Modifiers

             Limiting
            Squinters
            Misplaced
Modifiers
   Modifiers are words, phrases and
    clauses that tell about nouns and
    verbs.

   In 7th and 8th grades, we called
    modifiers adjectives and adverbs
    —remember?
Modifiers
   As a general rule, modifiers need to go
    right next to the word they’re
    modifying.
   Often, we move around modifiers to
    make our sentences sound more
    dramatic.
       We often end up confusing the reader.


          We wanted our ordeal to end
                  desperately.
LIMITING MODIFIERS
   Modifiers that limit a word ( in time or
    amount ) must go directly in front of
    the word they modify. Limiting modifiers
    include the follow:

ALMOST          EVEN      HARDLY
JUST               MERELY
  NEARLY
ONLY            SCARCELY        SIMPLY
LIMITING MODIFIERS
   Notice how the meaning of the
    sentence changes with the placement
    of the modifier:

       They just want her to sing this song.
       They want just her to sing this song.
       They want her just to sing this song.
       They want her to sing just this song.
Fix the limiting modifiers by
moving them:
   I almost ate the whole pie.
       I ate almost the whole pie.

   Rex just died with his boots on.
       Rex died with just his boots on.

   Even we didn’t score once.
       We didn’t score even once.
SQUINTING MODIFIERS
       Squinting modifiers seem to modify two
        words at one time and can be confusing
        (and sometimes humorous).

        Students who follow directions consistently score
         well on tests.

         
             Are the students consistently following directions?
         
             Are the students consistently scoring well on the tests?
SQUINTING MODIFIERS
   To fix the squinter, simply move it next to
    the word you want it to modify.

       Students who consistently follow directions
        score well on tests.
       Students who follow directions score
        consistently well on tests.

            See the difference?
Fix the squinter by placing it
        correctly:
   Obese patients who take this medication
    occasionally may notice a few side effects.
       Which makes more sense?
            Are the patients taking the medication only
             occasionally?
            Are the patients occasionally noticing side effects
             from the medication?
   FIXED: Obese patients who take this
    medication may occasionally notice a few
    side effects.
Fix the squinters by placing
them correctly:
   Students who can type normally are put into
    an advanced class.
       Which makes more sense?
            Students that type with their fingers (not toes,
             hairbrushes or vacuum cleaners) are put in advance
             classes.
            Students that already know how to type are usually in an
             advanced class.
   FIXED: Students who can type are normally
    put into an advanced class.
Fix the squinters by placing
them correctly:
   The delegate who had seconded the
    motion quickly left the room.
       Which makes more sense?
           The delegate seconded the motion with great
            speed and haste.
           The delegate left the room after seconding the
            motion.
   FIXED: The delegate who seconded
    the motion left the room quickly.
Misplaced Modifiers:
   Misplaced modifiers are often phrases
    or clauses that are “out of place”.

   Much like the limiting modifier and the
    squinter, misplaced modifiers simply
    need to be moved next to the word they
    modify.
       Quite often, a misplaced modifier is
        unintentionally humorous.
Misplaced Modifiers:
   I saw a flock of geese driving to Sioux City
    yesterday.
       When did the DOT allow geese drivers’ licenses?
         
             FIXED: Driving to Sioux City yesterday, I saw a flock of
             geese.


   First-time offenders take part in discussions
    about reckless driving with counselors.
       So, the reckless driving offense only happens when
        the counselors are in the car?
         
             FIXED: First-time offenders take part in discussions with
             counselors about reckless driving.
Fix the misplaced modifiers:
   It was reported that the Italian premier had
    died on the morning newscast.
       Imagine—you’re drinking your morning coffee
        and watching the news. The interviewer is
        chatting with the Italian premier when all of a
        sudden, the premier falls over dead. How
        gruesome is that?
   FIXED: It was reported on the morning
    newscast that the Italian premier had died.
Fix the misplaced modifiers:
   Sue is part owner of a company that makes
    clothing for women based in Dallas.
       Sue isn’t going to stay in business very long if
        she’s making clothes only for women that live in
        Dallas.
   FIXED: Sue is part owner of a company
    based in Dallas that makes clothing for
    women.

