This document discusses paraphrasing and summarizing. It defines paraphrasing as restating information from a text in your own words while maintaining the same length and details. Summarizing is shortening a text down to its main ideas. The document provides examples of paraphrasing and summarizing sentences and outlines steps for paraphrasing, which include breaking down sentences, suggesting synonyms, and rewriting in a new sentence that maintains the original meaning. It emphasizes that paraphrasing and summarizing are important learning skills but warns against plagiarism.
2. Lesson Focus & Success
Criteria
To understand what
paraphrasing and
summarising are
To understand that
learning is governed by
ethical as well as
strategic
considerations
To be able to say what is meant
by paraphrasing and
summarising
To explain how paraphrasing
and summarising helps learning
To be able to define plagiarism
To say why it is wrong/illegal to
plagiarize
4. GKR
In small groups, make
a T Chart and list
everything on one side
you know about
paraphrasing, and
everything you know
about summarising on
the other side
Appoint a reporter to
share back to the class
What does
the title tell
me?
What do I
predict the
text will be
about?
What can
the pictures
tell me?
What do I
already know
about this
topic?
What
words do
I expect
to see?
What
images come
to mind?
What will I
do as I
read?
6. Paraphrasing is:
retelling the information in your own words,
retaining its meaning
the same length as the original text
a retell, including details from the text.
8. Step One:
Note the topic of the text; ‘What is this about?’
Step Two:
Break up the ‘events’ in a sentence. Use the verb to
break up the sentence into chunks and keywords.
Step Three:
Suggest synonyms for key words. Swap words or
phrases for synonyms.
Step Four:
Link the new words into a sentence.
Step Five:
Check the new sentence matches the original sentence in
its context and purpose. Does it mean the same thing?
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9. Paraphrasing
A blacksmith uses tools like hammers to hit the
softened metal and reshape it. The particles are
moved around in the metal into new positions to
make a new shape.
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How can we paraphrase these
sentences?
10. Paraphrasing example
A blacksmith uses tools like hammers to hit the
softened metal and reshape it. The particles are
moved around in the metal into new positions to
make a new shape.
Break up events
E.g. Softened metal is reshaped by blacksmiths
using hammer like tools. The metal is made into
a new shape by the particles
11. Paraphrasing example
A blacksmith uses tools like hammers to hit the
softened metal and reshape it. The particles are
moved around in the metal into new positions to
make a new shape.
Suggest Synonyms
E.g. Softened metal is reshaped by blacksmiths
using hammer like tools. The metal is made into
a new shape by the particles
13. When we
summarise a
piece of writing
we give the
shorter version
and focus on the
key points that the
author makes.
14. To scan the text to pick up
the main ideas
To identify the main idea of
each chapter
To highlight the key words
To be able to say what
learning action you used
today to help you
summarise the text.
15. When we summarise we:
identify the main idea of
the selected text
highlight the key
vocabulary
say what questions have
been answered
16. After reading a
sentence/paragraph, ask:
What are the main ideas
this paragraph has told
you?
How could you say the main
ideas in the paragraph in
one sentence?
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17. Summarising Activity
A blacksmith uses tools like hammers to hit the
softened metal and reshape it. The particles are
moved around in the metal into new positions to
make a new shape.
18. Review
In your Review Book,
write what you have
learnt today and how
you will use this to help
you in your learning
this year.
Editor's Notes
On the previous slide paraphrasing was defined. Now we are going to look at how it is different to summarising.
Paraphrasing involves putting a passage into your own words. Summarising involves putting the main ideas into your own words.
Paraphrasing is different to summarising. Paraphrasing is about the same size as the original text with the same information. A summary is a more condensed version of the main points.
Its always best to give students single, simple sentences to practice on first.
Even with these, ask them to change as many words as possible, then to re-form the sentence.
Students will better understand paraphrasing if you can teach them a “system” or systematic way of going about the task.
Steps to teach paraphrasing:
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Note the topic of the text.
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Segment the “events” in a sentence (circle the main verbs and use these as a basis for restructuring the complex sentence into several simple sentences). Even simple sentences will have several meaningful units.
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Suggest synonyms for key words.
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Link the synonyms into a relationship. Many students find this difficult. They can replace individual words but have trouble reconstructing the sentence. If you give the students a ‘frame’ or structure, they can insert the paraphrased word. A frame is a sentence stem or sentence beginning. Then they need to say the new sentence so that they can learn models for stringing the words together. You can ask the students to suggest a range of paraphrases, then ask the students to select the paraphrase which is the closest in meaning to the original text.
Rearrange the paraphrased phrases into a new sentence.
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Check that the new sentence has the same meaning as the original sentence. (If the new sentence is incorrect, ask the students which parts of the sentence can be kept, and which might need to be changed.)
Put the paraphrased sentence into the original, and check if it fits with the sentences that come before and after it.
Students should think about the 5 Steps of Paraphrasing
Write text up on board:
Circle verbs
Underline the event/s in each sentence
Rewrite text:
Use synonyms
Reorder the events
Key vocab
softened – tenderised, modified, weaken,
reshaped – variation, reformation, modification, transformation
tools – apparatus, appliance, gadget, utensil, implement
made – built, formed, manufactured
shape – format, form, model
particles – atom, piece, stuff
Substitute key words with synonyms.
Reread with the new words.
When students summarise, have them:
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tell you the main ideas in full sentences in their own words
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summarise the text in full sentences in their own words.
Students need to know what actions to use.
Obviously, the students need to know what the components of the summarising actions are. These are covered in the next few slides.