Unit 4 Supporting and Concluding Sentences Basic Writing WTUC March 29, 2007
Activity 1, p. 58:  controlling ideas:  best cities on the east coast, Washington D.C.;  prediction:  reasons and examples showing why Washington, D.C., is a good place to visit  2.  controlling ideas:  interesting career, flight attendant; prediction: interesting aspects of being a flight attendant  3.  controlling ideas:  respect and admire, grandmother Carla;  prediction:  good qualities of my grandmother
Activity 3, pp. 61–62:  TS 2  TS 1  TS 1  TS 2  TS 1  TS 1  TS 2  TS 1
Activity 4, pp. 62–63:  1.  What are the poisonous snakes?  2.  What are the adverse effects? 3.  How will computers eliminate libraries?  4.  Why is San Francisco a wonderful place to raise children? 5.  What happened when your boyfriend broke up with you?
Activity 7, pp. 66–68 :  Paragraph 25, p.67: 1.  good supporting sentence: It tells a reason for using chlorine, which is mentioned in the previous sentence.  2.  unrelated sentence: No connection between accidental poisoning and maintaining your pool. 3.  good supporting sentence: Another step in maintaining a swimming pool.
Paragraph 26, p.68:  good supporting sentence: First example of how to relax.  good supporting sentence: Another example of how to relax.  unrelated sentence: New information not related to the topic of how to relax and fall asleep.
Paragraph 27, p.72:  TS:  When I first started going to college, I was surprised at all the studying I had to do . Unrelated sentences: none.  Possible concluding sentence:  Although I was surprised at first at the amount of work I had to do, I managed to change my habits and become a good university student .
Paragraph 28, p.73:  TS:  Caring for river turtles is easier than many people think . Unrelated sentences:  If you have a large turtle, you will need to construct a small pond in your back yard.  Possible concluding sentence:  After you have finished these simple steps, your home is ready for your new pet .
Paragraph 29, p.73:  TS:  There are four easy ways to prepare a delicious and nutritious egg .  Unrelated sentences: Some people believe that brown eggs taste better than white eggs.  Possible concluding sentence: After preparing eggs in each of the four ways, you can decide which method is easiest and most delicious for you.

Unit 4, basic Writing

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    Unit 4 Supportingand Concluding Sentences Basic Writing WTUC March 29, 2007
  • 2.
    Activity 1, p.58: controlling ideas: best cities on the east coast, Washington D.C.; prediction: reasons and examples showing why Washington, D.C., is a good place to visit 2. controlling ideas: interesting career, flight attendant; prediction: interesting aspects of being a flight attendant 3. controlling ideas: respect and admire, grandmother Carla; prediction: good qualities of my grandmother
  • 3.
    Activity 3, pp.61–62: TS 2 TS 1 TS 1 TS 2 TS 1 TS 1 TS 2 TS 1
  • 4.
    Activity 4, pp.62–63: 1. What are the poisonous snakes? 2. What are the adverse effects? 3. How will computers eliminate libraries? 4. Why is San Francisco a wonderful place to raise children? 5. What happened when your boyfriend broke up with you?
  • 5.
    Activity 7, pp.66–68 : Paragraph 25, p.67: 1. good supporting sentence: It tells a reason for using chlorine, which is mentioned in the previous sentence. 2. unrelated sentence: No connection between accidental poisoning and maintaining your pool. 3. good supporting sentence: Another step in maintaining a swimming pool.
  • 6.
    Paragraph 26, p.68: good supporting sentence: First example of how to relax. good supporting sentence: Another example of how to relax. unrelated sentence: New information not related to the topic of how to relax and fall asleep.
  • 7.
    Paragraph 27, p.72: TS: When I first started going to college, I was surprised at all the studying I had to do . Unrelated sentences: none. Possible concluding sentence: Although I was surprised at first at the amount of work I had to do, I managed to change my habits and become a good university student .
  • 8.
    Paragraph 28, p.73: TS: Caring for river turtles is easier than many people think . Unrelated sentences: If you have a large turtle, you will need to construct a small pond in your back yard. Possible concluding sentence: After you have finished these simple steps, your home is ready for your new pet .
  • 9.
    Paragraph 29, p.73: TS: There are four easy ways to prepare a delicious and nutritious egg . Unrelated sentences: Some people believe that brown eggs taste better than white eggs. Possible concluding sentence: After preparing eggs in each of the four ways, you can decide which method is easiest and most delicious for you.