The document discusses feedback received from the target audience of a documentary produced by the author. The feedback focused on how well the documentary followed conventions of the genre, with positive feedback on the use of cutaways and editing transitions. Audience members also felt the inclusion of the production logo made the documentary seem professional. However, feedback indicated that phone interviews included in the documentary were weak and not enjoyable to watch. Overall, the author felt the documentary was successful in engaging the target audience, while also learning areas for improvement in future productions.