1. Feedback Write Up
The responses for this question was mostly
positive, with only 3 people saying the pace was
too slow, also someone made an extra comment
saying the pace was good to begin with, but
should have got faster as the video went on. I
tried to increase the pace slightly throughout the
music video, however the tempo of the song
does not increase a great deal. So I have learned
that I should have got more shots so that I could
have made each shot slightly shorter to be able
to increase the pace of my music video.
The majority of people thought that the
transition from the bed room to the bridge
was effective, with the average being 4. This
has made me think that maybe it would have
been a good idea to show more of his
journey to the bridge starting from him
leaving the house, to make people
understand it more. I think that I made the
transition of going into the guitar and back
out effective, by changing the contrast of the
second shot so that it was as dark as when I
tracked in, when the guitar was in the
bedroom.
Was the location of my music
video appropriate for the genre
of music? (Please comment.
16 of the 17 responses says that the location
was appropriate for the music video, most
just saying yes. Some people commented on
how it was simple but was meaningful. This I
felt I learnt from my AS work, where I tried
to make it too complicated, which meant I
couldn't get effective shots, so for my music
video I decided to go for the more simple
approach trying to make it more effective, I
appear to have done well based on my
feedback. However, there was one person
who said 'Well, not really, I didn't
understand why it was shot in a house and
then what looked like a car park', but this
was the only negative comment, so I am
pleased with my choice of location.

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can still be seen as postiv
majority went for 4, imply
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question so that I knew w
understand the narrative
have learnt how I could h
understandable to everyo
The average response was 7
the whole thought that the t
together well. From this I ha
the conventions of a poster
make them both recognisab
some people said 5, so thou
average. I believe that I man
well as I used a typical conve
same image for the poster a
which is done by many profe
find it hard to understand ho
Also I used images of the sam
the music video (under the b
work. Although the colour sc
and could be seen as boring
link the 3 products together
strokes at the top and botto
pipet on photoshop, to get t
bridge, to use on my poster.
This is very positive feedback as everyone
thought the transitions in the video worked. This
shows that they were effective transitions and
that I made good decisions when editing my
video. If fade transitions are used too much they
can look unprofessional, therefore, by feedback
has showed me that I used a good combination
of transitions to make my video flow and look
aesthetically pleasing.

3. Overall, I believe that I got positive feedback, therefore I was successful in making my
music video appeal to my target audience as all the feedback was from people that were
in my target audience. I was successful in the way I put my products together, to make a
one good overall piece of work.