches have been forced, like a very old person, suggests power of storm “like machine gun fire” This means the noise was continuously loud. The simile suggests a sense of danger and destruction. It gives the impression that the person who went outside would be hurt. Remember – no marks for writing! This shows… This suggests
  • 5. The general effect is of a ferocious storm, feeling of being under attack snatched the leaves have been taken by force, personifying the wind as a callous thief tossed into the air thrown up, careless action as if wilfully discarded as if by a manic juggler the leaves are whirling around crazily in all directions, extremely fast, up into the air and then down again an angry agitation violent disturbance, the surface of the water is stirred up by the force of the rain “snatched” This means that the leaves have been taken unexpectedly. Personifying the wind suggests it is cruel and callous which gives it power over the people. Make sure your chosen words and phrases are focused on the storm!
  • 6. The general effect is of an awe-inspiring scene sun seemed to be smiling the sun is warm and benevolent wearing their spring foliage like new coats the oaks covered with fresh green leaves, like clothing worn ostentatiously/proudly feathery clouds light, wispy, delicate dabbed here and there, as though an artist has lightly marked the sky with the clouds “feathery clouds” This means there were only light clouds in the sky. It suggests that the clouds are delicate which gives the image of a picturesque and peaceful day. Make sure your chosen words and phrases are focused on the morning!
  • 7. The general effect is of an awe-inspiring scene religious solemnity austere, sober, serious, an aura of formality, the grey plumage is like the clothing worn by someone clerical/devout/spiritual like tiny translucent pearls the water droplets are small, round, shiny with light passing through them, beautiful and precious speared sudden attack suggesting precision/violence “like tiny translucent pearls” This means the water droplets are small and let light through. This suggests they are precious and beautiful, creating an image of tranquillity. This means This suggests
  • 8. To make good progress: To make good progress: To make good progress: Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress: Outstanding progress: Identify appropriate words and phrases. Interpret words and phrases in the text. Analyse words and phrases in the text. Peer Assessment Question 2 - Writer's Effect Interpret words and phrases in the text. Analyse words and phrases in the text. Analyse a range words and phrases in the text, commenting on the overall impact of language on the reader