Here is some feedback on your translation:
- Good job breaking the translation into paragraphs to match the structure of the original text. This helps organize the information for the reader.
- The translations conveyed the main ideas and key points being discussed in each paragraph. I was able to understand the general topic about smart grid technology and renewable energy sources.
- Watch for a few words or phrases that could be more precise. For example, in paragraph 1 "pico petróleo o cénit petrolero" directly translates peak oil, while just "pico petrolero" may be clearer.
- Consider adding a brief summary at the end to reflect on any challenges and how you worked to understand technical terms. This