The document summarizes changes made to a digipak design based on audience feedback. Key changes include: (1) updating the font to match the poster design, (2) keeping the clock image to represent the passage of time rather than directly relating to the video, and (3) adding logos, sharpening images, and adjusting colors and borders to improve visual cohesion across panels. The revisions help the digipak better represent the themes of time and repetition from the accompanying video album.

1. Front Panel/Cover
In my Final audience
feedback, lots of people
said that I should use the
same font on the digipak,
as I had done on my
poster. Therefore for the
final edit I changed the
font and text so both the
poster and the digipak
match.
I was also told that maybe I should
use the digital clock like in my
video on the front cover, to relate
it more to the video. I haven’t done
this however, as it was not the
digital clock in itself I was
representing in the video, but the
passage of time. Therefore I
believe the use of a different clock
adds to the elements of time and
helps represent the repretitetive
nature of the video.

2. Back cover
I didn’t have much to change on
the back cover, however I did
make sure all the copyright
information was visible, as some
of it was missing on the last draft.
And I also added the logo I added
to from the video.

3. Extra panel
I have added more blue into
this image to help link it to the
blue on my second inside panel.

4. Inside panel 1

5. Inside panel 2
I have made the image of the man
sharper then it was, as said in my
audience feedback. However I
have kept the borders around him
kind of wavy, this is to give the
representation of a spirit, which is
not fully solid.
My feedback also said I should
make all the panels on the inside
black and white, as this image
was too bright. However I have
lowered the brightness on the
image so it fits in better with the
other slides. Without getting rid
of the heaven like effect on the
clouds., I also added a black
border, to help the image blend
in with the others.

6. Spines
I have added a spine with a saying from
one of the intros of the songs, this is to
relate the album to the artist.

7. CD panelWith CD
Without CD
I have used pictures
with and without
bottles to reference the
digipak to the video,
and to show the
decline of the character
in the video, starting
off with no bottles and
ending up having lots.