1/9/10 8:45 PM
Resources compiled from:

EETT Project Coordinator
Gail Desler

Area 3 Writing Project
Daneila Thompson
Angela Luna
Heather Koczian

Making Movies Support
Krishna Harrison-Munoz


Grammar (PART I):
    • Cover
          o Nouns (Class President)
          o Pronouns (Marble Champ) & (The Night Journey)
          o Verbs (Juggling)
                Making Verb Interesting
                      Show Not Tell – Ditto for Verbs 1
                      Show Not Tell – Ditto for Verbs 2
          o Sentences (The Abacus Contest)
                Sentence Variety
                      Part One
                      Part Two
          o Subjects & Predicates (S.O.R. Losers)

Intro Writer’s Notebook
      • A Side
            o Table of Contents
            o Notebook Rules
            o Writing Atmosphere

     •   B Side
            o Free Write
                    Developing Writing Stamina
Intro 6 Traits
      • Ideas
      • Organization
•   Voice
     •   Word Choice
     •   Sentence Fluency
     •   Conventions
            o FOCUS
                  Ideas and Content
                        Narrow Topic
                        Quality Details = SHOWING
                        Questions are answered
                  Organization
                        Lead or Introduction
                        Sequencing/Order
                        Pacing = SLOW or QUICK
                        Transitions
                        Conclusions
                  Conventions
                        Spelling
                        Punctuation
                        Capitalization
                        Grammar/Usage
                        Paragraphing
            o Provide EXAMPLES of 5, 3, 1 writing.
            o Provide Breakdown
            o Provide “Student-Friendly” Rubric

Grammar (PART II) - CORRELATION TO CONVENTIONS
    • Cover
          o Capitalizations (Galileo, Telescopes)
                Dates, addresses
          o Punctuation (PART I) (Circ. Sq. Daggers, Mystery Mars, Stars)
                Parentheses, hyphens, dashes, ellipses
                Quotations
                      Go over RULES for QUOTATIONS
                Conjunctions/Interjections (Strong as Ginger)

FIRST MOVIE: DIALOGUE
     •   Write script based off of two people talking about a problem
     •   Discuss ways to solve problem
     •   Solve problem
            o Use Title, End Credits
o Examples of Dialogue - Movies

Narrative Writing
      •    Great Introductions
                   6 Ways Not to Start a Narrative
                   The Limp Handshake/Zero Eye Contact Intro
                   The Never-Ending Small Talk Intro
                   The Stick-to-the-Facts Intro
                   The Cliché Intro
                   The Tell-All-About-Me Intro

            o 6 Ways to Start
                  Start with a Question
                  Start with Dialogue
                  Start with an Interesting fact
                  Start with a Strong Opinion or Feeling
                  Start with a Single Word or Sentence Fragment
                  Start with Something that Leaves the Reader
                   Wondering
    •
Grammar (PART III) – CORRELATION TO NARRATIVE
    • Adjectives (The Land I Lost)
    • Adverbs (In Two Worlds)
    • Showing Not Telling – Emotions Connected to Body
    • Figurative Language
          o Simile
          o Metaphor
          o Personification
          o Onomatopoeia

     •   Word-Association List
            o When you think of…
                   Girl, boy, store, park, car, country, chair, school,
                     restaurant, movies, dogs, bodies of water
     •   Intro Graphic Organizer
     •   Intro Storyboard


SECOND MOVIE: ACTION
    • Write script based off of two people competing in a game
         o Indoor i.e. Connect Four, Outdoor i.e. Soccer
•   Write a narrative, voiceover to be read during the establishing
         shot.
            o Use Title, End Credits + Music, Voiceover (Using narrative)
     •   Examples of Action - Movies

Persuasive Writing

     •   Fact or Fiction
            o Facts are something that actually exists and that can be
               observed and studies objectively.
                   Sentence 1: State the fact in the center
                   Sentence 2: State supporting examples
                          Using Web...

     Voting for Fairy Tale Characters
           o For example:
                  Cinderella is lucky because
                        She has a fairy godmother
                        The prince falls in love with her
                        She loses a show as a clue
                        The prince works so hard to find her

     •   Scary: White Witch, Fenris the Wolf,
     •   Brave: Lucy
     •   Strong: Aslan
     •   Lucky:

     •   Opinion Frames
           o I strongly/disagree with the statement because I think…
           o I agree/disagree somewhat ( a little) with the statement
               because I feel… but I also know/feel
           o I want you to agree/disagree with the statement because I
               think…
           o Another important reason to agree/disagree with me
               (consider my point of view) is….


