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Misplaced Modifiers
A Review
with Practice
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Simple Modifiers
Go directly in front of the
noun being modified.
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Complex Modifiers
Phrases and clauses go
directly after (and
sometimes before) the
noun being modified.
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Prepositional Phrases
The man sat
under the palm
tree with a
suntan.
Do palm trees
tan?
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Complex Example
palm tree with a suntan
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Misplaced Modifiers
Modifiers need to be in
the correct location
regarding to intended noun
or noun phrase.
When they are not,
confusion occurs.
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Practice
In a wheel chair, the nurse sat
next to the patient.
The nurse is in the same
wheelchair as the patient!
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Practice
The nurse sat next to the
patient in a wheel chair.
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Practice
Ross was a teenager with a cast on
his leg weighing 120 pounds.
His leg weighed 120 pounds! Yikes!
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Practice
Ross was a teenager weighing 120
pounds with a cast on his leg.
Or
Ross was a 120 pound teenager with
a cast on his leg.
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Present Participles
Jennifer called
her adorable
kitten opening the
can of tuna and
filled the food
bowl.
How is the cat
opening the food?
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Complex Example
kitten opening the can
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Practice
Needing treatment, Dr. Lu
examined the patient.
The doctor needs the
treatment? Yikes!
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Practice
Dr. Lu examined the patient
needing treatment.
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Practice
I saw a mouse going to our
class meeting.
Mice don’t usually come to
class, at least not in Mrs. C’s
classroom!
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Practice
Going to our class meeting, I
saw a mouse.
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Past Participle Phrases
Portia rushed to
the store loaded
with cash to buy
the birthday gift.
How is the store
loaded with cash?
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Complex Example
store loaded with cash
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Practice
Called rhetorical modes,
essay writing has many
various forms.
Essay writing isn’t called
rhetorical modes; it’s
called essay writing.
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Practice
Essay writing has many
various forms called
Rhetorical Modes.
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Practice
Retrieved from the Moon,
NASA has many interesting
rocks.
NASA wasn’t on the moon!
Yikes!
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Practice
NASA has many interesting
rocks retrieved from the
Moon.
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Limiting Modifiers
almost just
nearly simply
even hardly
merely only
PLACEMENT CHANGES
MEANING!
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Explain the meaning:
Everyone in the
class almost
passed the
calculus exam.
Few passed!
Almost
everyone in the
class passed the
calculus exam.
Many passed!
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Explain the meaning:
John earned
nearly $100.
He earned $98.
John nearly earned
$100.
He earned
nothing.
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Practice
Christie almost sneezed
fifteen times last evening.
How many times did
Christie sneeze?
NONE!
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Dangling Modifiers
Having finished dinner, the
football game was turned on.
Who finished dinner?
Football games don’t eat! Yikes!
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Dangling Modifiers
Having finished dinner, I turned
on the football game.
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Practice
Walking up Fifth Avenue, the
Empire State Building came
into view.
Buildings don’t usually go for
a walk except in the movies!
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Practice
While we were walking up
Fifth Avenue, the Empire
State Building came into
view.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
While working as a ranger in a
National Park, a Florida
panther crossed in front of
my SUV one night.
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A Florida panther crossed in
Front of my SUV one night
while I was working as a ranger
in a National Park.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
I relaxed on the mat wearing
My Hawaiian shirt and shorts.
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Wearing my Hawaiian shirt and
Shorts, I relaxed on the mat.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
I replaced a tile on the floor
that was loose.
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I replaced a tile that was
loose on the floor.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
Jerry stepped on the
snake without any shoes
on.
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Without any shoes on,
Jerry stepped on the
snake.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
I bought the used
television from a friend
with a broken antennae.
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I bought the used
television with a broken
antennae from a friend.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
The robin built a nest at the
back of our house of grass and
string.
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The robin built a nest of grass
and string at the back of our
house.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
Climbing a tree the other
day, I saw a monkey at
the zoo.
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I saw a monkey climbing a tree
at the zoo the other day.
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Correct the Modifier Problem
Sam bought a used car
from a local dealer with a
smoky tailpipe.
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Sam bought a used car with a
smoky tailpipe from a local
dealer.
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