1. The Cherwell School English Faculty
Mock Exam Feedback 2011
Name: XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
READING SECTION
Question Wording Skills Score
1 (Video) ‘List 4 things ...’ Find information 4/4
2 (Video) ‘Explain how....’ Find and explain 3/4
3 (Video) ‘Why does...’ Find and explain with inference 4/8
‘How does the writer use
4 (Video) Write about language 5/12
language...’
‘Compare the ways the texts are Write about presentation
5 (Video) 9/12
presented...’ Compare the texts
My Total READING score: 25 /40
My Targets for Reading
Linking phrases: use the sheets we've looked at to raise the quality of language that you use to
describe techniques and their effects - all the 'lodge the idea in the reader's mind' phrases.
WRITING SECTION
Question Wording Score
6 (Video) ‘Choose a place you know well and describe ...’ 12/16
7 (Video) ‘Write an article to persuade ...’ 17/24
My Total WRITING score: 29/40
My Targets for Writing
Timing: aim to work much more quickly through the first half of the paper, to ensure that you have
enough time to do developed Writing answers for questions 6 and 7.
Advanced sentence structures: use the video on Cherwell Online to revise advanced sentence
structures, and avoid using so many exclamation marks at the ends of your sentences!!!!
My Total Exam Score: 54 /80
Next Steps
Once you are very clear what your stronger and weaker areas are, target your revision by using the revision videos
on www.youtube.com/cherwellonline. Watch the films there, take notes on what you learn, and do the activities.