Writing About People

Notes from Art and Artifact by Lynn
            Z. Bloom
Why write about people?
Know your subject.
React strongly to your subject.
Tell the truth.
Select material to reinforce your focus.
Show don’t tell.
Make private references public.
Use an appropriate pattern of
        organization.
Demonstrate why readers should
     share your attitude.
Characterization
Four Approaches to Characterization
•   Descriptive
•   Dramatic
•   Impressionistic
•   Historical or contextual
Descriptive Approach
• What are the dominant features of the
  subject’s character and temperament?
• What kind of mind does the subject have?
• How does the subject look?
• What kind of language does the subject use?
• What are the subject’s activities?
Dramatic Approach
• Show actions in dramatic scenes.
• Present thoughts in dramatic monologues.
• Use dialogue to convey dramatic relationships.
Creating Dramatic Dialogue
• Listen for the speaker’s characteristic sentence
  pattern, cadence, rhythm, and emphasis.
• Determine the general level of vocabulary:
  formal, slangish, abstract or concrete, simple or
  complex.
• Aim for the essence of the speech and apply
  adverbs or other directions: She squealed.
• Use dialect sparingly.
• Read your dialogue to another person or have
  them read it to you.
Impressionistic Approach

• Don’t elaborate
  on a single
  element, but take
  the scraps of
  information that
  you have and
  weave them into
  an impressionistic
  portrait.
Historical or Contextual Approach
• Focus on the background: familial, racial,
  national, regional, political, economic,
  religious, social, intellectual, aesthetic and
  geographic.
What is the subject’s background and heritage?
What is the subject’s physical location?
Is the subject the member of a group?
To what social class does the subject
              belong?
What are the subject’s values and way of life?
What education has this person had?
What kind of taste does the subject have?
Research your Subjects historical background.

• Use primary and
  secondary
  sources.
Sources
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/16nine/297307637/#/photos/16nine/297307637/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/proyectoeden/2197277791/#/photos/proyectoeden/2197277791/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/home_of_chaos/5227029117/#/photos/home_of_chaos/5227029117/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/bombeador/1798724650/#/photos/bombeador/1798724650/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/kk/62919400/in/photostream/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/sicoactiva/2517377776/#/photos/sicoactiva/2517377776/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/joodi/4576231036/#/photos/joodi/4576231036/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/lij/1492362/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/horizon/327483716/#/photos/horizon/327483716/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/freeparking/504144606/#/photos/freeparking/504144606/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/kk/62915869/#/photos/kk/62915869/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/maniya/404480214/#/photos/maniya/404480214/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/jule_berlin/853806749/#/photos/jule_berlin/853806749/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/salva_moreira/4850502415/#/photos/salva_moreira/4850502415/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/plasticbag/1186789736/#/photos/plasticbag/1186789736/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/babs4180/4347305428/#/photos/babs4180/4347305428/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/trojanguy/2819833430/#/photos/trojanguy/2819833430/lightbox/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/trucolorsfly/352573802/
•   http://www.flickr.com/photos/an_untrained_eye/2736804546/#/photos/an_untrained_eye/2736804546/lightbox
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  • 1.
    Writing About People Notesfrom Art and Artifact by Lynn Z. Bloom
  • 2.
  • 3.
  • 4.
    React strongly toyour subject.
  • 5.
  • 6.
    Select material toreinforce your focus.
  • 7.
  • 8.
  • 9.
    Use an appropriatepattern of organization.
  • 10.
    Demonstrate why readersshould share your attitude.
  • 11.
  • 12.
    Four Approaches toCharacterization • Descriptive • Dramatic • Impressionistic • Historical or contextual
  • 13.
    Descriptive Approach • Whatare the dominant features of the subject’s character and temperament? • What kind of mind does the subject have? • How does the subject look? • What kind of language does the subject use? • What are the subject’s activities?
  • 14.
    Dramatic Approach • Showactions in dramatic scenes. • Present thoughts in dramatic monologues. • Use dialogue to convey dramatic relationships.
  • 15.
    Creating Dramatic Dialogue •Listen for the speaker’s characteristic sentence pattern, cadence, rhythm, and emphasis. • Determine the general level of vocabulary: formal, slangish, abstract or concrete, simple or complex. • Aim for the essence of the speech and apply adverbs or other directions: She squealed. • Use dialect sparingly. • Read your dialogue to another person or have them read it to you.
  • 16.
    Impressionistic Approach • Don’telaborate on a single element, but take the scraps of information that you have and weave them into an impressionistic portrait.
  • 17.
    Historical or ContextualApproach • Focus on the background: familial, racial, national, regional, political, economic, religious, social, intellectual, aesthetic and geographic.
  • 18.
    What is thesubject’s background and heritage?
  • 19.
    What is thesubject’s physical location?
  • 20.
    Is the subjectthe member of a group?
  • 21.
    To what socialclass does the subject belong?
  • 22.
    What are thesubject’s values and way of life?
  • 23.
    What education hasthis person had?
  • 24.
    What kind oftaste does the subject have?
  • 25.
    Research your Subjectshistorical background. • Use primary and secondary sources.
  • 26.
    Sources • http://www.flickr.com/photos/16nine/297307637/#/photos/16nine/297307637/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/proyectoeden/2197277791/#/photos/proyectoeden/2197277791/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/home_of_chaos/5227029117/#/photos/home_of_chaos/5227029117/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/bombeador/1798724650/#/photos/bombeador/1798724650/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/kk/62919400/in/photostream/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/sicoactiva/2517377776/#/photos/sicoactiva/2517377776/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/joodi/4576231036/#/photos/joodi/4576231036/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/lij/1492362/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/horizon/327483716/#/photos/horizon/327483716/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/freeparking/504144606/#/photos/freeparking/504144606/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/kk/62915869/#/photos/kk/62915869/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/maniya/404480214/#/photos/maniya/404480214/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/jule_berlin/853806749/#/photos/jule_berlin/853806749/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/salva_moreira/4850502415/#/photos/salva_moreira/4850502415/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/plasticbag/1186789736/#/photos/plasticbag/1186789736/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/babs4180/4347305428/#/photos/babs4180/4347305428/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/trojanguy/2819833430/#/photos/trojanguy/2819833430/lightbox/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/trucolorsfly/352573802/ • http://www.flickr.com/photos/an_untrained_eye/2736804546/#/photos/an_untrained_eye/2736804546/lightbox /