     •   More Persuasive Sentence Frames
           o Although not everyone would agree, my position on
              __________ is…
                  One reason…
   My evidence is….
                    Another reason…
                    This is shown by…
                    Furthermore/In addition to/also….
                    The final piece of evidence is…
                    As you can see…



     •   Introduction
            o Name the topic
            o Get the reader involved
            o State your opinion
            o Summarize your response
     •   Body (one or more paragraphs)
            o Give reasons for your opinions
            o Give facts and examples to support your opinion
            o Avoid using opinion to support opinion
     •   Conclusion (one paragraph)
            o Restate your opinion
            o Urge the reader to agree
            o End with a POSTIVE statement

THIRD MOVIE: COMMERCIAL
     • Write script based on selecting a commonplace school item
     • Give reasons why people need to buy your product
          o Use Title, End Credits + Music, Voiceover (Using narrative)
          o Examples of Commercial - Movies

Writing Program Outline

  • 1.
    1/9/10 8:45 PM Resourcescompiled from: EETT Project Coordinator Gail Desler Area 3 Writing Project Daneila Thompson Angela Luna Heather Koczian Making Movies Support Krishna Harrison-Munoz Grammar (PART I): • Cover o Nouns (Class President) o Pronouns (Marble Champ) & (The Night Journey) o Verbs (Juggling)  Making Verb Interesting  Show Not Tell – Ditto for Verbs 1  Show Not Tell – Ditto for Verbs 2 o Sentences (The Abacus Contest)  Sentence Variety  Part One  Part Two o Subjects & Predicates (S.O.R. Losers) Intro Writer’s Notebook • A Side o Table of Contents o Notebook Rules o Writing Atmosphere • B Side o Free Write  Developing Writing Stamina Intro 6 Traits • Ideas • Organization
  • 2.
    Voice • Word Choice • Sentence Fluency • Conventions o FOCUS  Ideas and Content  Narrow Topic  Quality Details = SHOWING  Questions are answered  Organization  Lead or Introduction  Sequencing/Order  Pacing = SLOW or QUICK  Transitions  Conclusions  Conventions  Spelling  Punctuation  Capitalization  Grammar/Usage  Paragraphing o Provide EXAMPLES of 5, 3, 1 writing. o Provide Breakdown o Provide “Student-Friendly” Rubric Grammar (PART II) - CORRELATION TO CONVENTIONS • Cover o Capitalizations (Galileo, Telescopes)  Dates, addresses o Punctuation (PART I) (Circ. Sq. Daggers, Mystery Mars, Stars)  Parentheses, hyphens, dashes, ellipses  Quotations  Go over RULES for QUOTATIONS  Conjunctions/Interjections (Strong as Ginger) FIRST MOVIE: DIALOGUE • Write script based off of two people talking about a problem • Discuss ways to solve problem • Solve problem o Use Title, End Credits
  • 3.
    o Examples ofDialogue - Movies Narrative Writing • Great Introductions  6 Ways Not to Start a Narrative  The Limp Handshake/Zero Eye Contact Intro  The Never-Ending Small Talk Intro  The Stick-to-the-Facts Intro  The Cliché Intro  The Tell-All-About-Me Intro o 6 Ways to Start  Start with a Question  Start with Dialogue  Start with an Interesting fact  Start with a Strong Opinion or Feeling  Start with a Single Word or Sentence Fragment  Start with Something that Leaves the Reader Wondering • Grammar (PART III) – CORRELATION TO NARRATIVE • Adjectives (The Land I Lost) • Adverbs (In Two Worlds) • Showing Not Telling – Emotions Connected to Body • Figurative Language o Simile o Metaphor o Personification o Onomatopoeia • Word-Association List o When you think of…  Girl, boy, store, park, car, country, chair, school, restaurant, movies, dogs, bodies of water • Intro Graphic Organizer • Intro Storyboard SECOND MOVIE: ACTION • Write script based off of two people competing in a game o Indoor i.e. Connect Four, Outdoor i.e. Soccer
  • 4.
    Write a narrative, voiceover to be read during the establishing shot. o Use Title, End Credits + Music, Voiceover (Using narrative) • Examples of Action - Movies Persuasive Writing • Fact or Fiction o Facts are something that actually exists and that can be observed and studies objectively.  Sentence 1: State the fact in the center  Sentence 2: State supporting examples  Using Web... Voting for Fairy Tale Characters o For example:  Cinderella is lucky because  She has a fairy godmother  The prince falls in love with her  She loses a show as a clue  The prince works so hard to find her • Scary: White Witch, Fenris the Wolf, • Brave: Lucy • Strong: Aslan • Lucky: • Opinion Frames o I strongly/disagree with the statement because I think… o I agree/disagree somewhat ( a little) with the statement because I feel… but I also know/feel o I want you to agree/disagree with the statement because I think… o Another important reason to agree/disagree with me (consider my point of view) is…. • More Persuasive Sentence Frames o Although not everyone would agree, my position on __________ is…  One reason…
  • 5.
    My evidence is….  Another reason…  This is shown by…  Furthermore/In addition to/also….  The final piece of evidence is…  As you can see… • Introduction o Name the topic o Get the reader involved o State your opinion o Summarize your response • Body (one or more paragraphs) o Give reasons for your opinions o Give facts and examples to support your opinion o Avoid using opinion to support opinion • Conclusion (one paragraph) o Restate your opinion o Urge the reader to agree o End with a POSTIVE statement THIRD MOVIE: COMMERCIAL • Write script based on selecting a commonplace school item • Give reasons why people need to buy your product o Use Title, End Credits + Music, Voiceover (Using narrative) o Examples of Commercial - Movies