Nicole provided feedback on the table of contents draft. She said the pictures related well to school life and were interesting. However, she recommended using only two fonts to make the page less busy and choosing a more readable font. She also suggested spacing out the text more to improve clarity. The creator then made revisions based on this feedback, including using two fonts, adding more spacing, making subheadings and page numbers clearer to read.

1. Table of contents

2. First
Draft

3. Feed back from Nicole
What went well:
Firstly, I think that the pictures
really relate to school life and are
quite interesting and different to
what you might normally see on a
contents page. Also, the title font is
bold and eye-catching and the
other fonts are quite quirky and
relevant to school life.
Even Better if:
However, the improvements could
be to use only 2 fonts so the page
isn't too busy with different fonts
and choose another font to make it
more readable. You could also
space out the texts a bit more to
help with the clearness.

4. Finished Table of contents.
I made more space between the
subheadings by using Grid. I also added
more space between each line under the
columns. I changed the font of this to the
same font I used for the majority of the
page. This was so it didn’t look too ‘busy’ ,
ultimately I only used two fonts. This made
the table of contents flow and come
together more. I put ‘The Fold’ in capitals to
make it stand out more, I did this because I
wanted it to differentiate from the other
text on the page.
Under each page number, I made the text
bigger and bolder to make it clearer to read.
I used Grid to line up each column and the
end of the picture at the bottom left with
the start of the picture at the top right. I
resized the picture at the bottom left to
make it fit in more, as when I changed the
size and the positioning of the text, there
wasn’t the same amount of space. I moved
the number twenty down on the picture at
the top right as it was over the book a small
bit.