The target audience provided positive feedback on the improvements made to the magazine draft. They preferred the more prominent cover story and easier to read font on the front cover. On the contents page, they liked how the text was formatted with less spacing to look more conventional. For the double page spread, enlarging the main image helped it stand out amongst the other images. Overall, the target audience approved of the changes made across the drafts.

1. Audience Feedback on my Production improvements
Afterbeinggivenmyimprovementsformydraftsand improvingthem, Iaskedmytargetaudience
whethertheylikedmyimprovementsornot.
I askedthree girlswhowere partof the targetaudience formymagazine as I knew thattheywould
give me the bestfeedbackthatI needed.
Firstly, theyall saidthattheynowpreferredmyfrontcoveras the coverstory wasnow more
dominanttothe page andstands outmore from the rest.Theyalso likedmychange of fontforthe
coverstory inthe heart,because theyfeltthatthe textwas easiertoreadfrom faraway and looks
more appealingtothe targetaudience,whereasbefore,itwasquite hardto readdue to the very
curlyfont style thatI hadchosento use. Theypreferall myfontchangesas theyfeel thattheyare
more appealingtotargetaudience.
Ontomy contentspage,theytoldme that theylike the waythatI have addedmore texttogether in
the contentslisting,withlessspacingas it’smore conventionalforthe genre of musicthatI am
creatingmy magazine for.The page alsohas lessspacesandgaps whichmakesthe magazine feel
more togetherthanit didpreviously.
Lastly,withmydouble page spread,thiswasthe page in mymagazine where Ihadthe least
improvementstomake.Imade my mainimage inmy double page spreadfill more of the one side in
orderfor it to standout more amongstthe otherimagesthatI chose toinclude withinthe space.My
target audience likedthisideaasitenticesthemintoreadingthe double page spreadmore asthey
can now clearlysee whothe personisbyjusthavingto glance at it.
Overall,Iam happywiththe improvementsthatIhave made and bylooking backat my previous
drafts,I can clearlysee whyIneededtochange some parts of my magazine.