2. KEY DETAILS
• Working Title: Conscious
• Film Length: 6-8 minutes
• Logline: Young female lucid dreamer dreams that her house is robbed of a precious object the
night before her 16th birthday, then receives said object as a gift the next day.
• Key characters:
Young female Eryn, struggles with extreme lucid dreams and sleeps badly because of it. She is an
only child and is dreading the turn of her birthday as she knows her family are struggling with
money.
Parents of Eryn, middle-aged and desperate to provide their daughter with happiness as they know
how challenging her life can be with the lack of sleep she gets.
Robbers, 2 anonymous figures who creep in and steal the object.
3. SYNOPSIS – ACT 1
• Camera pans down to Eryn sat on her bed. It is early evening and she is staring
blankly ahead of her. A voiceover of her own voice introduces the viewers to her
character. She explains that it is her birthday tomorrow and how she is aware of
their money problems. She is called for dinner and a montage ensues of her
evening and ends with her getting into bed. Black screen follows as she closes her
eyes.
4. SYNOPSIS – ACT 2
• Cut to the black of a jumper being pulled over the robbers head. Short cut shots of the robbers entering the
house including hijacking the lock, opening the door, closing it, creeping through the corridor, motioning to
Eryn’s room and tripping on the corner of the hallway. This noise cuts to the opening of Eryn’s eyes and she
sits up sharply. Outside her door she sees people moving and lies back down breathing heavily. The robbers
are motioning to each other and one slowly opens the door. Eryn is still and glances out from under the
covers at the robbers creeping into her room.
• They appear to be searching for something and the tension builds as one robber peers over Eryn’s bedside
table right next to her head. They cannot seem to find what they are looking for. Her heart is beating as they
look around the room slowly and then one walks towards her window. As they draw back the curtain a ring
is sat on the windowsill, almost glowing. Eryn has never seen this before and the robber grabs it and they
begin to leave. The same shots as earlier show the robbers leaving just as quickly as they came and Eryn sits
up in complete confusion when she hears the door shut. She gets up and looks on her windowsill when
suddenly she feels faint and falls to her bed.
5. SYNOPSIS – ACT 3
• In the morning she wakes up in her bed and slowly the camera focusses on the
ceiling above her. She suddenly has flashbacks of the robbers in her room and
gets up to go and tell her parents. Cuts to her parents sorting her cake and
coming towards her room and as Eryn opens the door they burst in singing
happy birthday. She tries to sing over the top of them but cannot get a word in
until she is sat back down on her bed with the cake and a present in front of her.
She blows out the candles and the present is thrust in her face. She opens it to
see the ring inside and the film ends with a slow zoom into the box.
6. TARGET AUDIENCE
• Target Audience: My target audience includes both genders from ages 10-20 from a middle to high class background. Anyone who can
watch YouTube of course, will be able to watch it but I am aiming for this specific demographic with the storyline and characters I’m
using.
I expect that my target audience will be predominantly teenagers as my protagonist is a teenage girl. I am aware that many teenagers may
experience vivid dreams due to puberty and the happenings within their lives influencing their dreams and therefore I can see this age
group being most applicable to the plot. The settings of Eryn’s bedroom will be reminiscent for teenagers who are stereotypically known
for spending a lot of independent time in their bedrooms and on top of this, the idea of a 16th birthday will either be an exciting future
thought or fond memory for those who are watching. Those younger than 16 will, I’m sure, be looking forward to being more ‘grown up’,
as a teenager who begins to gain independence from their parents. Moreover, those between the ages of 16 and 20 will have recent
memories of their 16th birthday and that significant time in their lives, this being relatable and an attractive thought for them to delve into
as they watch the film.
I also picture my target audience to be predominantly middle class and verging into higher classes. As a main part of the storyline is that
the family are tight on money I can see quite a few middle class viewers being able to relate, as most families in this bracket will have
experienced periods with less money in today’s society. I believe teenagers in particular will be susceptible to this as they will be becoming
more aware of issues like these in society and their own households as they get older. However I can also see higher classes enjoying this
film too, as they will be used to seeing attractive and precious things like the ring. I think that it will be more focussed on middle class, yet
this aspect may draw in the lower-high class teenagers who are used to those kind of gifts.
7. FORM AND STYLE
• I can see this film being filmed in a style of long, extended shots to create tension
when it is needed, as well as short snappy shots to show a contrast between the
fear of Eryn and the presence of the robbers. As a thriller I can see this fitting into
the genre with the last shot being the ‘dropping of the penny’ which is a
convention of thrillers that is used regularly to leave the viewers feeling
uncomfortable. For the longer shots I would like to use some equipment to make
the camera stable and smooth when filming for extended periods of time, so I will
need to look into getting a tripod or stabiliser to aid me with this. This is
imperative to the execution of the style I would like to achieve as I don’t want any
shaky filming to distract my viewers from the film and break the tension I will be
trying so hard to build.
8. MARKETPLACE
• In the market I see this film being published online rather than in larger scale
cinemas, as it is quite a small project. The fact that my target audience is a young
and technology-savvy age group means that this platform will be easily accessible
to them and will allow for the film to be shred via social media to reach everyone
included in the demographic a lot more quickly and cheaply. Moreover I can see
it doing well at festivals due to its personal touches such as the voiceover and
outlining of family life that will be relatable for a large crowd. I can also see scope
for a sequel as the film ends on a cliff hanger and the audience will have
questions that could be answered, such as whether the robbers will come that
night to steal the ring.
