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1ST DRAFT OF PROJECT
Examples of my production !
Promotional
Poster
• I tried to use a neutral colour
pallet to reflect my Degree show
!!
• Lines are the most repeated
shape used in my project , the
reinforcement of this should
drum in my theme for the
audience.
Teacher Feedback !!
Andrew said “ I think your design is too washed
out, you need to change or add something to
make it stand out and more bold”
After thinking about his feedback and not wanting
to comprise my colour scheme I decided with
(Andrew‟s help) that adding black strokes around
many aspects of my work will make it POP more .
– Improvements were made to make sure my project was
better and less likely fade into the background ……
AFTER
I think that the bold strokes really did help make my project
stand out and less „washed out‟ like before. I think if my project
was advertised in the street before hand people would have
just walked passed it. Now I feel like it stands a chance in being
noticed :)

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Feedback

  • 1. 1ST DRAFT OF PROJECT Examples of my production !
  • 2. Promotional Poster • I tried to use a neutral colour pallet to reflect my Degree show !! • Lines are the most repeated shape used in my project , the reinforcement of this should drum in my theme for the audience.
  • 3. Teacher Feedback !! Andrew said “ I think your design is too washed out, you need to change or add something to make it stand out and more bold” After thinking about his feedback and not wanting to comprise my colour scheme I decided with (Andrew‟s help) that adding black strokes around many aspects of my work will make it POP more .
  • 4. – Improvements were made to make sure my project was better and less likely fade into the background …… AFTER
  • 5.
  • 6.
  • 7. I think that the bold strokes really did help make my project stand out and less „washed out‟ like before. I think if my project was advertised in the street before hand people would have just walked passed it. Now I feel like it stands a chance in being noticed :)