Modifiers

  • 1.
    Modifiers Limiting Squinters Misplaced
  • 2.
    Modifiers  Modifiers are words, phrases and clauses that tell about nouns and verbs.  In 7th and 8th grades, we called modifiers adjectives and adverbs —remember?
  • 3.
    Modifiers  As a general rule, modifiers need to go right next to the word they’re modifying.  Often, we move around modifiers to make our sentences sound more dramatic.  We often end up confusing the reader. We wanted our ordeal to end desperately.
  • 4.
    LIMITING MODIFIERS  Modifiers that limit a word ( in time or amount ) must go directly in front of the word they modify. Limiting modifiers include the follow: ALMOST EVEN HARDLY JUST MERELY NEARLY ONLY SCARCELY SIMPLY
  • 5.
    LIMITING MODIFIERS  Notice how the meaning of the sentence changes with the placement of the modifier:  They just want her to sing this song.  They want just her to sing this song.  They want her just to sing this song.  They want her to sing just this song.
  • 6.
    Fix the limitingmodifiers by moving them:  I almost ate the whole pie.  I ate almost the whole pie.  Rex just died with his boots on.  Rex died with just his boots on.  Even we didn’t score once.  We didn’t score even once.
  • 7.
    SQUINTING MODIFIERS  Squinting modifiers seem to modify two words at one time and can be confusing (and sometimes humorous).  Students who follow directions consistently score well on tests.  Are the students consistently following directions?  Are the students consistently scoring well on the tests?
  • 8.
    SQUINTING MODIFIERS  To fix the squinter, simply move it next to the word you want it to modify.  Students who consistently follow directions score well on tests.  Students who follow directions score consistently well on tests.  See the difference?
  • 9.
    Fix the squinterby placing it correctly:  Obese patients who take this medication occasionally may notice a few side effects.  Which makes more sense?  Are the patients taking the medication only occasionally?  Are the patients occasionally noticing side effects from the medication?  FIXED: Obese patients who take this medication may occasionally notice a few side effects.
  • 10.
    Fix the squintersby placing them correctly:  Students who can type normally are put into an advanced class.  Which makes more sense?  Students that type with their fingers (not toes, hairbrushes or vacuum cleaners) are put in advance classes.  Students that already know how to type are usually in an advanced class.  FIXED: Students who can type are normally put into an advanced class.
  • 11.
    Fix the squintersby placing them correctly:  The delegate who had seconded the motion quickly left the room.  Which makes more sense?  The delegate seconded the motion with great speed and haste.  The delegate left the room after seconding the motion.  FIXED: The delegate who seconded the motion left the room quickly.
  • 12.
    Misplaced Modifiers:  Misplaced modifiers are often phrases or clauses that are “out of place”.  Much like the limiting modifier and the squinter, misplaced modifiers simply need to be moved next to the word they modify.  Quite often, a misplaced modifier is unintentionally humorous.
  • 13.
    Misplaced Modifiers:  I saw a flock of geese driving to Sioux City yesterday.  When did the DOT allow geese drivers’ licenses?  FIXED: Driving to Sioux City yesterday, I saw a flock of geese.  First-time offenders take part in discussions about reckless driving with counselors.  So, the reckless driving offense only happens when the counselors are in the car?  FIXED: First-time offenders take part in discussions with counselors about reckless driving.
  • 14.
    Fix the misplacedmodifiers:  It was reported that the Italian premier had died on the morning newscast.  Imagine—you’re drinking your morning coffee and watching the news. The interviewer is chatting with the Italian premier when all of a sudden, the premier falls over dead. How gruesome is that?  FIXED: It was reported on the morning newscast that the Italian premier had died.
  • 15.
    Fix the misplacedmodifiers:  Sue is part owner of a company that makes clothing for women based in Dallas.  Sue isn’t going to stay in business very long if she’s making clothes only for women that live in Dallas.  FIXED: Sue is part owner of a company based in Dallas that makes clothing for women.