UI GSSP Spring lecture series 2018 - Strategies for giving effective feedback to international students
1. STRATEGIES FOR GIVING
EFFECTIVE WRITTEN
FEEDBACK TO INTERNATIONAL
STUDENTS
Chad Eller, MA-TESL
Global Student Success Program at UIdaho
2. Effective Written Feedback
Questions for discussion
1. How do you approach giving feedback on students’ writing?
2. What are some challenges you face in giving feedback?
3. How do you give feedback, digital or hardcopy?
4. Do you worry about appropriating students’ work when you
give feedback?
3. Common pitfalls
Unclear assignment instructions
Surface-level reading
Fear of hurting a student’s feelings
Critiquing the student instead of the text
Trying to address all issues (e.g. grammar and content)
4. Avoiding the pitfalls
• Respond as a reader: This means engaging with the text intellectually and
emotionally. If you honestly engage the ideas, the student/writer will likely
take your critique in stride. Think of it as a dialogue.
• Use I-statements: “I don’t get your meaning here”/ “I laughed here”
• Prioritize: To avoid overloading your students with corrections; choose 2-4
elements of the assignment to focus your critique.
• Be constructive: Word your feedback constructively. Give them tasks.
10. Recap
➢ Make expectations clear
➢ Prioritize feedback
➢ Emphasize global vs. local issues
➢ Less can be more
➢ Remember to give positive feedback!
11. References
• Fordham, Sonja K (2015). Teacher and peer written feedback in the ESL composition
classroom: Appropriation, stance, and authorship. The University of Arizona. Retrieved
from http://hdl.handle.net/10150/577518.
• Hesse, Douglas D. (2010). Writing beyond writing classes, 2nd Ed. Retrieved from
https://www.du.edu/writing/media/documents/writing-resources-for-du-
faculty.pdf
• Eberly Center (2016). How can I effectively and efficiently respond to student
writing? Carnegie Melon University. Retrieved from
https://www.cmu.edu/teaching/designteach/design/instructionalstrategies/writing
/respond.html.