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Translation
Language and Literacy
By : Eka Desy N. (1105085046)
Fitriana (110508504033)
Putri Indah L. (1105085040)
Rustiah (1105085048)
It Covers
• Understanding of the Source Language
• Writing Skills in the Target Language
• Proof-reading and editing
Understanding of the Source Language
• Understanding linguistic and grammatical
items of the source language.
• Understanding explicit and implicit meaning of
the SL
Understanding of the Source Language
• Being familiar with the subject matter
• Linguistic knowledge of the terminology and the
means of expression specific to a subject field
• analytical and research skills as well as adeptness
in using translation tools and resources (such as
monolingual dictionaries and glossaries, on-line
aids, and consultation with experts)
Writing Skills in the Target Language
• The main job of a translator
• Understanding of linguistic and cultural
parallelism
• Be expert to pick up various expressions,
idioms, and specific vocabulary and their uses
• Be creative and have a style
Proof-reading and editing
1. Proof-reading
• The Proof-reader should be experts on the
writing style guide
• the text is being checked and corrected for
grammar, spelling, punctuation,
capitalization, coherence, organization.
Proof-reading and Editing
2. Editing
• The Editor should know the subject matter
deeply
• The text is being checked and corrected for
word choice, clarity or terminology that used.

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Translation : Language and Literacy

  • 1. Translation Language and Literacy By : Eka Desy N. (1105085046) Fitriana (110508504033) Putri Indah L. (1105085040) Rustiah (1105085048)
  • 2. It Covers • Understanding of the Source Language • Writing Skills in the Target Language • Proof-reading and editing
  • 3. Understanding of the Source Language • Understanding linguistic and grammatical items of the source language. • Understanding explicit and implicit meaning of the SL
  • 4. Understanding of the Source Language • Being familiar with the subject matter • Linguistic knowledge of the terminology and the means of expression specific to a subject field • analytical and research skills as well as adeptness in using translation tools and resources (such as monolingual dictionaries and glossaries, on-line aids, and consultation with experts)
  • 5. Writing Skills in the Target Language • The main job of a translator • Understanding of linguistic and cultural parallelism • Be expert to pick up various expressions, idioms, and specific vocabulary and their uses • Be creative and have a style
  • 6. Proof-reading and editing 1. Proof-reading • The Proof-reader should be experts on the writing style guide • the text is being checked and corrected for grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, coherence, organization.
  • 7. Proof-reading and Editing 2. Editing • The Editor should know the subject matter deeply • The text is being checked and corrected for word choice, clarity or terminology that used.