The document provides feedback on a rough cut of a film. It summarizes that test viewers responded positively to the film's effective use of a mismatch between appearance and reality, its opening silhouette and lighting, and its building of tension. Areas identified for improvement included adding more complex sound design, inserting opening and closing titles/credits, and creating an identifying title screen or "ident."

1. Rough Cut
Feedback
By Olivia Houlton

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8. Summary of Results
POSITIVES:
• We noticed that many people said they thought
that the mismatching reflection was very effective
which we were very pleased about as our film is
based on the concept of appearance and reality
• Also we noticed several comments on our use of
the silhouette and lighting at the start which we
were also very pleased about because we thought
this was an effective visual image
• Several people also commented on our build up of
tension

9. Summary of Results
IMPROVEMENTS
• Many commented on our use sound, therefore we
used both GarageBand and Freesound to create a
more complex soundscape
• Also, there were comments on our lack of titles and
credits. We improved on this by using our previous
teaser titles timelines to insert titles on Final Cut Pro
• Also, there was a comment on our lack of idents.
We improved on this by creating an ident on Final
Cut Pro and added it to the beginning of our teaser